What-If Naruto chapter 647: Sasuke's Move

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Ok, BIG chapter here. Due to Storm Darwin I’ve had no internet and this chapter has been waiting on my laptop for a while now. Please comment on what you thought of the chapter.
Quick Note: Madara had a very small sample of Hashirama’s blood when he left the village and that was how he was able to use Izanagi. But, again it was a very small sample so that’s why he wanted more; he would have died had he not injected more of Hashirama’s blood into him because that Izanagi was a piss-poor version due to how little Senju DNA he had.

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This is a fanfic that continues on from chapter 635.

() Thinking
[] Action
< >Flashback

The 5 Kage vs Madara round 2.....BEGIN!
Madara: You puny little fools actually want to try and fight me again?! It seems you somehow didn’t learn your place......[He disappears .....]
Madara: I’ll have to teach you again! [He reappears behind the Kages!] Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!
[The Kages jump out of the way of the flame. Madara forms 3 Wood clones that leap into the air after them. Onoki fires a Particle Style blast at them which takes out one but the other 2 sway aside and close in on the Kages. A mid-air taijutsu battle begins between the clones and the duo of Tsuande and Ay. Meanwhile, Mei and Gaara land back on the ground while Onoki flies high into the air.]
Gaara: How about this! Sand Style: Sand Tsunami!
[Madara merely sighs, and starts making handseals.]
Madara: Water Style: Rampaging Water!
[Madara has closed his eyes by the time all the sand has flopped down after being saturated by his attack. When he opens them, they have levelled down to EMS.]
Madara: [Pointing at his eyes] The most basic ability of the Sharingan is copying jutsu. That was proof that Tobirama has his uses. And now, Earth Style: Head Hunter Jutsu!
[Gaara is quick to react using sand to push himself and Mei up from the ground. Tsunade is jumping towards the clones and Ay has his hand on the ground in the background. When Madara tunnels up from where they were standing he then jumps towards Gaara and somersaults in midair over the Kazekage’s head, grabs his hand behind his back and elbows him to the ground. Madara starts to walk away from Gaara.]
Mei: Lava Style: Lava Globs Jutsu!
[Madara activates a Susano’o – the same as Sasuke’s new final, EMS Susano’o but blue – and holds its sword in front of itself to guard.]
Onoki: [Very high in the air](Now!)
[He just fires a Particle blast when Madara reactivates his Rinnegan and cuts it off with an Asura Path cannon shot. Onoki is blow back to the ground where Tsunade and Ay are by the backlash from the collision. Tsunade is standing over the destroyed clones. Mei and Gaara go to their peers.]
Madara: You just make this far too easy. [He jumps in front of them and they start to jump back.] Almighty Push!
[The Kages retreat is quickened and a shower of dirt is pushed up around Madara and it...starts to crackle with lightening!??]
[Ay smirks as Madara is consumed by a big electric surge!]
Madara: [Kneeling on the ground shaking] Raikage, you charged this area of ground when I was busy with the others and the Senju woman was holding off my clones. My Almighty Push caused it to spark and shock me...you no good bastard.
Onoki: This time we won’t break our promises in face of you!
Madara: All talk: I. Beat. HASHIRAMA! Stay out of the way of my plan or I’ll break you like the blubbering fools you are again!

Juubi: Rwoarrhhoaaaaaa!
[The Alliance is being instructed by Sakura and Shikamaru on where to focus their attacks. While it doesn’t yell or give any signs of being in pain, the Juubi is being forced backwards.]
[Naruto fires a Bijudama at it but it counters with one of its own which easily breaks past Naruto’s. It takes a Bijudama from B, an Amaterasu arrow from Sasuke’s final Susano’o, and a Water Style: Water Bullets Jutsu from Gamakichi to divert it away and into the air.]
[Naruto dissolves his Kurama avatar and Sasuke his Susano’o and they stand side-by-side in front of everyone else.]
Juubi: Uwahah....
[The Juubi looks at the pair in front of it and flashes back to two others, both obscured by shadows. Yet, it is visible that Naruto is reminding it of a cheery boy with a katana, and a grouchy boy with long hair and a gunbai for Sasuke.]
Juubi: HIAKAIDAKKILLAAAAAJAJ![It starts thrashing around erratically.]
[Naruto and Sasuke sport determined looks and charge forward. They skilfully dodge its attacks as they advance. To their right, very close by, Minato and Tobirama’s fight against Obito is continuing.]
Minato: Wind Style: Wind Bullets Jutsu! [They land and form small cracks on Obito’s Susano’o.]
[Naruto sports a tinge of annoyance at that attack and then trips and tumbles until he smashes against a rock.]
Ino: Why can’t he be all dynamic like his dad!
Choji: Still struggling to process that ! (I mean genuinely, Naruto the son of the 4th Hokage, how did we not se-)
[Tobirama lowers his sword to his side and looks at Minato.]
Tobirama: I used to rate idiots on a scale of 1 to my brother. I think your son might have just broken that scale 4th.
[He breathes in and dashes at Obito and clashes his sword with the sword of Obito’s Susano’o. Eventually Tobirama has to warp back to Minato when Obito swings at him with the axe.]
Tobirama: I could use a bowl of Ramen right about now.
Naruto: [Stood up and about to start going towards the Juubi again when he turns around, eyes light up by that statement.] How do you know about Ichiraku’s old man Second?
Tobirama: I knew the owner’s family and asked him to set up shop in Konoha...
Naruto: [Bowing down at Tobirama] You have idea how much I owe you!! Thank you so, so much honourable Lord Second!!
Tobirama: What....get up....fight night...Juubi [All are said through a Face Fault.]

Mifune: Naruto is quite an exuberant fellow of a ninja.
Hiruzen: Yes he always has been.
Mifune: Well enough of that, let’s go forth, 3rd Hokage.
Hiruzen: I couldn’t agree more! Now!!
[They jump into the air and bounce along rocks to the Juubi. Mifune slashes from its right shoulder to its left hip while Hiruzen enlarges Enma and bangs the beast across its head.]
[Naruto uses his hyper-speed to zoom right up to the Juubi and hits it dead centre with a Rasengan.]
Sasuke: Now, everything’s ready!!
[Naruto grabs Hiruzen and Mifune and falls back.]
Naruto: (Time to see this jutsu of his...)
Sasuke: Be gone beast....[The clouds are dark and lightening is swirling like crazy.] To the power of the thunder clap. Kirin!
[Kirin is descending for the Juubi.]
Tobirama: (He’s remarkable...he has truly surpassed the living Madara!)
[A loud boom rumbles as Kirin hits the Juubi.]

Naruto: Whew, now to release the Biju....
[Sasuke shows up behind Naruto and turns him around and cuts him with his sword!]
[Sakura, Kakashi, Sai, Choji, Ino, Tobirama, Minato, and various Alliance ninja are shown with shocked faces. Orochimaru licks his lips and Obito merely has a sly grin.]
[Kurama grunts inside him and Naruto’s shared landscape as Naruto writhes in agony, as Sasuke has pinned him down and has his hand on his stomach.]
The betrayal cuts deep!
 

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i like the last part where sasuke betray him and i fell on the ground laughing for the part of measuring on a scale from 1 to my brotherXD
 

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Stopped reading at vs 5 kage. The 5 kage have no chakra what would be the point in showing them fight madara? They're where spiral zetsu is. Not sure if this was in your prediction, but I use to see this all the time, but on people's predictions people actually think the 5 kages would say 'its payback time madara!' Or 'its time for us to get revenge!' Lol no way.

Edit: Just read, but I think you picked up the pace way too fast. I do wanna see Sasuke us Kirin again it would be stupid if he only ever uses it once. This battle would probably be a good time to.
 

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This isn't based on current chapters. It's a continuous series that follows on from chapter 635.

Thanks to everyone who's commented so far :)
 

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Ok, Im done with this fic. It has very little plot development and when it does have, it makes no sense whatsoever, It started out developing a pairing but gave up on it with no explanation and its updates of 1000 words every two months are honestly lazy.
 

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Ok, Im done with this fic. It has very little plot development and when it does have, it makes no sense whatsoever, It started out developing a pairing but gave up on it with no explanation and its updates of 1000 words every two months are honestly lazy.

Lazy eh? I agree with you. The ridiculously inconsistent schedule annoys me as well. But, this ain't a perfect world. As I thought you could sympathise with due to how long your fic's been on break, life can get in the way and it's hard to get chapters out as fast as you want. In case you didn't read the note at top, I've had the chapter but no internet for about 2 weeks. How can I be blamed for not having it out due to weather?

I haven't abandoned NaruSaku. It's the same as the manga: romance isn't the main genre, thus not every chapter is gonna focus on it. I'm sorry even you don't like how it's progressing.
 
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