What if young people ruled the world

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Hi, guys. It's been a while since I've posted anything on here, but I've come with great news. Next month, my first book will be published. Here's the description:

--Now that teenagers are in control, the world is perfect. No famine, no poverty, no wars. This was all because of a century-long agreement that allowed young adults to gain control over government. Now that the century-long contract has ended, the teenagers, who were named Juniors, aren’t willing to return their power, as they’ve created a Utopian world. But this is unacceptable for the older adults, or Seniors. Now that the world is perfect, the Seniors are ready to steal the glory, and they will do anything necessary to remove the Juniors from power, including killing anyone who gets in their way.

However, Alec isn’t going to allow this to happen further, because his mother was killed by one of the Seniors’ leaders, and his father was taken and viciously beaten. Alec chooses to fight—along with his mentor, Keyon, the world’s strongest and most durable human; his arrogant friend, Dmitry, a Russian, flame-throwing prodigy; and his stunningly beautiful crush, Alissyn, a medical genius—the war to keep the Seniors in their place. Although he is proficient in combat, and he has the help of his competent friends, Alec commits a gruesome act that leaves himself more shaken than those around him.--

If you'd like to keep up with its release date, go to my Facebook page, Mark O. Purifoy. I know you guys will love it.
 

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kissy faces and memes everywhere!!

unorganized parties filled with kids who dont know how to pay taxes!! lets run the world!!
 

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Congratulations and good luck!!!
 

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interesting
 

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I'm not sure what people will mock you for first: posting something after years of absence from NB using the phrase "It's been awhile since I posted here," while you have only posted 149 times; Using that post to sell your book, or the logic of the book itself. I don't know. If the world was perfect there wouldn't be conflict brewing.
 

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Too much freedom...
 

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Interesting, when i was a teenager, i used to ask myself sometimes that question. Would love to read that book.

How much will it cost? Will be available on amazon? Google play books?
 

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Haha I definitely understand your skepticism. It's been years since I've posted on here, but I visit the site more than two times a day, reading interesting forums from others. I've tried to get over Naruto, but it's too hard; even the fanfiction is wonderful. =D
 

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So people with very little experience of the world are ruling it? And the enemy are the elderly...

Well hey at least you can franchise this. Next you could make, "What if black people ruled the world", and other different versions of groups ruling the world.
 

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A psychopath governIng over society would be a better option to maintain a fair world order. Psychopaths are not ruled by emotions or conscience thoughts, but rather by logic and facts.

They will not hesitate to sacrifice thousands in order to save millions.

But to see how you've written on adolescents governing the world would be interesting.
 

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I'll buy it.
 

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Interesting, when i was a teenager, i used to ask myself sometimes that question. Would love to read that book.

How much will it cost? Will be available on amazon? Google play books?

It will be available on Amazon as an ebook for only $5.99. It will also be available in paperback for $12.99. I believe you will love it.
 

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If young people ruled the world? Nah, I think it'd probably be something akin to Lord of the Flies. Beelzebub!
 

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You couldn't have named the main character alec....Am sure you were inspired by continuum
 

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Congratulations and Story line looks good .

A psychopath governIng over society would be a better option to maintain a fair world order. Psychopaths are not ruled by emotions or conscience thoughts, but rather by logic and facts.

They will not hesitate to sacrifice thousands in order to save millions.

But to see how you've written on adolescents governing the world would be interesting.

@ bold

Let's say not only psychopath can do that :p
 
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