hey peoplies, :hey:
i made a thread wanting ideas for help on my stupid writers block.... this isn't that thread because i beat the writers block and have now written something!!!!! ha ha *smiles brightly in triumph over the writers block*
soooo this thread is sort of my into to the story to see if people will read it!! so tell me what you think!
okay if the title hasn't given to much away this character info will -.- sooo if your planing on reading my story DO NOT and i repeat DO NOT read this because it is a complete and utter spoiler.
okay next off is..... a sneak peek of chapter 1!!!!!!!! anit i nice to let you have a look!!! soooo here it is......
i made a thread wanting ideas for help on my stupid writers block.... this isn't that thread because i beat the writers block and have now written something!!!!! ha ha *smiles brightly in triumph over the writers block*
soooo this thread is sort of my into to the story to see if people will read it!! so tell me what you think!
okay if the title hasn't given to much away this character info will -.- sooo if your planing on reading my story DO NOT and i repeat DO NOT read this because it is a complete and utter spoiler.
Title: Walking with demons
Characters:
Althea Eleicathe: 16-years of age. Main character (In her point of view). Her personality is shy and keeps to herself but can be very loud and bubbly at times, she hides her inner thoughts and always seems lost or in a planet of some kind. Her appearance is a small girl that looks about 13-14 years of age, she is thin but has the right amount of curves in the right places, her hair is short and just under her shoulder it is a mix of blondes, browns and reds depending on the light of the space, her eyes are a blue-gray that seem to change with her mood, her skin is pale and is scattered with freckles. Her clothing can change depending on her mood and the weather. She is a cross breed of a human formed angel and a demon of the under world, she should never have been born into the world, but her mother sacrificed herself so that she could live normally (she is un-aware of all of this, she thinks she is a normal human), she lives with Miki her adopted mum and her older brother Cameron who is also adopted by Miki.
Damin Macnarki: 22-years of age. Co-character (Demon marker). His personality is dark, he keeps to himself, his protective and hides his feelings, and he acts cool and a bit mysterious. His appearance is his a tall guy that has a dark aura around him, his hair is jet black and is just a little longer then his chin, his eyes are a very dark colour almost a black but not quiet, his skin is pale with a washed out tan. His clothing is always dark colours, from browns to blacks, he also has a trench coat that he tends to hardly ever take off no matter what the weather is. He is a half demon, that has been sent out to watch over ‘the child’, his mission is to do bring back any information about her, but he doesn’t because he ends up falling for her.
Elliott Keshnichi: 15-years of age. Co-character (Althea’s friend). His personality is bright, but he has his own problems, his shy but he likes to make people laugh and smile, he has a habit to worry about things that don’t concern him, he is protective and fun to be around. His appearance he is tall but is still got a bit to grow, his hair is light brown, his skin is a washed out tan, he has a nice build not fat or thin just right, and his eyes are a green hazel. His clothing is what ever he feels like chucking on that day. His a human and one of althea’s friends, he some how gets sucked into the mix of everything, he also has a crush on althea but she is completely oblivious to his love of her, even though she feels a light spark herself.
Miki Lilthy: 30-years of age. Co-character (althea’s guardian / parent / godmum). Her personality is a busy bee, she is a bit stressed and always on the go, she never has a minuet to spare when she is at it. Her appearance is tall-ish around 5’5. 5, her hair is short and dark almost a black, she is thin and has little meat on her, her skin is pale, and her eyes are a mucky-brown. Her clothing consist of suit-dresses as well as some normal simple casual clothing nothing to special. She is a human and was althea’s mothers best friend, when althea was born she was made her god mum, 12 years go she was forced into looking after a 4-year-old child (althea) and has cared for her ever since. She is also looking after her nephew Cameron, who she had adopted into the family after her brother died when Cameron was 7-years of age this was a year after she had taken on althea.
Cameron Lilthy: 18-years of age. Co-Character ( althea’s older brother). His personality is very childish, he never new when to grow up, his always mucking around but being older he looks after his little sister althea in his own way, though sometimes he may seem unreliable and irresponsible, if anything happened to althea he would be there to help, he has a short temper and can never be bother doing things. His appearance is tall and slender, he has very-light brown hair, with mucky-brown eyes, and his skin is slightly tanned. His clothing consist on what ever he can find that is clean and doesn’t smell, which is usually some kind of t-shirt and shorts or jeans. He is a human and lost all his family except his aunt at the age of 7, and he is a year 12 student.
Sarah Opinata: 16-years of age. Co-character ( althea’s best friend). Her personality is loud and bubbly, she is sweet and always happy, if someone has been hurt she will be right on the side wanting to hurt the person that hurt the person, she is never in a bad mood but when she is you will know it. She normal sized, brown hair that is halfway down her back, dark skinned, big dark brown eyes and curves in all the right places. She normally wears what’s in style the fashion of the day, always making herself pretty. She has known althea since primary school and never has left her side, she is always there and helpful.
Rosemary-may Light: 17-years of age. Co-character (Guardian angel). Her personality is very sweet, she is kind and has a light aura about her, but when she needs to be she can be tough and mean, she happy most the time and very protective, she worries a lot and always is smiling. Her appearance is tall and thin, she has white hair that hangs all the way down her back to around her knees, she has bright blue eyes, and fair skin and she also has a weird tattoo on her right shoulder. She usually wears bright and light colours, she always looks graceful and perfect and nearly all the guys in the school want her. she is a half human half angel and has been ordered to protect and look after althea from any harm, because of what she is, she is also one of althea’s closest friends.
Angel high council:
Gabriel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (messenger angel). He is the angel of communication, he helps with our life’s path and sols calling, he is always there to guide us. Name meaning ‘God is my strength’. Aura, indigo white. Days guard Monday. Direction is to the west. His element is water. Number 9. Symbols lilies.
Michael: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of mericals). Angel of protection, strength and truth, ruler of the sun, he gives courage to face the truth and overcome obstacles and fears you have about the future, wants us to be true to ourselves, often known as ‘the prince of light’. Name meaning ‘he who is as God’. Aura, blue gold. Guards this day Wednesday (sometimes Sunday). Element is fire. Number is 6. symbol sword, blue cloak, sun, gold metal.
Urial: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of transformation). He brings unconditional love- a great gift to humanity; he is the angel of transformation. Name meaning ‘light of god’. Aura, gold purple silver. Guards this day Saturday. Direction is north. Element is earth. Number -. Symbols of a scroll and lighting.
Raphael: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of healing). He is the angel of healing. Name meaning ‘ God has Healed’. Aura green or deep pink. Guards Wednesday. Element is air. Number is 8.
Cassiel; age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of peace and harmony). She is the angel of peace and harmony. Name meaning ‘speed of god’. Aura black bronze, purple, silver white. Day guards Saturday. Element earth. Number 3. Symbols dove.
Ariel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of nature). She is closely related to nature, she is helpful to teachers and healers and assist with psychic development, she helps with Raphael when healing, and normal is a lion. Name meaning ‘Lioness of god’. Aura pale pink or indigo purples. Guards the day Friday. Elements are earth and air. Numbers 6 and 4. symbols lion, Pluto or Venus.
Zadkiel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of compassion). He is the angel of compassion, he assist us in seeking freedom through forgiveness, guards the power of affirmation and invocation which assist in prayer. Name meaning ‘righteousness of God’. Aura blue. Guards Thursday. Element is fire. Number is 4.
Metatron: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (twin guardian of the tree of life.) he is the twin guardian of the tree of life, he reveals our connection with life, he is one of the angels who has walked the earth, is a scribe. Aura golden white, violet and sea green. Guards all days. Have all elements. Number is 1. Symbols metatron’s cube, tree of life.
Bad characters:
Numerous demons that attack
Kelathea Marcus Duke: age unknown. Co-character (Althea’s dad).
Devil: age unknown. Co-character (devil).
First evil: age unknown. Co-character (first evil).
Minor characters:
Timothy Mcgettor: Elliott’s friend
Mikey Luckney : Elliott’s best mate
Lee Jones: Elliott’s friend
Nick bitterman: Shaun’s best mate
Shaun Dickson: Sarah’s boy friend
Selthe: messenger of the angel council
Natilee bibbleton:
Sammy Frank:
Lucy hurryman;
Need to knows:
City name: west mist
City the town: the town is in a remote part of Nixton, it is a big city with the main buildings e.g.; shops, sky scrapers, businesses, town houses so on toward the center, as mover further out becomes more remote, there is much forest land and also some plains, the houses are older and, near by is a house estate called south bix, where most the families live.
High school name: west mist high
Characters:
Althea Eleicathe: 16-years of age. Main character (In her point of view). Her personality is shy and keeps to herself but can be very loud and bubbly at times, she hides her inner thoughts and always seems lost or in a planet of some kind. Her appearance is a small girl that looks about 13-14 years of age, she is thin but has the right amount of curves in the right places, her hair is short and just under her shoulder it is a mix of blondes, browns and reds depending on the light of the space, her eyes are a blue-gray that seem to change with her mood, her skin is pale and is scattered with freckles. Her clothing can change depending on her mood and the weather. She is a cross breed of a human formed angel and a demon of the under world, she should never have been born into the world, but her mother sacrificed herself so that she could live normally (she is un-aware of all of this, she thinks she is a normal human), she lives with Miki her adopted mum and her older brother Cameron who is also adopted by Miki.
Damin Macnarki: 22-years of age. Co-character (Demon marker). His personality is dark, he keeps to himself, his protective and hides his feelings, and he acts cool and a bit mysterious. His appearance is his a tall guy that has a dark aura around him, his hair is jet black and is just a little longer then his chin, his eyes are a very dark colour almost a black but not quiet, his skin is pale with a washed out tan. His clothing is always dark colours, from browns to blacks, he also has a trench coat that he tends to hardly ever take off no matter what the weather is. He is a half demon, that has been sent out to watch over ‘the child’, his mission is to do bring back any information about her, but he doesn’t because he ends up falling for her.
Elliott Keshnichi: 15-years of age. Co-character (Althea’s friend). His personality is bright, but he has his own problems, his shy but he likes to make people laugh and smile, he has a habit to worry about things that don’t concern him, he is protective and fun to be around. His appearance he is tall but is still got a bit to grow, his hair is light brown, his skin is a washed out tan, he has a nice build not fat or thin just right, and his eyes are a green hazel. His clothing is what ever he feels like chucking on that day. His a human and one of althea’s friends, he some how gets sucked into the mix of everything, he also has a crush on althea but she is completely oblivious to his love of her, even though she feels a light spark herself.
Miki Lilthy: 30-years of age. Co-character (althea’s guardian / parent / godmum). Her personality is a busy bee, she is a bit stressed and always on the go, she never has a minuet to spare when she is at it. Her appearance is tall-ish around 5’5. 5, her hair is short and dark almost a black, she is thin and has little meat on her, her skin is pale, and her eyes are a mucky-brown. Her clothing consist of suit-dresses as well as some normal simple casual clothing nothing to special. She is a human and was althea’s mothers best friend, when althea was born she was made her god mum, 12 years go she was forced into looking after a 4-year-old child (althea) and has cared for her ever since. She is also looking after her nephew Cameron, who she had adopted into the family after her brother died when Cameron was 7-years of age this was a year after she had taken on althea.
Cameron Lilthy: 18-years of age. Co-Character ( althea’s older brother). His personality is very childish, he never new when to grow up, his always mucking around but being older he looks after his little sister althea in his own way, though sometimes he may seem unreliable and irresponsible, if anything happened to althea he would be there to help, he has a short temper and can never be bother doing things. His appearance is tall and slender, he has very-light brown hair, with mucky-brown eyes, and his skin is slightly tanned. His clothing consist on what ever he can find that is clean and doesn’t smell, which is usually some kind of t-shirt and shorts or jeans. He is a human and lost all his family except his aunt at the age of 7, and he is a year 12 student.
Sarah Opinata: 16-years of age. Co-character ( althea’s best friend). Her personality is loud and bubbly, she is sweet and always happy, if someone has been hurt she will be right on the side wanting to hurt the person that hurt the person, she is never in a bad mood but when she is you will know it. She normal sized, brown hair that is halfway down her back, dark skinned, big dark brown eyes and curves in all the right places. She normally wears what’s in style the fashion of the day, always making herself pretty. She has known althea since primary school and never has left her side, she is always there and helpful.
Rosemary-may Light: 17-years of age. Co-character (Guardian angel). Her personality is very sweet, she is kind and has a light aura about her, but when she needs to be she can be tough and mean, she happy most the time and very protective, she worries a lot and always is smiling. Her appearance is tall and thin, she has white hair that hangs all the way down her back to around her knees, she has bright blue eyes, and fair skin and she also has a weird tattoo on her right shoulder. She usually wears bright and light colours, she always looks graceful and perfect and nearly all the guys in the school want her. she is a half human half angel and has been ordered to protect and look after althea from any harm, because of what she is, she is also one of althea’s closest friends.
Angel high council:
Gabriel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (messenger angel). He is the angel of communication, he helps with our life’s path and sols calling, he is always there to guide us. Name meaning ‘God is my strength’. Aura, indigo white. Days guard Monday. Direction is to the west. His element is water. Number 9. Symbols lilies.
Michael: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of mericals). Angel of protection, strength and truth, ruler of the sun, he gives courage to face the truth and overcome obstacles and fears you have about the future, wants us to be true to ourselves, often known as ‘the prince of light’. Name meaning ‘he who is as God’. Aura, blue gold. Guards this day Wednesday (sometimes Sunday). Element is fire. Number is 6. symbol sword, blue cloak, sun, gold metal.
Urial: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of transformation). He brings unconditional love- a great gift to humanity; he is the angel of transformation. Name meaning ‘light of god’. Aura, gold purple silver. Guards this day Saturday. Direction is north. Element is earth. Number -. Symbols of a scroll and lighting.
Raphael: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of healing). He is the angel of healing. Name meaning ‘ God has Healed’. Aura green or deep pink. Guards Wednesday. Element is air. Number is 8.
Cassiel; age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of peace and harmony). She is the angel of peace and harmony. Name meaning ‘speed of god’. Aura black bronze, purple, silver white. Day guards Saturday. Element earth. Number 3. Symbols dove.
Ariel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of nature). She is closely related to nature, she is helpful to teachers and healers and assist with psychic development, she helps with Raphael when healing, and normal is a lion. Name meaning ‘Lioness of god’. Aura pale pink or indigo purples. Guards the day Friday. Elements are earth and air. Numbers 6 and 4. symbols lion, Pluto or Venus.
Zadkiel: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (angel of compassion). He is the angel of compassion, he assist us in seeking freedom through forgiveness, guards the power of affirmation and invocation which assist in prayer. Name meaning ‘righteousness of God’. Aura blue. Guards Thursday. Element is fire. Number is 4.
Metatron: age unknown. Co-character (arch angel) (twin guardian of the tree of life.) he is the twin guardian of the tree of life, he reveals our connection with life, he is one of the angels who has walked the earth, is a scribe. Aura golden white, violet and sea green. Guards all days. Have all elements. Number is 1. Symbols metatron’s cube, tree of life.
Bad characters:
Numerous demons that attack
Kelathea Marcus Duke: age unknown. Co-character (Althea’s dad).
Devil: age unknown. Co-character (devil).
First evil: age unknown. Co-character (first evil).
Minor characters:
Timothy Mcgettor: Elliott’s friend
Mikey Luckney : Elliott’s best mate
Lee Jones: Elliott’s friend
Nick bitterman: Shaun’s best mate
Shaun Dickson: Sarah’s boy friend
Selthe: messenger of the angel council
Natilee bibbleton:
Sammy Frank:
Lucy hurryman;
Need to knows:
City name: west mist
City the town: the town is in a remote part of Nixton, it is a big city with the main buildings e.g.; shops, sky scrapers, businesses, town houses so on toward the center, as mover further out becomes more remote, there is much forest land and also some plains, the houses are older and, near by is a house estate called south bix, where most the families live.
High school name: west mist high
okay next off is..... a sneak peek of chapter 1!!!!!!!! anit i nice to let you have a look!!!
soooo here it is......once upon a time there was a dog.....
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go on have a read
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go on have a read
Walking with demons:
Chapter 1:
“Good morning sunshine,” he beamed before jumping on top of me, squishing my body to the mattress beneath. His warm skin pressing up against my face as he pulled the pillow from underneath my head, making me blink my eyes open to look at him. His wide smile broadened making his eyes shine with excitement, as he saw my un-amused face.
“Cam get off of me,” I groaned pushing at him gently. He didn’t move though just sat there, still smiling like a complete fool, but then I shouldn’t have expected any less from Cam. My childish eighteen-year-old brother, who always is annoying me in someway or another, and his first choice of annoyance today, is waking me up. I guess it’s not that horrible, since I have to get up early for school today. His like a personalized alarm clock, with different sayings every morning and always a different way of getting me up. I remember one time he had soaked me with water balloons, throwing them at me until I finally got up and chased him down the stairs to Miki. Who just told him off and sent him to his room, where in fact all his stuff is. So it was not a punishment for him at all, which I found un-fair at the time.
Miki is my adopted mum; she is always on the go and has always something to do, weather it be housework or paper work or anything else that she can pick up on. She took me in when I was four; I don’t remember anything before that. It was like my mind was completely wiped out, no doctors or psychiatrists could work out what happen to me, they couldn’t even find a record of my past, until Miki came along. She took me in even though she was only eighteen, she had no clue on parenting, and she still has no clue to tell you the truth. A year later she took in her nephew after his father died, and who other could that be, other then my older brother Cam. I guess she has done an all right job with both of us, I wouldn’t have been able to handle two kids under eight-years old, at only the age of nineteen. I think she pretty incredible to do so, and now we sort of made our own little family, even though I’m not related to them at all. I can’t think of a place where I didn’t have Cam annoying me or Miki rushing around like the busy bee she is. It just wouldn’t be home, or a place where I was happy or wanted to be at.
I moved my head to the side as Cam shifted slowly getting less amused with his little attack on me. He always did, unless I reacted back making it all the more amusing for him; I have learned to ignore it after all these years. It helps when I’m not in the mood for all his little jokes, or when I really needed to get up for school. Today is one of those days; it’s the first day of the last term of year ten, so indeed it’s an important one. It’s not like any of the other terms, it’s the term you have to get everything right in, so you can get into year eleven next year. It wasn’t a time for mucking around, but Cam never understood that, I don’t even know how he made it to his last year of high school.
“Your no fun at all Thea,” he complained as he moved off of the bed, and off me, slowly making his way to the door. “No fun at all.”
Chapter 1:
“Good morning sunshine,” he beamed before jumping on top of me, squishing my body to the mattress beneath. His warm skin pressing up against my face as he pulled the pillow from underneath my head, making me blink my eyes open to look at him. His wide smile broadened making his eyes shine with excitement, as he saw my un-amused face.
“Cam get off of me,” I groaned pushing at him gently. He didn’t move though just sat there, still smiling like a complete fool, but then I shouldn’t have expected any less from Cam. My childish eighteen-year-old brother, who always is annoying me in someway or another, and his first choice of annoyance today, is waking me up. I guess it’s not that horrible, since I have to get up early for school today. His like a personalized alarm clock, with different sayings every morning and always a different way of getting me up. I remember one time he had soaked me with water balloons, throwing them at me until I finally got up and chased him down the stairs to Miki. Who just told him off and sent him to his room, where in fact all his stuff is. So it was not a punishment for him at all, which I found un-fair at the time.
Miki is my adopted mum; she is always on the go and has always something to do, weather it be housework or paper work or anything else that she can pick up on. She took me in when I was four; I don’t remember anything before that. It was like my mind was completely wiped out, no doctors or psychiatrists could work out what happen to me, they couldn’t even find a record of my past, until Miki came along. She took me in even though she was only eighteen, she had no clue on parenting, and she still has no clue to tell you the truth. A year later she took in her nephew after his father died, and who other could that be, other then my older brother Cam. I guess she has done an all right job with both of us, I wouldn’t have been able to handle two kids under eight-years old, at only the age of nineteen. I think she pretty incredible to do so, and now we sort of made our own little family, even though I’m not related to them at all. I can’t think of a place where I didn’t have Cam annoying me or Miki rushing around like the busy bee she is. It just wouldn’t be home, or a place where I was happy or wanted to be at.
I moved my head to the side as Cam shifted slowly getting less amused with his little attack on me. He always did, unless I reacted back making it all the more amusing for him; I have learned to ignore it after all these years. It helps when I’m not in the mood for all his little jokes, or when I really needed to get up for school. Today is one of those days; it’s the first day of the last term of year ten, so indeed it’s an important one. It’s not like any of the other terms, it’s the term you have to get everything right in, so you can get into year eleven next year. It wasn’t a time for mucking around, but Cam never understood that, I don’t even know how he made it to his last year of high school.
“Your no fun at all Thea,” he complained as he moved off of the bed, and off me, slowly making his way to the door. “No fun at all.”
