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Obito: Kakashi.. This is…
Kakashi: Chidori… my imperfect jutsu… I wasn’t able to work around the enemys counter… because of the intense speed you run at… But I think when combined with your sharingan… It just might work.
Obito wiping the tears from his eyes.. looking determined jumps out the cave and faces the stone ninja…
He stares down at the stone ninja intensely with his Sharingan
Stone ninja # 2: Huh? Youre still alive? Geez what does it take to kill a bunch of kids..
Rin stays behind with kakashi.
Kakashi: Obito!! Use this jutsu.. to protect your friends.
Obito(holding his hand out charging his new jutsu): Right!!
Lightning envelopes Obitos hand…Sparks flying everywhere
Stone ninja #2: This jutsu again, but the other one's using it... Well then... SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT COPY-CAT!!!
Obito gives out a loud yell and starts running towards his enemy
He charges at the stone ninja with his chidori
The scene overlaps with kakashis earlier attempt to hit the stone ninja with his chidori
Switches back to Obito and the stone ninja face to face
A Cutting sound is heard and a flock of birds fly away
Switches to Rin and Kakashi
Rin(crying): This cant be true… why does this have to happen to you…
Kakashi: Listen rin… You shouldn’t.. waste your tears on me…
Rin: But kakashi I lov…
Kakashi: Obitos in love with you… He came back for you when I tried to leave you behind.. . (starts crying) Im nothing but scum.. Now hes out there risking his life to protect you and save you again… Make sure to look out for him… (smiles) Hes quite the knucklehead… Also.. can you go get something for me…
Switches back to Obito and the stone ninja, The stone ninja has obitos hand pierced right through his heart…
He coughs blood… and then dies
Obito: I… did it..
He suddenly becomes exhausted… and drops on his knees…
Obito: Dang it, this took up a lot of chakra…
Obito jumps back into the cave alongside rin and kakashi…
Obito: Mission accomplished… Captain
Kakashi: Good… now take rin and get out of here..
Obito: Right..
Anonymous voice: And just where did you think you were headed?!?!
Obito and rin look up to see multiple stone ninjas surrounding the cave.
Obito: ?!?! You cant be serious… I used up so much chakra earlier with that last attack..
They all use earthquake slam and the place falls apart.
Kakashi: Guys! Get out of here!!
Rin hesitates but obito picks her up and jumps out of the cave looking back at his friend.
Kakashi (thinking) I guess this is it… I was able to protect my comrades to the very end… I hope they make it out ok... Were you watching…. Father..
The cave collapses
Obito and rin land in a tree
Obito in a rage charges his chidori
Rin: Stop Obito youre going to drain the rest of your chakra!!
Obito: It doesn’t matter!!! …With this Chidori… im going to protect you!!!
At a blinding speed he vanishes and rushes towards his enemies
Rin reaches in her bag and grabs minatos kunai
Thinks back to kakashi asking her to get something for her
Kakshis voice: Make sure to look out for him… Hes quite the knucklehead…
Obitos chidori fades and he begins to blackout falling in front of a stone ninja.
She throws the kunai at the enemy in front of obito.
Then as the enemy swings down his sword the scene cuts to black.
Am i…. Dead…?
Obito opens his eyes
Minato: Oh.. You're awake
Obito: SENSEI!!! But how..What happened...
Minato: The jutsu formula in this kunai knife sets a mark, allowing me to instantly teleport to its location with my Flying Raijin tequnique.
Obito: And the enemy?!
Minato: I took care of them all...
Obito: Rin! What about Rin?
Minato points at Rin looking up at the sky
Minato: Im sorry i couldn't make it in time, Obito... Rin told me everything.
Obito:Its ok sensei.. From now on Kakashi and I arent gonna let any of our comrades die... I swear it
Minato:!!?
Scene switches to a pic of Kannabi Bridge destroyed
Back in the village Minato, Rin, and Obito are seen at the memorial statue.
As they turn to leave it zooms in on the grave.
Flowers are placed right next to Sakumos white blade
Chapter end
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Chapter 2
Chidori Perfected
Obito: Kakashi.. This is…
Kakashi: Chidori… my imperfect jutsu… I wasn’t able to work around the enemys counter… because of the intense speed you run at… But I think when combined with your sharingan… It just might work.
Obito wiping the tears from his eyes.. looking determined jumps out the cave and faces the stone ninja…
He stares down at the stone ninja intensely with his Sharingan
Stone ninja # 2: Huh? Youre still alive? Geez what does it take to kill a bunch of kids..
Rin stays behind with kakashi.
Kakashi: Obito!! Use this jutsu.. to protect your friends.
Obito(holding his hand out charging his new jutsu): Right!!
Lightning envelopes Obitos hand…Sparks flying everywhere
Stone ninja #2: This jutsu again, but the other one's using it... Well then... SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT COPY-CAT!!!
Obito gives out a loud yell and starts running towards his enemy
He charges at the stone ninja with his chidori
The scene overlaps with kakashis earlier attempt to hit the stone ninja with his chidori
Switches back to Obito and the stone ninja face to face
A Cutting sound is heard and a flock of birds fly away
Switches to Rin and Kakashi
Rin(crying): This cant be true… why does this have to happen to you…
Kakashi: Listen rin… You shouldn’t.. waste your tears on me…
Rin: But kakashi I lov…
Kakashi: Obitos in love with you… He came back for you when I tried to leave you behind.. . (starts crying) Im nothing but scum.. Now hes out there risking his life to protect you and save you again… Make sure to look out for him… (smiles) Hes quite the knucklehead… Also.. can you go get something for me…
Switches back to Obito and the stone ninja, The stone ninja has obitos hand pierced right through his heart…
He coughs blood… and then dies
Obito: I… did it..
He suddenly becomes exhausted… and drops on his knees…
Obito: Dang it, this took up a lot of chakra…
Obito jumps back into the cave alongside rin and kakashi…
Obito: Mission accomplished… Captain
Kakashi: Good… now take rin and get out of here..
Obito: Right..
Anonymous voice: And just where did you think you were headed?!?!
Obito and rin look up to see multiple stone ninjas surrounding the cave.
Obito: ?!?! You cant be serious… I used up so much chakra earlier with that last attack..
They all use earthquake slam and the place falls apart.
Kakashi: Guys! Get out of here!!
Rin hesitates but obito picks her up and jumps out of the cave looking back at his friend.
Kakashi (thinking) I guess this is it… I was able to protect my comrades to the very end… I hope they make it out ok... Were you watching…. Father..
The cave collapses
Obito and rin land in a tree
Obito in a rage charges his chidori
Rin: Stop Obito youre going to drain the rest of your chakra!!
Obito: It doesn’t matter!!! …With this Chidori… im going to protect you!!!
At a blinding speed he vanishes and rushes towards his enemies
Rin reaches in her bag and grabs minatos kunai
Thinks back to kakashi asking her to get something for her
Kakshis voice: Make sure to look out for him… Hes quite the knucklehead…
Obitos chidori fades and he begins to blackout falling in front of a stone ninja.
She throws the kunai at the enemy in front of obito.
Then as the enemy swings down his sword the scene cuts to black.
Am i…. Dead…?
Obito opens his eyes
Minato: Oh.. You're awake
Obito: SENSEI!!! But how..What happened...
Minato: The jutsu formula in this kunai knife sets a mark, allowing me to instantly teleport to its location with my Flying Raijin tequnique.
Obito: And the enemy?!
Minato: I took care of them all...
Obito: Rin! What about Rin?
Minato points at Rin looking up at the sky
Minato: Im sorry i couldn't make it in time, Obito... Rin told me everything.
Obito:Its ok sensei.. From now on Kakashi and I arent gonna let any of our comrades die... I swear it
Minato:!!?
Scene switches to a pic of Kannabi Bridge destroyed
Back in the village Minato, Rin, and Obito are seen at the memorial statue.
As they turn to leave it zooms in on the grave.
Flowers are placed right next to Sakumos white blade
Chapter end
All reps and comments and criticism are appreciated
