WEAVING DESTINY CHAPTER TWO: Skye and the Twin Sais

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Hi, this chapter may kinda be boring since you won’t be seeing any Naruto characters here. However, this chapter will help you meet the characters that our Naruto characters will be meeting soon. You’ve met some of them in the Prologue though.

WEAVING DESTINY CHAPTER TWO: Skye and the Twin Sais

“Check your stance, stand firm, and keep your balance!” Ruirein (read as Ru-wi-rin) warned while advancing a strike through the head with twin sais at hand.

“On guard, Skye! Never keep your eyes off your opponent!” Ruirein continued. “Stay, focused!”

“Ugh!” Skye replied with determination as he blocked Ruirein’s attacks with his long sword.

Advancing forward, stepping backward, exchanging attacks and covering every space that they could on the voyager ship that would take them to the Fire Country, Skye and Ruirein continued to exchange attacks not wanting to be defeated by the other.

Ruirein have been training Skye Nieville, the Prince of the Clover Country, for this journey. They knew that crossing the Fire Country to get to the Yellow Country means danger.

“Got you!” Skye exclaimed with excitement as he pinned Ruirein down to one of the columns that hold the ship’s sails.

“Really?!” And Ruirein disappeared.

“A shadow clone! No fair Ruirein!!!” Skye angrily shouted realizing that he pinned a fake Ruirein. He is just an ordinary person with no ninjutsu skills. His country knew nothing about ninjutsu until they came to pass the Fire Country.

“Kuchihiro-ge Kako Sanbon Shurikken!” Ruirein reappeared and threw off three shurikens flaring with solar energy and twirling around one over the other. [Kuchihiro-ge Kako Sanbon Shurikken: Three flaring shurikens]

“Arrrghhhh!!!!, play fair Ruirein!!!” Skye frustratingly exclaimed as he dodged the shurikens.

But Ruirein did not listen and instead continued to throw more. The shurikens were fed with Ruirein’s solar energy that each strike burns the target with the heat.

After three shuriken attacks, Ruirein caught up with Skye.

“We will be battling with Ninjas, Skye” Ruirein firmly whisphered to Skye’s ears while holding three shurikens against his throat.

“You can’t go running about and yell - - No fair using ninjutsu ****ing ninjas!” She continued with a hard firm voice that commands him to never surrender.

Skye could feel the heat from those energy fed shurikens that he started composing his self again.

“Remember your last trip to the Yellow Country?” Ruirein said, reminding Skye of that tragic incident.

Three years ago, Skye, his father, and his mother went to the Yellow Country to arrange his marriage with Princess Tyra. When they crossed the Fire Country, they were attacked by Ninjas as they were nearing their destination. Ruirein, who just happened to pass-by, helped them. But, Skye’s father and mother were killed. Ruirein then accompanied Skye up to the Yellow Country’s Palace. Skye’s country does not have any ninjas at all and seeing what Ruirein can do he asked Ruirein to train him and become his personal bodyguard.

“Your only weapon against them, Skye is your speed and your determination. Control your emotions.” Ruirein continued, snapping Skye back to present.

“Anger will only bring you more harm.”

“I understand.” Skye replied sincerely and with some moves that Ruirein taught him, he slipped off from being held captive, took hold of the arms that imprisoned him, and pinned Ruirein to the wall pressing her body with his.

“Got you.” With a sly grin, he whispered gently into her ears as they’ve switched places now.

“Humph!” Ruirein grunted. “You know that won’t be enough, Skye.” She softly continued.

“Ah,” Skye daunted and let her go.

“Okay, you win. I just let you because you are a lady. And a really pretty one, too.” Skye said childishly.

“That won’t work, either” Ruirein replied, twisting her lips.

“Here, take this.” Ruirein, took out her sais and handed them to Skye.

“B-But…”

“No buts, Skye. You will need them more than I do. Put them together, point the blades to the sun, and see what happens.”

Skye attached the sais together. Each has symbols that are custom made to serve as their connectors. Once fastened together, he pointed the twin sais to the sun and it turned into a long sword flaring with solar energy.

“Those sais were crafted mixed with my own blood, Skye. It’s my blood in it that reacts with a direct hit from the sun feeding it with solar energy. From now on, the twin sais can only be separated with my death.

Skye could only look at Ruirein with awe. Fear crept through his spine as the thought of seeing those twin sais separated flashed before his mind. He gulped and took a deep breath knowing that he would not want that to happen to Ruirein.

Ruirein just smiled and continued.

“With that, you can slice through any ninjas and weaken their chakra, even up to killing them instantly.”

“Awesome!” Skye replied with amazement. That was a relief.

“Should I try it on you?” Skye teasingly thrusts the sword to Ruirein knowing that no matter how fast he moves, she can always dodge it.

“Huh?!” His eyes were filled with intense shock as he saw blood dripping down the floor. He looked up to Ruirein’s face and shakingly asked “W-w-hy didn’t you dodge?”

Ruirein just stared back gently at him as tears fall down her eyes. His heart beat faster and faster every second that his ears felt like it had drums in it. He could barely hear what she was saying.

“M-my purpose in life is through, Skye. But yours has just begun. Live on and be happy.” She struggled to speak despite losing breath.

Skye drew her close in to his arms as she went down slowly. She smiled for the last time and closed her eyes.

“Nooo! You are a cheater Ruirein! Why didn’t you dodge? Don’t you dare leave me!” Skye cried angrily as he clutched her closely to his body.

“Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Hihihihi…” Ruirein laughed and giggled as she stands on the cabin’s roof watching over Skye.

“Arrrghhhh!!!!” Skye exclaimed with anger as Ruirein’s shadow clone disappeared from his arms.

“THAT WAS NOT A FUNNY PRANK, RUIREIN! NOOT AATT AAALLLL!!!!”

“I got you again, didn’t I? hihihihhihi…” She continues to giggle over the red faced Prince who didn’t have any other choice but to leave.


He'll never win against her! He angrily left. Ever since he got Ruirein to train him and protect him, she never beings or ends anything seriously. And no matter how hard he begs for her to change, she never does. She's an incurable prankster!

Skye stepped in to his cabin annoyed and irritated not only with Ruirein but with his self, too. He knew that she always have pranks up her sleeves and yet he continues to fall for it. What’s more exasperating is that she enjoys every minute that he gets annoyed.

‘Grrrrrrr!” Skye roared silently to relieve him of his anger. But Ruirein was a person that was not really hard to get along with. Where she’s from was still a mystery to him but he never bothered to ask her about it. He immediately trusted her his life the first time he saw her. And with all that she has done for him, he is looking forward to a time where she could repay her. Even if it means his life.

As Skye’s figure disappeared into the shadows of his cabin, Ruirein stopped laughing, turned somber and took a deep breath.

She laid on her back, staring at the bright blue sky thinking about how Skye reacted over her prank. She never really expected him to act that way. After telling him that her death means the breaking up of the twin sais, he still mourned for her. Have he gone stupid that he didn’t notice that or was he really just so afraid to lose her?

She have only been with him for three years and there are so many things that he doesn’t know about her yet. Things that even her could not understand.

Ruireins' 8-inch Twin Sais​
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Ruirein's Twin Sais merged together turns into a 2-ft long Solar Blade Sword​
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I didnt like this one as much........but i thought it would have been awesome if you had killed off ruiren...it would have been shocking to off a major character so early in the story.

But why i said i didnt enjoy it as much is because there was a lot of explaining...thats cause we didnt know any of the characters...and its understandable its not like you could just show us a diagram like they do in manga...anyways i really do like the story please continue
 
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I didnt like this one as much........but i thought it would have been awesome if you had killed off ruiren...it would have been shocking to off a major character so early in the story.

But why i said i didnt enjoy it as much is because there was a lot of explaining...thats cause we didnt know any of the characters...and its understandable its not like you could just show us a diagram like they do in manga...anyways i really do like the story please continue
Hehehe, just as I thought. A really kinda boring chapter. So, how would you have wanted to get to know these unknown characters? It really is hard for the readers to imagine them due to the lack of illustrations. [I wish I could draw :) ] Too bad, you wanted Ruirein dead, though. Hehehehe...

Don't worry, next chapter, we're going back to the characters we knew. :)

So, who else wants Ruirein dead? :D
 
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Pretty good:) Not as good as the first one, but still awsome:D You handled chapter 2 waaaay better than i did as my chapter two was no good at all in my opinion:p

Keep going, looking forward to see how the story develoup. I got a feeling that Naruto and Konoha aren`t the main guys of this story, am i right?:)
 

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Pretty good:) Not as good as the first one, but still awsome:D You handled chapter 2 waaaay better than i did as my chapter two was no good at all in my opinion:p

Keep going, looking forward to see how the story develoup. I got a feeling that Naruto and Konoha aren`t the main guys of this story, am i right?:)
Can't tell...my lips are sealed - oh rather, my fingers are sealed...hehehehe..
 

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Hi ^^'
Well this chapter was quite long ... :rolleyes: But, it was a major improvement over the previous one !

Pros : I liked how you finally displayed a characters emotions, brilliant!

Cons : Your storyline seems to be heading to a direction I've seen somewhere ? Oh yeah, Zabuza and Haku saga ! How you displayed Skye : similar to the little boy in the Haku/Zabuza period, how his parents had been killed ... I might be totally off and your story might take a unexpected turn but I might also be right ! So just check that out and try to remove any similarities between your FanFic and Naruto ! :D


Hope that helped :)

Can't wait for the next chapter :rolleyes:
 

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this one a good one too lol
Thank you for reading :)

great chapter. There werent any grammar mistakes that I noticed. Please continue to keep up the good work.
I'm glad you're checking the details :)

Let's wait for the next chapter. I am pretty sure it would be a great story to tell ones they meet with Team Kakashi. :)
I sure hope it is :)

Hi ^^'
Well this chapter was quite long ... :rolleyes: But, it was a major improvement over the previous one !

Pros : I liked how you finally displayed a characters emotions, brilliant!

Cons : Your storyline seems to be heading to a direction I've seen somewhere ? Oh yeah, Zabuza and Haku saga ! How you displayed Skye : similar to the little boy in the Haku/Zabuza period, how his parents had been killed ... I might be totally off and your story might take a unexpected turn but I might also be right ! So just check that out and try to remove any similarities between your FanFic and Naruto ! :D

Hope that helped :)

Can't wait for the next chapter :rolleyes:
I see that you traveled from the Synopsis of this story up to chapter 3. :) And you have your tips out there, too. Thank you for keeping up with the details. These will really, really help.
 

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Absolutely wonderfull,sorry for not commenting before,Nikkou Arashi i see you dont have a signature,want me to make one with Kushina?just send me a message
 

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Absolutely wonderfull,sorry for not commenting before,Nikkou Arashi i see you dont have a signature,want me to make one with Kushina?just send me a message
Thanks. Yeah, I'm not good with those stuffs. I just borrow pics from the Internet for my avatar, profile pics, and all. I really love that Kushina sig I put in though because it's so sincere and courteous. But please, YES, make me one... Hehehehehe... :)
 

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So, how would you have wanted to get to know these unknown characters? It really is hard for the readers to imagine them due to the lack of illustrations. [I wish I could draw :) ] Too bad, you wanted Ruirein dead, though. Hehehehe...

Don't worry, next chapter, we're going back to the characters we knew. :)

So, who else wants Ruirein dead? :D
hmm I think it was actually a good way to show the basis for the characters and how they are as person. Ruirein the prankster yet protective bodyguard. And Skye which looks like he has lived a protected life and wants to continue living like that.
 
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