Walk.

[BlacLord™]

Through the trees,
crunching the autumn leaves,
inhaling and breathtaking,
nature's life cycle continues.

Swiftly through the fresh breeze,
soaking up colours of all types,
vivid and refreshing,
nature's colour awakens.

Connecting to many,
listening and watching,
unique and fascinating,
nature's life is calm yet bustling.

 

[villain55]

Nice poem

 

[Byron123]

I really the subject of your poem, though, if I may be picky, it might be better not use the word through twice because it really stands out since it's used both in first and second stanza. Other than that, beautiful

 

[BlacLord™]

Nice poem

Danke.

I really the subject of your poem, though, if I may be picky, it might be better not use the word through twice because it really stands out since it's used both in first and second stanza. Other than that, beautiful

Danke.

It's anaphora.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

nice hmm

 

[BlacLord™]

nice hmm

Danke.

 

[Hotaruko]

great poem

 

[BlacLord™]

great poem

Danke.