WEAVING DESTINY FOUR: A Mysterious Encounter

[Michael92]

Hmmn, no. It's putting the battle into words - dialogue or narrative - that's making it hard for me. If only I could draw then that would have been easier, don't you think so?

100% agreed I have no idea how to put up a 6 vs. 6 battle next timexd

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

100% agreed I have no idea how to put up a 6 vs. 6 battle next timexd

I'm sure you can do it as good or even better!

Anywayz, I have chapter 5 out awhile ago. See all there!

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[BluePhenix]

nice, keep it going!!

 

[Dastan]

Is that a ghost? LOL! I could imagine Naruto's usual reaction. You've done a good job keeping the characters as they are. And, I'm quite curios as to how Kakashi is acting..mmm...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

This chap revealed a very mysterious yet familiar character. I’d still say it is Ruirein but why would she act so obscure if it is her? That does indeed puzzle my brain lol I love the way you express these characters feelings/actions. It is very detailing and feels very real. The "detailed version" as you like to call it is like novel style but it is very well thought up and is why I like reading this version better because it is different from the usual dialogue Fanfictions ​