[Romance] We Love, We Toss

[Waindo]

I only wish you everything you can have,
All dreams which on your own you can’t beat.
Us holding hands where people stare with tongues,
Enchanting harder when and if we meet.

I contemplate and grieve at time we could have,
You would be my Queen and me your Prince;
I would creep in your mind with teeth,
And violate your labyrinth.

The entrance would writhe for show I know,
It's elegance perfumes.
The middle of it would be a hit,
Until the ending, so obtuse.

Off-track, adrift, so fu**ing lost,
In these deceitful barriers tall,
Our minds, our hearts, we love, we toss,
Pretense, substance,
Our all.​

 

[Fair Game]

Didn't like it much, very odd choice of words.

 

[Waindo]

Didn't like it much, very odd choice of words.

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[Power Bottom]

Lovely poem as always <3

 

[Waindo]

Lovely poem as always <3

Sure, thx. Shame I'm posting it on such a sad and ignorant forum like this.

 

[~Ethereal~]

It's nice.

 

[Waindo]

It's nice.

Alllrighty.

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[Fair Game]

Sure, thx. Shame I'm posting it on such a sad and ignorant forum like this.

All forms of art are subjective to criticism and different opinions.

Simply because we dont agree doesnt make others ignorant. It just means your "art" doesnt transcend the mass, making it more likely to be criticized.

Art has multiple palates, yours simply didnt attract any of them.

 

[Waindo]

All forms of art are subjective to criticism and different opinions.

Simply because we dont agree doesnt make others ignorant. It just means your "art" doesnt transcend the mass, making it more likely to be criticized.

Art has multiple palates, yours simply didnt attract any of them.

The comment was not directed to you, nor it was connected to my poetry, which does transcend the mass of ppl I'm satisfied with, and is awesome.

 

[Fair Game]

The comment was not directed to you, nor it was connected to my poetry, which does transcend the mass of ppl I'm satisfied with, and is awesome.

My comment was simply from a general perspective not from a personal direct quote . If not connected to your poetry then it must be spam, your art doesnt transcends the mass as art rather a thread with text. Sympathy plays a large role on your peers criticism

 

[Waindo]

My comment was simply from a general perspective not from a personal direct quote . If not connected to your poetry then it must be spam, your art doesnt transcends the mass as art rather a thread with text. Sympathy plays a large role on your peers criticism

Buhbye.

 

[Starkk]

Was a bit confused on start then the last verse blew me away. Nice one

 

[Waindo]

Thanks a bunch!