What I can do for you.

[Skylar Knight]

I made this short poem to my girlfriend for Christmas... almost like a present! ^_^
So I hope she likes it, and I hope you guys do as well.
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What I can do for you​

A huge ocean, separating our peaceful countries.
Looking at each other from the opposite side of this little earth.
Mountains and landscapes standing proudly between us.
Yet I have the courage to yell out:
“I am with you”

I wave to the empty air, hoping you can see it.
Thinking of you by my dirty window; wishing you one day will show up.
Looking into the lonely space around me; immediately missing you.
I’m afraid you can’t hear me, yet I still want to whisper:
“One day”

Imagining you from week to week, not able to stop.
Want to talk, hug and many more things I can’t do now.
Everything I want to give you is suppressed inside of me.
So the only thing I can do right now is to say:
“I love you”​

Thanks for reading, and I hope you guys like it! Merry Christmas! ^_^​

 

[Punk Hazard]

It's good I guess, though the best poems rhyme.

 

[YowYan]

D'aaaaw isn't that sweet~

 

[Skylar Knight]

It's good I guess, though the best poems rhyme.

I don't like rhyming poems actually
Glad you liked it

 

[Brooks]

Nice

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Omg... I absolutely loved it <3 :hug:
I love you too

 

[Uxellius]

Me like it + rep mugiwara san xd

 

[November]

I miss one girl again because of your poem. I saw her last year christmas but this year i couldn't see her anymore T-T

 

[Shiina..]

Now, that's a nice poem.

 

[EggesGabo]

nice try.

 

[NOemotions]

Actually pretty good i think she will like it

 

[Skylar Knight]

Thank you guys! ^_^ I'm glad you all liked it
Poetry isn't really my thing, but my gf likes it, so I thought I might as well give it a try!

 

[Paintry4]

Why dont you make this poem song using a cute tune that really touches heart.