What I want to happen

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"Ugh ! " , Sasuke is pinned to a rock by obito and smiles coughing up blood, "go ahead...end it " Obito smirks and charges towards Sasuke as he closes his eyes to await death.

"!"

Sasuke's eyes shoot open as Naruto hits obito from the side of the face with a Rasengan, " I wont let you die that easily Sasuke!", Obito is shot sideways and tumbles across the ground as the edo Kages rush in front of Naruto to battle obito as Naruto walks towards Sasuke

"Naruto what are you do..!" Naruto hits him across the face and Naruto glares at him, "do you understand now?" Sasuke glares back as he slowly stands to his feat and throws a punch at Naruto and there fist collide. The rest of the rookie seven look on in confusion as Kiba exclaims, "what are those two doing?!" , Sakura chuckles sadly as she looks on.

"the only way those two idiots can talk is with there fist..."

"glad we came to a understanding Teme.." , "for now at least dobe" Sasuke replys as Naruto pushes his palm onto Sasuke's chest and infuses him with Kurama's chakra and Sasuke stands beside Naruto and he sighs in annoyance,"hurry up then" "heh heh will do!"

Naruto appears before Sakura and grabs her hand and gives her some Kurama's chakra as well and the three former members of Team 7 stand beside each other once again, ready for the final assault against Madara and Obito.


Sorry if its too long :3
 

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That was really, really good.
The only part I didn't like was Naruto infusing Sasuke and Sakura with Kurama's power. Yes, he has done it before but I don't think it should happen again. Sasuke needs to defeat or help to defeat one of the villains with his own power, not with borrowed power from Naruto.
I was so disappointed that in this chapter Naruto and Sasuke did not have some sort of confrontation, even a brief one, about their different philosophies. Naruto and Sasuke need to talk.
 

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Yeah i was kinda iffy on giving them kurama's chakra again, it sorta makes more since for Sakura, if her seal goes away soon
 
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