[Other] Wasteland

Ryu Kishi

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Wasteland


Starless nights now wait for me,
Now dreamless sleep, is all i reap.
No warmth do i find, nor
Home do i mind.

All is lost, taken away from me.

All is gone, nothing do i see,
Only do i hear my own voice echoing back at me.

How did i venture to this land
That has no stars.

How did my dreams get stolen, that left me with only
Scars.

Cursed now; i walk this barren world, haunted by
The whispers of memorys
That kept me warm.

Now only the cold lingers,
gripping me tightly, eating
away at my mind, driving
Me to a slow demise.

Forever longing to be free, forever hoping it was
A dream.

Broken and empty,i walk
In darkness; abandoned by
Fate, i wonder now in the depths of eternity in this land of waste.
 
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Shuuya

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Wow....I think the poem is fantastic, I love the theme and the message as well as your choice of words. Awesome work! You should definitely post more :)
 

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This is very nice!
 

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Another stunning piece of poetry. :) The mid Stanzas were hard hitting especially starless sky and poet's own voice echoing back at him:). Beautiful dude <3.
 

Ryu Kishi

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Wow....I think the poem is fantastic, I love the theme and the message as well as your choice of words. Awesome work! You should definitely post more :)

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im glad you liked it:)

This is very nice!

Thanks! :win:

Another stunning piece of poetry. :) The mid Stanzas were hard hitting especially starless sky and poet's own voice echoing back at him:). Beautiful dude <3.

Thanks fiendy :)
 

Tenshi Hikari

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Very heartfelt cupcake.. love it! <3

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Hotaruko

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Lovely heartfelt desperate poem Ryu <3 Good work!
 

Airi

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Wonderful..well done :)
 
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