WeavingDestiny 10: Protecting the Crown of Australis

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A glimpse from Chapter 9:


So, we left off where a man named Saburo showed up before Ruirein and Kakashi. From the way he talked to Kakashi, it seemed that they have met before. Quoting Saburo “Trying to take back what you could not protect eh, Hatake - Kakashi?!”

In the later part of the chapter, Saburo appears to be Ruirein’s uncle but, he just called her Arashi and asked her about a certain mission - The Crown of Australis. Aside from that, he somewhat told Arashi that Kakashi was responsible for the death of someone she loved dearly.

Another thing, it also turned out that Capt. Riusu is actually a shinobi named Ryu in disguise. Now, didn’t anyone ever noticed? What’s with his transformation technique that has kept him well hidden?

Well, this time, I haven’t the time to convert it to a dialogue version anymore. Besides, this one’s just short so might as well just keep it this way.

Have a good time!


WEAVING DESTINY 10: Protecting the Crown of Australis

Enraged with what she just heard, Arashi charges toward Kakashi with a full intent to kill.

“Earth Element: Mudflow River! - - Now, Solar flares heat-up!”

A flood of mud rushed toward Kakashi burning like lava as Arashi infused chakra driven solar flares into it.

“Water Element: Flushing Waves!”

As the solar-flare-infused-mud-river rushed toward Kakashi, he takes off from where he stands and countered with a water technique. The solar flares cooled down as water waves flushed out the burning heat. To disperse of the mud Kakashi called in another jutsu.

“Water Element: Water Whirlpool!”

Mud and water whirled in between them but before it vanished to a splash, Saburo called out a special technique while Arashi applied Earth Style: Hide like a mole technique to go underground.

“Ice crystal spears!”

Saburo applied an ice crystal technique on Kakashi’s water whirlpool. From the spinning whirlpool, water breached from the whirling motion and were transformed into spear heads made of concentrated ice crystals, all flying off to his direction. Kakashi hopped, waved, counteracted with his kunai as he dodges one ice crystal spear heads after the other.

After a few seconds, Saburo performed another hand seals which allowed him to gather the ice crystal spear heads together to form one big spear head.

“Spear drill!”

Saburo called out his jutsu and the smaller ice crystal spear heads whirled about each other creating a giant drill towards Kakashi standing about 10 meters away from him.

“I got you now!”

Arashi surprisingly emerged from under Kakashi charging with her sai. Sensing her approach from the underground, Kakashi quickly waved a meter away from her to avoid her sai targeted to his throat. He eventually rushed back to her realizing that Arashi now stands in between Saburo’s spear drill and him.

‘Damn it! – this man’s careless!’ He cursed as he dashed back toward Arashi.

“Out of the way!” Kakashi exclaimed and took her with one arm as the other charged a large amount of lightning to crush the ice crystal spear.

“Raikiri!” Lightning flares met up with the drilling spear causing a huge explosion sending trees, rocks, dusts, and pieces of ice into a blast.


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“What just happened, ‘ttebayo?!” Naruto jerked in the middle of his reasoning with Sakura. Everyone was alarmed as they see a large explosion of lightning, 500 meters from where they have camped.

“Kakashi-taichou’s Raikiri!” Sai said and quickly drew a large eagle for the three of them to hop on. “No! – It’s something else! C’mon! Let’s head on to that direction. He must be in a battle!”

‘Hmn, looks like Saburo is engaged in that battle, too.’ Ryu, in the person of Captain Riusu said to himself. ‘I must proceed to plan B now.’

“Fire Element: Fire bullets!” Ryu shot fire bullets to Sai’s bird turning it back to ink.

“Oh shiiiiit!!!” Sakura cried as the three of them fall off.

“Hold on Sakura-chan!” Naruto dived in to catch up with Sakura, bracing on to her, they fall spinning toward the ground.

“Puff!” Goes out Naruto’s shadow clone that landed on his back to break Sakura’s fall.

“Puff!” Goes out the other one, breaking Sai’s fall.

“Ugh!” Naruto landed on his own back hard on the ground.

“You’re not going anywhere!” Ryu bellowed and swiftly shifted to Skye’s side.

“Skye-sama!” Naruto warned Skye but it was too late.

“Stand back, everyone!” Bracing his arms around Skye’s neck, Ryu warned the rest of the troop who have started coming on to him to stop.

“Now, where is the key to the Crown of Australis?!” He questioned Skye.

“Capt, what are you doing?” asked one of the troopers.

“Huh! One naïve dumb ass! – Kai (Release)!” Ryu released his jutsu and an exhausted dead body dropped off from him as he revealed his self. It was Capt Riusu – dead and all consumed.

“I knew there were something else you guys, wanted!” Skye gritted in anger through his teeth.

“I will never give you the key!”

‘Damn it! Where is Ruirein? Is she with Kakashi-sama in that fight? I’m sure the key is safe with her. I just hope Kakashi-san will help her with it.’ Skye said in his thoughts.

“Rasengan!”

“Ghack!” Thrown off about 10 meters away, Ryu gasped crashing with his back on a tree when Naruto strikes from behind him. Naruto had managed to stay out of his sight during their fall. He let another shadow clone fake out his landing making everyone think that he had no time to make a shadow clone to break his fall.

“I got you Skye-sama!” Sai dashed forward to keep Skye from being thrown off, too.

“Sha-naa-rooo!” Sakura plunged a straight punch into the earth sending out pillars of earth right into where Ryu crashed.

Seeing the pillars of hard earth coming off one after the other from Sakura’s blow, Ryu jumped back to his feet and kicked off from the last pillar that was suppose to give him a blow.

“Fire Style: Fire Dragon Flame Missile!” In mid-air, Ryu sent off a long stream of fire from his mouth to where everyone else is. The troop scampered out and ran for their lives while Naruto, Sakura, Sai, and Skye took cover from behind a boulder.

“Damn it!” Naruto cursed. “He’s using fire and none of us is water! My wind jutsus will just make his stronger! Damn! Damn! Damn!”

“How should we take him down, then?” Skye asked and searched the three of them for answers.

“Look,” He said impatiently against their blank looks, “we need to get to Ruirein. We have to let her know what these men are looking for. Ruirein has the key to the Crown of Australis!”

“What?!” Sakura replied.

“In that case, Ruirein and Kakashi-taichou are in that battle...” Sai said.

“Just what is this Crown of Australis?” Naruto asked.

“The Crown of Australis - believed to have immersed from the stars, handed down to the land of Clovers by the gods, contains unknown powers that might even destroy the entire universe. One of the abilities that men pursue it for is its abilities to extract power from any powerful being, contain it in the crown and transfer it to anyone who puts it into his head. The key is kept in the land of Yellow Spring and can only be passed on to a being that possesses both an extraordinary ability and a pure heart. After my mother died, we never thought that one more mortal will pass the test and that is Ruirein.”

“In that case, we need to get out of here as quickly as we can and get to Ruirein and Kakashi-sensei!!” Naruto stood up and jumped out of the hiding to face Ryu.

“Taju, Kagebunshin no Jutsu!”

A mass number of Naruto’s shadow clone surrounded Ryu and attacked him at once. While Ryu was busy puffing out Naruto’s shadow clone, Naruto, Sakura, Sai, and Skye escaped and headed to where Kakashi and Ruirein are.


END OF CHAPTER 10​


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Woots!!! Great work of Nikkou! Even though I skip your chapter 9 (Sorry abt that :eek:) I realized your story is truly epic! I actually read everything in this chapter, and you know what? Your work is totally like another of Masashi's work. Just that his work is in manga/comic form while yours is in novel kind.

I really like this chapter...Nice action you have there, and wow you are really creative! You able to bring up an idea of making a custom jutsu. The most thing I like about this chapter, is about the crown of Australis! I can't imagine how powerful it is...and now I know why in the first place Rurein get attacked by those shinobies.

Im speechless, and I can't say what that makes me in speechless because they are too many! Your work is really astonish.

You deserve a reputation from me ;D
 

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hehe naruto got to hug sakura xd

fabulous writing style and content, as always... and i concur with almost everything said by FallenUchiha :D
 

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Woots!!! Great work of Nikkou! Even though I skip your chapter 9 (Sorry abt that :eek:) I realized your story is truly epic! I actually read everything in this chapter, and you know what? Your work is totally like another of Masashi's work. Just that his work is in manga/comic form while yours is in novel kind.

I really like this chapter...Nice action you have there, and wow you are really creative! You able to bring up an idea of making a custom jutsu. The most thing I like about this chapter, is about the crown of Australis! I can't imagine how powerful it is...and now I know why in the first place Rurein get attacked by those shinobies.

Im speechless, and I can't say what that makes me in speechless because they are too many! Your work is really astonish.

You deserve a reputation from me ;D
Skipped chapter 9? - well, I guess that's okay since I have a glimpse of it for everyone to be able to cope up - so don't worry. Though if you want to get more details of the secret behind Ruirein, you can read back. LOL!

Thank you for reading though, and am not really that good, you know. Just trying hard. xd:D

hehe naruto got to hug sakura xd

fabulous writing style and content, as always... and i concur with almost everything said by FallenUchiha :D
Naruto gets to hug Sakura?:eek: LOL! I did not realized that...xd:D

The battle continues to chapter 11. I hope I would be able to carry out the scene.
 

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this was really good, as all of them seem to be. theres one (small and it should bother you) thing that urks me some...cursing is just not my forte. i hate it a lot but if you want you can still put them in the story...but if you keep them to a minimum that would be great. thanks for understanding! ~HinataR
 

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Fabulous!
I like the fighting part,each and everything is well detailed,but I was hoping for more secrets to unfold:(Never mind this chapter is great and Arashi is great too:yI hope you can make a beautiful sketch of her:Dxd And in the last Keep up the good work.
 

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this was really good, as all of them seem to be. there's one (small and it should bother you) thing that urks me some...cursing is just not my forte. i hate it a lot but if you want you can still put them in the story...but if you keep them to a minimum that would be great. thanks for understanding! ~HinataR
Hehe - the cursing, I haven't really thought it would bother some since I hear a lot of it in the anime :eek:...thanks for noticing. :)

Fabulous!
I like the fighting part,each and everything is well detailed,but I was hoping for more secrets to unfold:(Never mind this chapter is great and Arashi is great too:yI hope you can make a beautiful sketch of her:Dxd And in the last Keep up the good work.
I had a hard time describing the fight, you know. And to think that it had to continue to chapter 11 - weeeh - I don't know if I can carry it through. As for the sketch, yeah I'm still trying to make a new one xd:D - its really difficult...
 

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I had a hard time describing the fight, you know. And to think that it had to continue to chapter 11 - weeeh - I don't know if I can carry it through. As for the sketch, yeah I'm still trying to make a new one xd:D - its really difficult...
Well it shouldn't be a problem for you since your are an excellent writer and your work is the best, just believe in yourself and unleash your imagination and you will find the way automatically. :hint:And don't worry about the sketch,I'm sure you can make a good one.;)
 

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Woots!!! Great work of Nikkou! Your work is totally like another of Masashi's work. Just that his work is in manga/comic form while yours is in novel kind.

I really like this chapter...Nice action you have there, and wow you are really creative! You able to bring up an idea of making a custom jutsu. The most thing I like about this chapter, is about the crown of Australis! I can't imagine how powerful it is...and now I know why in the first place Rurein get attacked by those shinobies.

Im speechless, and I can't say what that makes me in speechless because they are too many! Your work is really astonish.

You deserve a reputation from me ;D
Once again I agree to the fullest in everything you say dude:p Did you skip chapter 9 litterally or just skipped commenting?:|:confused::p

Anyway this story feels so real. The animators could easily make a filler arc out of this one, a good filler arc that is:p
It kinda reminds me of a mix between the 3 tails filler arc and the 6 tails filler arc with Arashi reminding me of Guren and the crown kinda reminds me of the plan in the 6 tail arc. To get intens powers without Madara or anyone involving themself:p The consept of the crown is so true to Naruto and I must say that I love it:D;)

So he knows Ice jutsus eh? Related to Haku maybe?:p

And you will once again get a rating and Thank you from me;)

Only one thing that have bugged me a little for the three last chapters though and that is the two word "his self" and "hopped" Isn't it supposed to be "himself"? And i searched up "hopped" and it looks like it meant to be filled with energy/power, but it seems like you are trying to mean jumped? Or is it just me that is a little confused?xd:p

11 next;)
 
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Once again I agree to the fullest in everything you say dude:p Did you skip chapter 9 literally or just skipped commenting?:|:confused::p

Anyway this story feels so real. The animators could easily make a filler arc out of this one, a good filler arc that is:p
It kinda reminds me of a mix between the 3 tails filler arc and the 6 tails filler arc with Arashi reminding me of Guren and the crown kinda reminds me of the plan in the 6 tail arc. To get intens powers without Madara or anyone involving themself:p The consept of the crown is so true to Naruto and I must say that I love it:D;)

So he knows Ice jutsus eh? Related to Haku maybe?:p

And you will once again get a rating and Thank you from me;)

Only one thing that have bugged me a little for the three last chapters though and that is the two word "his self" and "hopped" Isn't it supposed to be "himself"? And i searched up "hopped" and it looks like it meant to be filled with energy/power, but it seems like you are trying to mean jumped? Or is it just me that is a little confused?xd:p

11 next;)
I had to come up with a more challenging motive for Saburo taking over the two countries. Looking for a place they can call their own is just so lame. Why? because of what's in chapter 12.

Yeah, it has to be himself instead of his self and should have been "jumped back to his feet" instead of hopped. I just didn't feel like using those at that time. I was a little confused with the portrayal and have not asked anyone. Changed it though - thanks. :)

11 next ha? You're stressing yourself. :eek:
 

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I had to come up with a more challenging motive for Saburo taking over the two countries. Looking for a place they can call their own is just so lame. Why? because of what's in chapter 12.

Yeah, it has to be himself instead of his self and should have been "jumped back to his feet" instead of hopped. I just didn't feel like using those at that time. I was a little confused with the portrayal and have not asked anyone. Changed it though - thanks. :)

11 next ha? You're stressing yourself. :eek:
Yeah I see, but you worked it out perfectly as expected;):p

Oh okay:p I noticed it in this one and the two previous I think. Not sure before that, but i also noticed "his self" in 11. Didn't really bother too much about it though, but I just thought it sounded a little strange:p
 

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Yeah I see, but you worked it out perfectly as expected;):p

Oh okay:p I noticed it in this one and the two previous I think. Not sure before that, but i also noticed "his self" in 11. Didn't really bother too much about it though, but I just thought it sounded a little strange:p
I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. :)
 

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I thought this was the best chap thus far it was filled with action and a lot of things were discovered. Some more to the plot has been revealed and I like it. I also like the brief summaries you post before you are to being reading. It is very thoughtful as it is helpful ;) It seems as though this chap set the base for which your story will feed on from now on ^.^ Looking forward to the next one! ;)
 
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