Waterworks - Suiton with Khallil

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Ryuzetsu waits in the training grounds. "I wonder when he'll get here"
 

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*arrives*

Hery Irie, how are you doing?

Could you tell me why you want to learn suiton?
 

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Ryuzetsus eyes widen as she saw her friend Khallil approach her.

"Khallil? You're teaching me?"

She smiles at him. She listens to him as he greet her and finally asks the question.

"Why do I want to learn Suiton... I like learning a lot of things and want to see which ones I'll do well in..."

She examines Khallil, and thought this might be his first time teaching. Therefore taking initiative she grins.

"Shall I tell you what I know about Suiton?"

Taking a deep breath, she recites exactly what she had said to her previous mentor about the element suiton.

"Suiton, or Water release is one of the basic five nature elements. Out of those five, it is one of the most versatile, easiest to manipulate because of its calm nature and when used correctly, could possibly the strongest out of all the elements... From the little movements such as making its way through tiny cracks, to brute force enabling to cause widespread area damage. The user of this element is able to mold the shape of the water, as well as manipulating its state... "

"The weakness of water would have to Earth, due to the fact that earth can absorb the water, and when it's in motion... It can stop it's movement ending it's momentum. Water is strong against fire as it can extinguish it. Water is good combined with Wind as it can increase the waters velocity. Lightning benefits from Water as it can increase the flow of Electricity."

"Water nature chakra is most common in Kirigakure. There are a lot of Shinobi that are famous for using water technique, two of the, are Kisame hoshigaki and Tobirama Senju. "

"Known KGs associated with Water are boil release- water in conjunction with fire . ice release - water in conjunction with wind"


Ryuzetsu looks at Khallil and wonder if it was okay, what she had just said.
 
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What concerns your answer to my question, it's inefficient. Could you perhaps tell me more about why you really want to learn suiton, and if you could only learn one element, and let's say you choose suiton, why would you choose suiton?

However it seems that you know quite a lot about suiton, I kinda underestimated you. You already included all the points of what I wanted to ask you about


Could you also tell me something about the relation between the terrain and suiton? And the (dis)advantages of it?
 
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"Why do I want to learn suiton... Well first of us human beings are made up of 60% water, and helps produce oxygen. We need it to survive, animals and plants need it to survive. Without water, we'll die. Apart from that, water is the most versitile of the five elements, it changes changes the shape and flow of things. Water can find hidden paths that sometimes aren't visible to the naked eye. It can wash away earth; it can put out fire; it can wear a piece of metal down and sweep it away. Even wood, which is its natural complement, can't survive without being nurtured by water. To be able to control such element would be...advantageous in more way than one. It has great offensive and defense qualities and if used correctly, would be specially effective...plus Apples are 84% water"

Ryuzetsu smiled at Khallil and proceeds to answer his other question

"Regarding terrain and suiton... I only know of a few correlations. Please help me understand better if I miss some. First of, it's able to change the terrain, it could wipe a whole forest if enough force is used, it can also flood it, changing a flat dry terrain to watery wasteland or a muddy terrain. The advantage would be, if one of the users is well versed in suiton they can use it to their advantage, combining it with katon steam and mist can be created obstructing the view... as for the disadvantages..."

She scratches her head

"It can backfire on the user, the opponent can use raiton which would severely shock you, since water is a natural compliment to lightning. Or they could use a technique which enables them to drag you down underwater and drown you if used with several other techniques... "

Ryuzetsu lets out an awkward laugh

"That's it...sorry"
 

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You really amazed me Aoi! Indeed, one can become a great shinobi if they use the advantages of a simple element like water. Just like Tobirama. And with the terrain, I was especially talking about watersources. many water techniques require water sources, so you must watch out if you rely on water techniques too much, because that could be fatal if there is no water source. But on the other side, if you're fighting on the ocean, you should definitely use the advantages of water release! Great reply though!

Okay now we're going to meet/discover this so-called water chakra. We'll spend some time on that, after that you'll start learning techniques.

Come by and sit next to me, in front of this large, beautiful river. Close your eyes and concentrate. Hear the water flowing, try to communicate with the water. Focus your chakra in your body, let it flow, just like the river. Do it on the concept of water, try to replicate the flow and the 'feel' of the river with your chakra, just like how my teacher taught me, and when you're done, tell me what the water chakra felt like.
 

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Doing what Khallil had instructed, Aoi sits next to him. She tries to concentrate of how water should feel, she thinks of the river, how it sounds like, how the water moves, it's fluidity. Aoi thinks about how water can be calm and still but when met with force it can be aggressive and powerful.

She opens her eyes and takes a deep breath

"Water chakra feels cool, calm and refreshing, but it has a certain force to it that overwhelms you"
 

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good young one, good U_U I liked your answer. It never ceases to amaze me how water chakra could be overwhelming, but also calm, nice and cold at the same time.

Okay this will be the last thing we'll do before you'll start to learn techniques. Something I'll do a bit different than usually.

Here grab this piece of paper. This piece of paper is made out of a special tree, grown and fed with chakra. Gather your recently discovered water chakra and concentrate very good. Channel your chakra into the piece of paper, until the paper will start to become wet. Usually this is used to find out what kind of affinity someone has, but I am using this method with you now to see whether you're able to succesfully channel the newly discovered water chakra into the special piece of paper. Remember, focussing and concentration are the key to everything!
 

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Aoi takes the sheet of paper from Khlalil, it looked like just any other ordinary paper, kind tiny but nonetheless, just like any other paper. She taes a deep breath again, she's been doing quite a lot of those, and stares right into the paper. Concentrating hard, the wind kicks in and increases the turbulation of the river. Still she concentrates, but unfortunately for her, the paper got splashed with water.

Taking another one from Khallil, she turns, facing away from the water. She allows her chakra to seep throughout the paper, closing her eyes, and kept concentraiting. The paper suddenly felt floppy and soggy.

"Was this okay?"
 

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Great! do you have any questions so far, regarding the element, the training..anything? lol
 

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"None so far, but I'll ask when something does pop up"

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great, it is an important thing to ask question if you have them. Never hesitate to ask questions simply so you'll learn more techniques in my next post. I will try to answer your questions and provide new jutsus to learn :)

Now we'll start with the real thing! Lol
The first technique

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

This will be the training method, very similar to my sensei's training method
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(if this is easier to copy :) )

Remember how you were concentrating, trying to communicate with the water. Focus again and send your chakra into the river, try to manipulate the water and create a few small waves. This could be used in many situation. You could also create i.e. a water pillar, sending you into the air or something.
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique:

Keeping what Khallil said in mind regarding the communication with water. As she stands, she concentrates her chakra in one place, gathering it until it the feeling was clear to her, that calm feeling yet overwhelming feeling. She exhales, changing the nature of her chakra she sends her it towards the river. Be the water! Be the water! Without having to wait, the river began to become more turbulent as waves began to clash with each other,upon attaining the turbulence she wanted she creates a pillar of water in the middle of the river.

How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):

When on a watery terrain, the user can knock their opponent off balance by creating a small pillar underneath them, and while they're knocked off, the small waves can be used to keep them unsteady further, then bombard them with the blasts of water.

User can carry out arial attacks by elevating themselves using the water pillars

Advantage(s):

-This can be used for defensive or offensive purposes, for example, when attacked by a low level katon technique you can easily block it with the suiton pillar or douse it with the small blasts.

-Water source is not needed. It would be useful but not needed, pre exisisting water will suffice.

-It can be used almost frequently as it doesn't require much chakra points.

Disadvantage(s):

-Doesn't do a lot of damage because it is a low levelled technique

How to counter the technique;:

Doton users can block using a doton wall and if a higher levelled katon technique is used it can cancel it out and turn it to steam
 
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Okay, good ! :)
I'll edit the template a little bit. I am adding 'Questions:' to it, because I've the feeling that someone is more tempted to ask a question if it is a part of the template. Because many times ppl have small questions, but they are like 'Meh, no need to ask it. It's not a big deal.' But I want them to ask any small questions they have, so I could try to help them out and help them turning into fine RPers. It would help me as well, because there are a lot of things I don't even know myself and if ppl start asking questions, I might do more research into that, and I'll probably get to know some new stuff as well :) The question field is optional of course :p

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moving on

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dลjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

Create a thick white mist by manipulate the water of the river and lift some water up or expel water from your mouth. The more chakra chakra you infuse with the mist, the thicker the mist will be. It is great to use this against sharingan and rinnegan users. They can't look through it. But it might be dangerous for you as well, so I always recommend to do it if you're able to sense or see the opponent somehow. Once created, try to hide inside the mist.
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique:

Aoi steps into the river, concentrating chakra on her feet so she doesn't fall in the water and takes a stance, she takes a deep breath and began accumulating chakra throughout her body, breeze started to come along, and the more she continued building up her chakra the colder it started to become and the area around her started become unclear. Once she feels that she had accumulated enough, she changes the nature of the chakra into water once more. A blanket of thick mist rised from the water, eventually hiding her completely.

How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):

The user is able to hide themselves from their opponents, therefore giving them an opportunity for a sneak attack. If on a watery terrain the user can use water pillows to knock their opponent around, or drag them underwater completely unaware.

Advantage(s):

- Since this technique can be used to obstruct ones view, the user would be able to launch attacks that can catch their opponent blind sided. May it be taijutsu or using ninja tools or other ninjutsu
- As you have mentioned it is a good technique to be used on a dojutsu user.
- The user can control the thickness therefore it will be really effective in battle when utilized correctly. Also, it doesn't require an exsisting water source

Disadvantage(s):

- It's only as useful until it get blown away
- Although it is great to use to hide from an opponent, the downside is that the users view would also be obstructed therefore to concentration is needed so they can't be lost in the mist too without revealing themselves to their opponent.
-Useless on a byakugan user

How to counter the technique:

The opponent can blow the mist away. Or if fighting with a byakugan user, it can actually backfire since the byakugan user are able to see better in the mist than the user.

Questions, if you have them:

None
 

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Amazing! Keep it up like that :)


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(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining

Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.


Pretend as if you are holding a sword, so with a partly open hand. Channel your suiton chakra into the space inside your hand. Then manipulate the chakra into a water sword. Try to manipulate the shape correctly. If you are done, cut my clome with the sword.
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique:

Excited, Aoi focused her chakra on her right hand, the materialization of it was bright blue, a show of brilliant light blue and it amazed her. Thinking of the properties of suiton and it began to turn cold, the nature of the chakra began to change and turn into water in her hand. With the image of a sword in mind, sharp, long, peircing edge, the shape of the water changed immediately into a sword.

She smiles at her accomplishment, though she knew this was only the beginning. Dashing towards the clone, she delivers an upper cut strike causing the clone to release.

How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):

When fighting on a water terrain, just because it states that it doesn't require a water source doesn't mean it can't be made with one, therefore this technique can be used quite a bit seeing as, if it breaks there's plenty of water to make another. It has the properties of a sword therefore if one lacked a weapon in short ranged combat this would be useful.

Advantage(s):

- Allows you make a weapon out of nothing, good if you're about to be attacked on close range
- If it breaks, then you make another one
- Quick, no handseals required

Disadvantage(s):

- If fighting against a raiton user, upon contact the water sword can conduct the lightning and shock you
- Short ranged only

How to counter the technique:

Seeing as it only acts like a swords, that must mean that it can be blocked like a sword. A wall or thick mass of any kind.

Questions, if you have them:

Say if a water pillar was made, and the user was hiding behind it and the opponent was on the other side. Will the user be able to materialize this sword using the water pillar, thus surprise attacking the opponent with a stab in the blind spot?
 

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Good. About the counter, countering with lightnign would probably be the best, as it'll shock the opponent holding the sword. And bout your question, I think you can but it depends on how far the opponent is. He must be in close range (less than 5 meters). But I think you could.



( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
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Gather your water chakra and release it out of your arm and manipulate it in front of you into a shield made out of water, blocking a kunai thrown by my clone. Unlike the sword, you're not 'holding' the shield. It's basically just floating in front of you, and it doesn't require a water source.
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique:

Taking her stance once again to try out this new technique, Aoi gathers chakra just as she had done in the past few techniques but this time she focused it on her right arm. The materialization of the chakra appeared again, and just as she had done before, thinking of water she changes it's chakra nature to suiton. Seeing as it was a shield, she imagine a shield, thick and protective. Using shape and nature transformation, the water had turned into a shield, and just in time as Khallil's clone had thrown the kunais at her.

How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):

If the user does not have any other equipment to block projectile attacks, this would very useful but also, instead of the user using their body to protect themselves from hand to hand combat, this can be a replacement and recieve less damage.

Advantage(s):

- It's a D rank technique, and just like the others it doesnt require a hand seal
- It would serve it's purpose as a shield, blocking the user from projectiles and close combat
- Can use time and again since it doesn't costs much chakra

Disadvantage(s):

- Higher levelled Katon technique can cancel it.
- Take up one of your arms therefore you only have one other to use, makes it hard to perform handseals unless you're good enough that you need them.

How to counter the technique:

High levelled Katon technique to vaporize it.

Questions, if you have them:

Are you able to use it on any other part of your body apart from just your arms. For example, you're about to be hit on the back, can you use this technique to shield it?
 

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Great! About your question, i don't think so, because the description says that it is released out of the arm and held in front of the user,


Okay, that's it for the D-ranks! Before we go on, could you tell me something about handseals. What kind of handseals there are, what the purpose of handseals is, the advantages and disadvantages of handseals. Try to tell me as much as you know about handseals. And what happens if you and your opponent use a jutsu at the same time, but your jutsu requires 1 handseal, and the opponent's jutsu requires 7 handseals, how would this affect the battle?
 
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