Weaving Destiny Prologue: An Unexpected Invasion

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Severed by Fate, Entwined by Destiny.​
Fate brought them together, apparently fate pulled them apart. Her loss continued to haunt him as she was not the first. How many more will he loose for him to prove how much he has learned about the value of friends, team, and teamwork? Is gaining some and losing more, his destiny? He lost two of his comrades to death, her and another student to fate.

How will he ever get them back? They are getting traces of the latter, but what about her? Everyone else believes that she died years ago. Should he continue to believe on what others have stopped believing? If destiny is what we make of ourselves, will he ever find a way to weave destiny and counter fate to tie them up together? Or is his destiny already woven and done to lose everyone close to him?


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PROLOGUE: An Unexpected Invasion

“Keep them surrounded, don’t let them get in the palace!”

Captain Riusu commanded his lieutenants as they gather around three men attacking the palace gates.

They were no ordinary men, dashing towards the palace gates with great speed, and penetrating the palace grounds in no time. In a minute the watchmen spotted them a few miles away and now, in no time, the landscape surrounding the palace gates is a mess. Fire burned down every defense structure that they had. The Iron gates crumpled to the ground as one of the oppressors used some technique to bring it down.

“Captain, the enemies are no ordinary men!” Lieutenant Argos, leader of the Northern Troop scurried down to the captain for a report.

“They have some sort of magic or whatever they call it that allows them to manipulate nature. They melted the palace gates with fire using their bare hands. Bringing them down is not that easy!”

“I do not know what kind of being these creatures are, Lieutenant.” Captain Riusu answered in disbelief. “I have never seen anyone like them before. Nevertheless, we have to get near them and know what their purpose is of coming here.”

“Yes, Sir!”

“Come on, let’s try to get near one of them.”

Both men rushed to the center but halted when arrows and spears come flying off to where the three men stood. The King’s Arrowmen have come to reinforce them.

“Impossible!” Cried the Liuetenant leading the west troop. “None of our arrows are getting through!”

“That man in the middle, Lieutenant Weiss, is - - like - - blowing our arrows away from them!” exclaimed one arrowman as he witnessed their arrows being blown off by a wind that whirled around the three of them.

“Swordsmen, attack!” Called Lieutenant Weiss and immediately after the call, the Lieutenants heading the Southern and Eastern Troops called the same and all 300 men came rushing towards the center, the Lieutenants on the lead.

“Ryu, Shin, let’s get this over with. This bunch of pests is keeping us from completing our mission.” Saburo, the leader of the three men reminded his comrades of their purpose.

“Ah, that’s right.” Sighed the man in the middle, Ryu.

“Let’s finish them all off!” Shin eagerly said.

“No, they are not ninjas, after all. It will just be a waste of energy if we do that.” Saburo disagreed.

But before Saburo could finish his instructions, the lieutenants leading the east, west, and south troops rushed to them with their swords held high.

“Earth Style, root-binding technique!” Shin did some hand signs as the three Lieutenants rushed on them.

Shin sped up to meet them and applied a technique that called out roots from the ground and bound the three Lieutenants all together.

“Perhaps, we could give out a few lessons?” She looked at Saburo for approval as she held all three lieutenants together high up in the air with the help of those roots that sprouted out from the ground.

The soldiers, after seeing how their leaders were held high, ceased from coming on to them.

“Who are you and what is your purpose?” Captain Riusu, Finally able to come close enough to be heard, asked with an interrogative voice.

“That is none of your business!" Saburo raged back. "Put them away, Shin!” he continued with a pissed off voice, instructing Shin to put down the three lieutenants.

“Uggh!” She grunted and threw off the three men haplessly.

“Ryu! Get as in quickly!” Saburo commanded with a hard voice.

“Ah!” Ryu replied snaply.

“Wind Style, tornado snake technique!”

Ryu did some hand signs and a tornado was formed. After doing some stances, he made it crawl like a snake sweeping off Captain Riusu and the rest of the soldiers away, giving them a clear path to the palace’s entrance door. As the three men penetrated the palace, everything went by so fast that it was too late for them to realize what their purpose really was.

END OF PROLOGUE​
 
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Hey, my first time reading your FF, i thought i would start from the beginning. So far i really like your writing style and how you encompass the action. Very nicely written i look forward to reading the next chapter of the story.
 

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I finally found the time to read your fanfic. The synopsis is really interesting. Hmmn, that was wise of you to put that in. A synopsis is like an overview of the story, right? I have a feeling that this is going to be one hell of a story for Kakashi, ha? :cool:
I'll check the next chap. ;)
 

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I finally found the time to read your fanfic. The synopsis is really interesting. Hmmn, that was wise of you to put that in. A synopsis is like an overview of the story, right? I have a feeling that this is going to be one hell of a story for Kakashi, ha? :cool:
I'll check the next chap. ;)
Yes, the synopsis is some sort of an overview. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Great.like the way of your writing.totally professional.
Thank you. I hope you would read through the rest. :)
 
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