Ways of the Hyuga with Preist

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Bankotsu stares at his shishou as the words leave his mouth. "Knock down a few trees with only my palm?". Bankotsu's gaze shoots to the ground a he pulls himself together and heads toward the nearby forest. He walks up to the first tree he sees and gives it a blank look. He looks down at his hands, palms facing upwards and glances back up at the tree and let's out a grunt. He takes stance putting his left leg forward with his right backwards. He puts his left hand outward in an open palm manner with his right hand placed at his side, clinched in a fist. In one fluid motion he bring his right hand up, opening the palm and striking the tree. A slight pain courses through him, though he shrugs it off quickly. He strikes the tree again with even more force than before, breaking the bark surrounding the area where he was striking. Again he strikes it, again, and again until a noticeable cut was causing the tree to lean and almost fall over. With one last strike, Bankotsu forcefully palms through the tree and as it falls, barely manages to evade the falling tree and certain death. A very noticeable stinging pain engulfs Bankotsu's right hand and as he glares down at them he notices small cuts and splinter from the tree. Again, he simply shrugs the pain off and looks in the direction of another tree. This time he put his right leg forward, with his left leg to the back. He places his left hand at his side clinched in a fist with his right outwards with the palm open. He then brings all of his momentum into one strike. And as his left palm connects with the tree, a loud crack is heard in the surrounding area. Thinking nothing of this he continues hitting the tree. Each strike causing pain in his left palm. His right palm still throbbing from the previous tree. After a few hits, Bankotsu decides give the tree his all, and after gaining his composure, hits the tree with all his might. The tree the splits in half, falling in opposite, horizontal directions to Bankotsu's left and right. That good enough for you, Miss. My hands are killing me from that. Bankotsu says a he finds himself staring at Nel's breasteses.




I feel like your gonna pull some kill bill shizz on me next or something >.>
 
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Bankotsu grudges at the satisfaction his teacher seems to get from te destruction of wildlife. He then furiously walks back to the forest, walks up to another tree and starts bashing it with his open palm. With each palm strike, more anger is let out. After a few more strikes the tree falls over and on Bankotsu's face a slight tear can be seen. For his love of nature was halting his progress in training. He dragged himself to the next tree, gave it a stare and continued to strike the tree with the opposite palm. This time he noticed something happening. He noticed with his Byakugan active he could see chakra being expelled from his palm upon impact with the tree. He wondered to himself what is this? Is this my chakra? He shrugged the thought off and continued going until the tree had fallen down from his strikes. Bankotsu continued all day knocking trees down. The pain in his hands having numbed after the continuous training. Bankotsu no longer cared what it felt like, he had knocked down nearly the entire forest. Leaving one solitar tree standing a a marker for where there had once been a forest. A forest whom s demise wa met at the hand of Bankotsu himself.



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Nel wakes up 3 days later on her bed and remembers her student, she quickly dresses up and makes way to the training ground only to get there to see there is one more trees.
She releases a strong killing intent that makes you not yourself and fall the remaining tree hitting it with all you've got and your palms bleed all over.

*evil grin* #torture mode active. "you caused it"


Hmm...Good "Now you will be training under the sun".

She lays the 3 scrolls down while making the confrontation handseal "KAI" making the rope wraped around them to detonate sharply allowing access to the scrolls.

Now, here's the deal. I'll post a set of jyuken techniques while giving you basic ideas on them then I want you to tell me
* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
* Its pros and cons

Now the first three.

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Type: Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+20 if used to block an
attack) Description:The user pushes chakra out of all
there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield
that can fend off most attacks.
This is a simple one, where you use all your tenketsus simultenously in addition to which you are required to spin rapidly. Requires less chakra as we will be doing a larger version as we proceed.

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their
heart.
This is D-rank but can be fatal when you time your move perfectly. This is a simple move i think used by hyashi on the kumo guy killing him in an instant. And I believe Neji used it on Hinata but I wonder why she lived.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Simply making 16 subtle palm strike while hitting 16 tenketsus. When I say hitting the tenketsu, its not your palm thats hitting it but the sharp chakra from your palm/finger tips(mostly middle and index), you palm/fingers is only making contact with the body.
 

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Bankotsu lets out one last cry for the tree he had hoped to save. "I guess it couldn't be helped. Not much I can do against that aura you are putting off shishou." With this Bankotsu takes a look at the scrolls Nel had presented him and after a bit of reading he starts to speak: (well, not really because I am not gonna stay in character.)

* How you'll perform them: (Let's say someone threw a large number of kunai at me since Im not sure what all this can actually defend against) As you unleash multiple kunai at me, I realize I have little time to react. Immediately, I start to expel chakra throughout my entire body through my tenketsu. I then, using my left foot as a pivot, start spinning in a continuous rotation creating a dome or sphere created from the chakra being released from my tenketsu and rotation. As the kunai hit the dome, they bounce off of it and fly in different directions.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them As I said, depending on what this can really defend against I would use it mainly for when I were in short or close range combat or against a taijutsu specialist to damage and push them back. Making them thin twice before approaching me again. I mean the possibilities for this technique seem endless but again I just need you to clarify it for me.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Well, I really like the gist of this technique though the description is quite lacking. I'm not sure what ranks or techniques this could defend from. It would be quite effective in close or short range situations.
* Its pros and cons: With the rotation technique, I am not sure of the rank it can defend against but being of D-Rank and since you said there is a stronger version, I imagine it could at least defend from certain C-Ranks though the chakra we use is raw chakra and is weak to all elemental chakra. The pros and cons of this one will be more clear once you have explained it to me a bit more. I mean it says can defend most attacks but that's not that descriptive.



* How you'll perform them: As me and (what Im guessing is a clone) your clone stare each other down. I notice the big boobed clone smiling, taunting me. I start running up to the clone and as soon as I get within striking distance, I use my left foot as a pivot and do a spinning low sweeping kick. Your clone jumps up to avoid it as I continue with the spin til I am facing her again. As she lands and I rise, I strike her with my right palm at the same time expelling chakra from one of my tenketsu, striking her in the heart tenketsu, causing her to drop to the ground in agony.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: I would utilize it in close range combat as well as a taijutsu fight as Jyuken seems to be just another form of tai. Also, I would use this maybe multiple times if I had the opportunity, continuously striking the enemy's heart. I'd say a couple of these and a person could die even though it is D-Rank.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? They way I used it in the first part of this template would be one way. Umm, maybe if an opponent were trying to come into range of me I could time it correctly and strike their heart.
* Its pros and cons It is only usable in close range which is sometimes difficult to get up close of an opponent. If this lands, as you said deals pretty heavy damage despite its rank. The opponent would at the very least be stunned for a few seconds as the anime did show people dieing. (Hinata lived cause she is flipping Hinata lol)



* How you'll perform them:
As you make le clone, I run into its range and almost immediately I start the combo with my right palm open. Using the right palm for the first 4 strikes, open palm as to just be blunt. As, I get to the 4th strike, I lean my right shoulder forward and bring my left hand up, middle and index fingers pointed as to be more precise when I strike the tenketsu. I strike 8 more times, precisely hitting the spots where the tenketsu would be, probably along the torso and shoulders, I then follow up the last four strikes with my right hand using the index finger.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: Again, in a close range battle or taijutsu battle as you must be in close range of the opponent for this to connect.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Just in an attempt to shut off some tenketsu or cause inner damage to the body.
* Its pros and cons: The fact that its only close range, though this is also a plus as the move is a 16 hit combo. Not much else I see wrong with this one or good really. (Now that I got to the bottom of this and re read through I apologize on this last one as I just trucked through this xD)
 

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Good. however for the third one, you can use it also as a defence to deflect barages of kunai as seen where hinata and Neji uses something similar on bees and spiders respectively.

any questions so far?
 

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Okay.

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins
to attack and defend all in one move.
A larger rotation compared to the one we did before but now you also fine tune your chakra so it has sharp edgy lines around the sphere to deal ghastly damage to your opponent.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
you simply charge chakra to any of your hand then while its stretched forwards, you will release it at once. Good to blow away things


(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8
Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu
and limits chakra flow for one turn after the
opponent is hit by it
This is a seires of palm strikes where you will block 64 tenketsus so you chose wisely. Note: you won't give the opponent a breathing space once you begin the strike so the jabs runs concurrently at a very fast pace, though the first strike would disturb the opponent's chakra that he won't be able to react until you are finished closing 64 tenketsus. Opponent can't mold chakra at all for one turn, why?


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent once on their knee, and then kicks them twice on
their face in rapid succession, sending them
spiraling upwards.
how will you creatively do this on a clone of mine? Also use the template.


(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three
Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then
strikes them thrice on the back, sending them
flying.
Neji used this on Naruto. First you find a way to grab the opponents arm then you flip/toss him to a direction making sure his back is facing you then jab him three times on his back.
 
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* How you'll perform them: I start by placing my right foot forward a s the pivot, then while focusing chakra through my tenketsu I started spinning in a circular manner fine tuning the chakra being released from the tenketsu into razor sharp lines and it creates a large circular sphere capable of defensive tactics as well as the razor sharp lines being capable of damaging the opponent.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: Well, if an opponent were in close range and pressing me I could use this to either damage them or cause them to back off of me. Also I could use this to defend from kunai, shuriken, most taijutsu, etc.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?: I really like this jutsu though does this one defend from more than the previous one? I could grab a few kunai before starting the spin, then as I start the rotation I could infuse the kunai with my chakra increasing their velocity and speed. Also I would try to make it so the opponent does not see me grab the kunai. Finally, I would release the kunai at the top of my rotation adding to its deadliness.
* Its pros and cons: Probably could get thrown off balance easily during the rotation. Is only close range though still probably pretty effective. Overall good technique and very effective for defense and offense.


* How you'll perform them: I take a take a stance with my left palm extended forwards, with my right hand clinched in a fist by my waist. I channel my chakra through the tenkestu in my left palm and while a striking motion forwards with the left palm I release a blast of air which blows your clone away.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: Since it is mid range, if an enemy were to get into that range or short and I didn't feel le having a close range fight, though if I'm using Jyukken then I would, but I would just shove them away from me into mid range.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? I could probably push incoming kunai away from me as well as stop certain taijutsu attacks. I could also probably set someone of their balance if they were focusing. Also, if I could create an earth wall behind the opponent, I could then release this and push them forcefully into the wall causing extra damage to them.
* Its pros and cons: Very nice range for what it does being of close to mid. Very quick to use as it requires no hand seals. Overall good technique.


* How you'll perform them: i start by approaching your clone and taking a stance with my left foot forward and right foot diagonally and back from the left. I put my my right hand out palm open, whie I keep my left hand balled in a fist at my waist, seemingly leaving myself open to your clone. your clone starts running at me and as he encroaches close range I allow him to get a bit closer and then precisely start striking at the tenketsu around his abdomen with both of my hands. Striking him consecutively 64 times in 64 tenketsu. closing off various areas of chakra circulation. (even though clones don't have chakra.) The reason the opponent cannot use chakra for the following turn is because if hit, the user shuts areas of the opponents chakra circulatory system off. Though they regain use of the chakra after said turn.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: I would try to use this as soon as possible even though there are surely stronger versions of this. So the opponent cannot utilize chakra for one turn which means they cannot use jutsu? If so then this is even more useful in situations where the enemy is trying to stay at a distance or relies only on jutsu.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? I could also use it to stop shuriken or kunai as you said though I would have to be careful if the enemy had laced them with explosive tags.
* Its pros and cons: One con is that it has to be in close range for you to hit the enemy. A pro is that the enemy cannot use chakra for the following turn. Also, if this lands the opponent could not stop it unless they were fairly quick as the strikes are consecutive and quite fast as you stated.



* How you'll perform them: (Im just gonna make a scenario you may lie with is one) Your clone comes at me and I allow it to reach close range and take my normal stance. We have a few blows back and forth and, using the tracking capabilities of my eyes I counter a right straight that was incoming from your clone by grabbing his arm. Immediately I kick the inside of his right knee, right below the thigh causing cartilage to tear and knocking him off balance. I then in rapid succession jump backwards up-kicking your clone in the face while landing upside down and on my palms, then expel chakra through the tenketsu on my hands lifting me off the ground and kicking the clone a third time sending him spiraling in the air and me up, landing on my feet. Dont now if I did that right or if I can expel chara through my hands like that but you said be creative.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: In a taijutsu battle lie the above description. If I can use it multiple ways though. Im not sure.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?: I lie it. Probably causes good damage and could easily be combined with those rotations or the palm thrust to cause a ,more dangerous combination.
* Its pros and cons: Have to be in close range and if the opponent is experienced in taijutsu then they could probably counter this or defend from it.



* How you'll perform them: (Im just gonna make a scenario you may lie with is one) As your clone comes into mid range of me and again we exchange a few blows bac and forth. This time I counter by grabbing his left arm as he throws a strike. As I do this, I sidestep so that I would be facing the left side of his body, putting my right leg in front of his left and, using my grip on his left arm trip/toss him forward then striking the middle of his back twice, and finally the top of the spinal cord effectively killing him. (If it can break bones)
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: In a close range taijutsu battle as a counter of some srts since all you have to do is catch the opponent and toss them.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?: None that I can think of at the moment. .
* Its pros and cons: Same as the above technique.
 

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Okay, though the last one is not enough to kill and you are striking the tenketsu not bones but you can actually combine it with taijutsu or gentle fist capable of destroying bones. Nice creativity too.



While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair!
 
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