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Today, we'll be talking about tying up loose ends.

Do you have too many characters than you can manage? Too many irrelevant subplots that you exposed readers to for no reason? Too many secrets you made early on that you still don't have an answer to?

The simple solution is to not worry about them. Readers just like pretty pictures and will forget most of what you write within a month, so these loose ends don't really matter! Wait until the last chapter/pages of your work to slop together an explanation.

Ex 1:

"Gee Bill, I just don't know what to do with this irrelevant character I revived. What should I do?"

"How about you write off his entire character in one page by saying he overdosed on drugs?"

"Wow-Wie! Thanks, Bill!"


In some situations, however, you just can't find even the simplest and most incredibly lazy explanations ever. What do you do for these situations? Simple! Just write whatever cool image popped into your mind, and don't worry about continuity! After all, nobody cares about consistency, and even when they do, the readers are so gullible they'll just forget you never explained it.

Ex 2:

"Well Bill, I'm stuck again! I want Madara to use Susano'o, but he doesn't have his eyes! What should I do?"

"Sounds cool bruh, just write it and forget about it. Nobody will pay close enough attention lol."

"Wowzerific! Sounds good, thanks Bill!"


This concludes Chapter 1 of Kishimoto's School of Writing. Tune in for the next Chapter, "Running Out of Time to make this Week's Chapter? Re-use Old Panels for Half the Pages to Save Time!"
 

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:what:................XD brilliant! XD

INB4 Kishi protection Force shows up to explain how he can do no wrong.
 

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When can I read the sequel of this thread?
 

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Add sasusaku to the list of asspulls
 

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Susanoo doesnt require eyes its seen on 3 other occasions.

DMS Obito's PS, kakashi got(only chakra involved), Blind Itachi, Using susano while normal rinnegan.

Note: with normal rinnegan sharingan techs are not accessible.

So its kinda needs no explanation.
 

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Susanoo doesnt require eyes its seen on 3 other occasions.

DMS Obito's PS, kakashi got(only chakra involved), Blind Itachi, Using susano while normal rinnegan.

Note: with normal rinnegan sharingan techs are not accessible.

So its kinda needs no explanation.

Actually it kinda does, considering Madara was in a mad scramble to get hoth his eyes even though he was using both Sharingan and Rinnegan techs without them.
 

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Actually it kinda does, considering Madara was in a mad scramble to get hoth his eyes even though he was using both Sharingan and Rinnegan techs without them.
Well, based on other examples where no active MS eye balls were involved, along with the fact that susanoo strains body more then eyes its leads to believe that its body ability awakened by having double MS at some point, so its no longer unexplained asspull as dots got connected.

I would go as far as speculate that rinnegan abilities that dont require sight fall into same category.

Difference from sharingan to other doujutsu is that sharingan is active one.
It's extremely tied to one's sight, most of sharingan jutsus wont function w/o it while its not the same for most of rinnegan.

As for your complain about characters that were not used etc - well just like in real life not everybody gets to be important just cuz he got some panel time.
 

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Well, based on other examples where no active MS eye balls were involved, along with the fact that susanoo strains body more then eyesits leads to believe that its body ability awakened by having double MS at some point, so its no longer unexplained asspull as dots got connected.

I would go as far as speculate that rinnegan abilities that dont require sight fall into same category.

Difference from sharingan to other doujutsu is that sharingan is active one.
It's extremely tied to one's sight, most of sharingan jutsus wont function w/o it while its not the same for most of rinnegan.

As for your complain about characters that were not used etc - well just like in real life not everybody gets to be important just cuz he got some panel time.

Where on Earth was this said?
 

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Let's forget about all other writers who do the same and lets just attack Kishimoto :rolleyes: it's not like it's common in storytelling to leave things open for the readers to interpret on they own.
 

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Where on Earth was this said?

At kage summit sasuke was commenting how his body was in huge pain and he didnt even perfected susanoo.

At the same time susanoo never made eyes bleed or cause pain after being used like other techniques.
 

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At kage summit sasuke was commenting how his body was in huge pain and he didnt even perfected susanoo.

At the same time susanoo never made eyes bleed or cause pain after being used like other techniques.

Are you joking?

Susano'o made him go blind.

Also I don't recall him saying Susano'o made his body hurt.
 

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Let's forget about all other writers who do the same and lets just attack Kishimoto :rolleyes: it's not like it's common in storytelling to leave things open for the readers to interpret on they own.

When you start talking about good writing you do. The first rule of writing is that you don't allow yourself to be locked to a specific ending. You plan, but you allow the story to write itself, because the ending you get often isn't what you originally planned. Kishi has written himself into corners and instead of dealing with them he removes the walls, which is another writing sin. Like the OP stated, Kishi introduced things only to never explain or expound on, which is another writing sin. Don't introduce it if you don't plan to use it, including characters. Naruto has flashes of brilliance and it has a mediocre moments as well.
 

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Are you joking?

Susano'o made him go blind.

Also I don't recall him saying Susano'o made his body hurt.

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MS usage overall is what causes blindness, it wasnt susanoo. Susanno doesnt cause immediate pain to the eyes like amaterasu or tsukuyomi.
 
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