Wait for Darkness - chapter 1

Guess what language am i using in those strange words like praesentia or Vis

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Well, this was the chapter number one to see the prologue follow this link:

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Getsuga is in a dark room, any doors, windoms or walls could be seen, a voice was heared...

Voice: Don't die again untill you find me, ok?

Getsuga: Don't worry, I think it's just a matter of time.

--Getsuga wakes up, he is in some hotel somewhere in Tokio, Mephiles is in front of him.--

Mephiles: Hyello! Ready for the first work? - says Mephiles with a sarcastic smile in his face.

Getsuga: Just say what you want... demon! - the word demon was said with anger.

Getsuga never gets angry, but since he came to Tokio the presence he was searching was getting closer, he tought. He was just feeling it.

Mephiles: Here is your teacher - when he says that someone appears: yellow eyes, black hair with gentleman style, a small mustache and he was wearing a black smoker.- Mr. Siperian.

Siperian: His praesentia really is something isn't? I didn't believe when you said it had the dark element...

Getsuga looks at siperian with a cold look and says: Really? What the hell is praesentia? And what about dark element?

Mephiles looks at Siperian, and then at Getsuga and walks away saying: Well, I hope you two becomes good friends!-says with the same sarcastic style ever-Bye Getsu-chan.

Siperian closes his eyes and suddently the temperature dropped to less than zero, and it starts snowing.

Siperian: Well -he smiles- this is my vis divina, the divine force, also called Vis, and sure you can see my body, hear my words, smell my breath, taste my blood and feel my skin like every normal person does to another normal person. But you can also feel my presence, don't you? That's my Praesentia. About the element... You can see it's cold, don't you? My element is ice. Yours is Darkness, one of the neutral elements, the true despair is your element, congratulations.
And everyone with Vis can use it to boost the resistence, durability, strenght, speed, etc...You are just starting so thats all you can do.

Getsuga: And why don't you have a ring?

Siperian: I'm not human, I can control my Vis just fine.

Getsuga: I already saw that normal people lives in the same place but in a different reality, isn't that so?

Siperian: You are smart, too, lucky me... Thats right. The building you destroyed the other day, in the normal reality you was before dying, more or less, was an earthquake, so don't worry.

Getsuga: Okay, I get it, and what are we going to do?

Siperian: Kill some rebels, the weakest, some minora peccata, little sins.

Getsuga: Well, time to do my part, sensei...-Says the last word with almost as sarcasm as Mephiles.

---At the same time, in the normal reality, for now, a man with the same age as Getsuga, white simple shirt, blue jeans and with the deep look of his grey eyes with dark circles around, and black hair, he had the look of someone who didn't sleeped for some days.

He was reading something and whispering: The earthquakes... They happen when i feel them...Oaahhh - he puts his hands in the head and screams - More presence, stop!!! - He stops screaming, starts crying - sto...stop, stop, stop - silence, and then he says - I'm going after it.

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Sorry about the grammar or spelling errors, i'm from Portugal, not really used to write big things in english, the school exercices are nothing compared to this.

Say what you thing please, and give me hints, I really apreciate:)

p.s. Yeah, i know its a bit small for a chapter, but they will grow if i get excited and starts making the story a bit better
 
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