Wanted: Chapter One: Prologue

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Next Chapter: two :

Wanted!
Chapter One: Prologue

In a time, where people solved their problems by using jutsu to beat the crap out of each other, a man named Zeero found a ninjutsu scroll created by the Rikudo Sennin. The scroll contained all ninjutsu, a couple of years later the Rikudo Sennin was sentenced to death for not releasing the whereabouts of the scroll, before his death he revealed that he had hid the scroll and it was for anyone, anyone if they could find it..

SexyTendo: Hmm, this is useless! :mad:
Takawaan: What? :confused:
SexyTendo: Were never going to find any teammates here they all look useless!
Takawaan: You can talk, your wearing Ugg boots and boxer shorts.
SexyTendo: Are you being serious? i just woke up?!
Takawaan: Yeah Yeah.
???: Help! Heelp! Reej is hurting me!
Reej:Shut up Blondie!
Takawaan: Quick we have to help her!
SexyTendo: Right!
Takawaan and SexyTendo ran around the corner to see the helpless woman being strangled by a huge man
Reej: give me you money!
SexyTendo: Put her down, hulk.
Reej: Get lost ginger!
SexyTendo: What..
Takawaan: Oh Crap..
Reej: You heard me..
SexyTendo: Im not a Ginger!!! KATON: GOUKAKYUU NO JUT..!
An unknown hyuga appears from above Reej
???: Gentle fist!
The hyuga hits Reej in the top of his head knocking him out
???: Thanks for distracting him
Takawaan: Huh?
???: This guy is a international criminal we have been chasing him down for years.
SexyTendo: We?
???: Yeah i have teammate, whose this idiot.
SexyTendo: Id kick your ass..
Takawaan: He may not seem it, but he has one of the highest IQ's in the world, he's just hyperactive
???: Is that right, Fallenuchiha you can come out
An uchiha comes out of the shadows
FallenUchiha: Kushan, if you were going to beat him that easily why'd you have me wait?
Kushan: You complain every time we have a mission.
Takawaan: Shut up please lets get back on topic, Who is this girl?
FallenUchiha: Hey who are you
The woman faints
FallenUchiha: Hey who are you!!!
Takawaan: She fainted dumbass..
FallenUchiha: Oh.
SexyTendo: We'd better take her
Scene turns to a hotel where the woman wakes
Woman: ugh where am i.
Kushan: Somerville hotel, you fainted.
Woman: oh..
Takawaan: So, whats you name.
Lily: my name is lily.
A man enters the room
???: My daughter!
Lily: Dad!
Father: What happened where did you go?!
Lily: I was attacked by a terrible man and these men saved me!
Father: is it true
SexyTendo: Uh yes.
Father: How can i thank you oh i know have you boy's heard of the Secret ninjutsu scroll
Takawaan: Yeah its what were searching for!
Father: Well not many people know this but before the rikudo Sennin died he gave away a map to the scroll to his closest relatives but it was cut in four pieces.
Kushan: a map?
Father: Yes, the scroll seekers quickly killed the relatives and then the scroll seekers were killed, its just a long lasting cycle of death. The map piece was given to me by my uncle and now i will give it to you.
Takawaan: Wow Thanks!
Father: No problem, if your looking for the scroll take this it should make it much easier, look for the others with the map pieces when you find them your journey for the scroll should be harm free.
SexyTendo: Thanks man :D
The scene switches outside where the 4 are walking down the road
Takawaan: i can believe he gave us this, it should make our journey much easier!
SexyTendo: Yeah i know, come on lets get going
Takawaan: Yeah! see you guys later!
Kushan: Wait, where do you think your going
SexyTendo: What?
FallenUchiha: That scroll is ours!
Sexytendo: Its ours!
Kushan: We'll fight you guys for it!

SexyTendo&Takawaan: Bring it!




Next Time The Fight For The Map Piece





Authors Note: Sorry if its a bit short next chapter will be longer i promise :D
 
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Cool! Nice work man! It's so funny! Well, it's a brand new idea :) It's One Piece in Naruto just that this time round is searching for the scroll instead searching for the treasure xd But can I suggest something? Short is not the problem..but put more colors in it ;) And also make a space every speech by the character! Then put colors as the last touch xd Its funny, Keep it up the work!

Cant wait for the next chapter :)
 

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Cool! Nice work man! It's so funny! Well, it's a brand new idea :) It's One Piece in Naruto just that this time round is searching for the scroll instead searching for the treasure xd But can I suggest something? Short is not the problem..but put more colors in it ;) And also make a space every speech by the character! Then put colors as the last touch xd Its funny, Keep it up the work!

Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Thanks :D
 
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