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I'll post the jutsu, just read over it, give a brief explanation on its function, and ask any questions you may have. After that, its yours.

Katon: Gladsheimr – Fire Release: The Fifth Universe
Type: Offensive / Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Forming a sequence of 3 seals, the user will draw on a large amount of chakra and release it as a mass of ash. The countless particles will tightly pack together and create a gargantuan form. The structure itself is 15 meters tall and covers 15 meters in every direction across the ground. Resembling a large, demonic courtyard and gate, filled with lances, spikes and other sharp objects of varying sizes which line up along the perimeter of the jutsu, half a meter from the edge of the ash-based floor. On one side of the technique, there is a large gate overshadowed by a larger skeleton, which is the only part of the technique which is 15 meters tall. The ash structures which compose the jutsu are solid, and whilst the structure itself cannot combust through any means, the ash that composes it is heated, meaning that whilst it is active on the field, it will cause burn damage should one make contact with their bare skin (15 damage in moment of contact). However, this is not the only feature of the technique. Each turn, a wave of smaller skeletons, each the size of a fully-grown adult and made of ash, will passively spawn from the structure itself. They possess a limited extent of autonomy, which allows them to act by user instruction or independently. They can pursue a target(s) at running speed equivalent to the user’s base speed, and upon reaching them, they will self-destruct, each individual skeleton causing a short-range explosion. Unlike the original structure, these skeletons are capable of combustion and exploding. Individually, they are easy to deal with, but are highly dangerous as a collective, especially if their numbers build overtime uninterrupted. The strength of each individual skeleton is divided amongst the total number of skeletons that spawn per wave, with their combined strength being equivalent to the rank of the original technique e.g. 4 skeletons in a single wave each individually possess B-Rank strength. The final feature of the technique is the largest skeleton, which itself lies dormant when the technique is created. Upon mental command and at the cost of a move, the user may awaken the largest skeleton, allowing it to take part in the battle. Whilst it is active, this skeleton is able to traverse the entire field freely, and gains an extra 10 meters in height. This skeleton, as an A-Rank component of the technique, is able to utilise generic A-Rank blasts, beams, and streams of Fire Release once per turn. It possesses the same form of limited sentience as lesser skeletons, but is not capable of exploding by any means, and instead possesses six arms rather than two. Whilst the large skeleton is active, the main structure of the technique can only create up to a maximum of 2 skeletons per turn passively, as opposed to the original 4. Once the jutsu expires naturally, the ash will naturally lose its form and crumble harmlessly, and the user must wait a single turn before using this technique again.

⇒ Lasts 4 turns
⇒ Usable 2x

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Create a courtyard of solid ash that naturally cannot combust. At one end of the courtyard is a much larger skeleton, 15 meters tall. The ash burns at a rate of 15 damage per turn with those in contact with it. I assume this doesn't include the user?

Every turn the structure is active, 4 skeletons will spawn from the technique with B-Rank strength each. Alongside this natural strength these skeletons can combust when they reach their target. They are autonomous from the user, allowing a great degree of freedom. The short-range explosion bit is cool, quite large considering the quantity produced.

And then of course you have the skeleton at the back. He can move in the courtyard freely, using A-Rank applications of basic Fire Release.
 

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It does include the user unfortunately. It was different in the previous submission, but that's just the way the dice rolls e.e

It doesn't have to be four btw, you can control how many are created, with a minimum of one with S-Rank strength, and a maximum of four with B-Rank strength each. You can't control how the damage splits between each one, only the number, divisions are equal.
 

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It does include the user unfortunately. It was different in the previous submission, but that's just the way the dice rolls e.e

It doesn't have to be four btw, you can control how many are created, with a minimum of one with S-Rank strength, and a maximum of four with B-Rank strength each. You can't control how the damage splits between each one, only the number, divisions are equal.
yeah cause im really gonna make less than four

ha good one

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(Fūinjutsu: Sainō Kōshōjin) – Sealing Technique: Ars Notoria
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique derived from the Dead Demon Consuming Seal; this technique enables one to view the spirits of the dead. The Dead Demon Consuming Seal, when summoning the Shinigami, enables some level of spiritual awareness and connection to the Death God. This is evident in Hiruzen’s capability to view the Death God alone when summoning it, something that Orochimaru was only able to do when his spirit was being pulled from his body. With this technique the user establishes a connection to the afterlife, rather than the singular Shinigami, allowing them to view the spirits of those who have perished long ago wandering the earth. This does not allow the user to view spirits of those from Yin Release, or other clan abilities. Rather, this is a cosmetic technique designed to allow the user to view the dead strictly for RP purposes. Once activated, lasts until deactivated.

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(Katon: Gladsheimr) – Fire Release: The Fifth Universe
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Forming a sequence of 3 seals, the user will draw on a large amount of chakra and disseminate it throughout the ground. The surface of the ground will be converted to ash, generating a large demonic courtyard. The structure itself is 15 meters tall and covers 15 meters in every direction across the ground, filled with lances, spikes and other sharp objects of varying sizes which line up along the perimeter of the jutsu, half a meter from the edge of the ash-based floor. On one side of the technique, there is a large gate overshadowed by a larger skeleton, which is the only part of the technique which is 15 meters tall. The ash structures which compose the jutsu are solid, and whilst the structure itself cannot combust through any means, the ash that composes it is heated, meaning that whilst it is active on the field, it will cause burn damage should one make contact with their bare skin (15 damage in moment of contact). However, this is not the only feature of the technique. Each turn, a wave of smaller skeletons, each the size of a fully-grown adult and made of ash, will passively spawn from the structure itself. They possess a limited extent of autonomy, which allows them to act by user instruction or independently. They can pursue a target(s) at running speed equivalent to the user’s base speed, and upon reaching them, they will self-destruct, each individual skeleton causing a short-range explosion. Unlike the original structure, these skeletons are capable of combustion and exploding. Individually, they are easy to deal with, but are highly dangerous as a collective, especially if their numbers build overtime uninterrupted. The strength of each individual skeleton is divided amongst the total number of skeletons that spawn per wave, with their combined strength being equivalent to the current strength of the courtyard e.g. the S-Rank courtyard can generate four B-Rank skeletons per turn. Each skeleton will last for four turns after the turn in which they are created. Once the jutsu expires, whether naturally or being neutralised by another technique, the courtyard and spawned skeletons will lose their form and crumble harmlessly, creating a large deposit of inert ash, and the user must wait a single turn before using this technique again. This technique lasts for four turns and can be used twice per battle. No Fire above A-rank for one turn after this ends.

(Kamunagara) – Manifestation of Law
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Kamunagara is not itself an ability that is consciously activated or utilised like one would a jutsu. Rather, it is a product of one’s intent, or emotions, influencing their chakra in such a way that it visibly manifests as a pattern or object that hovers behind or around the user. One such example of this is extreme bloodlust or rage, which has been seen before by Naruto and Zabuza, under the influence of the Kyūbi and sheer force of will respectively. The object, pattern or symbol produced is unique to every ninja, and thus it can be considered as a physical manifestation of their will and being. The color produced is dependent on the type of emotion, e.g. anger will produce red, sadness will produce blue, happiness will produce yellow, etc. While the behaviour of chakra in this technique is able to give off specific auras and incite particular sensations in other people, it cannot paralyse or frighten others on the level of something such as Killing Intent. It also cannot physically interact with or cause any kind of injury to an opponent. This ability, functionally, is passive in nature, as it doesn’t require activation or any form of active input from the user, and is entirely cosmetic.




Farao no Hōrei #2. Horusu no Shinsei – Pharaoh’s Decree #2. Horus the Highborn
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-10 per duplication/merge, -10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Drawing on a large amount of chakra, the user will perform 4 handseals, and spew forth a mass of condensed fire. Using shape manipulation, the fire will take on the form of a large falcon 5 meters tall with a wingspan of 10 meters. When released, the falcon is able to act of both its own accord and on instruction of the user. It can circle the foe from above and survey the battlefield, or pursue the target relentlessly, as examples. Due to the tangible nature of the fire, bestowed upon it by way of being condensed, the falcon will easily deflect weapons such as kunai and shuriken, and interact with techniques based on the S&W scheme. Upon hitting a target, the user can trigger the falcon to violently explode, creating a blast that spans slightly above short-range (7 meters), incinerating anything within, at the cost of a move. What makes this technique special is not its sentient nature, but its ability to split into pieces. Should the user desire it, they can forcefully split the falcon into separate pieces, allowing for offensive action that covers more than one angle. The user is able to decide the amount of power that is divided between each individual falcon, with the size of each falcon being indicative of the individual power differences. Obviously, the power of the explosion is scaled according to the rank of the falcon; weakening as the rank drops. At will, the user can also re-merge the individual falcons back into its singular, original form before splitting, or only re-merge some of the falcons. Once this is done, the strength and size of the falcon will return to its original state prior to splitting, whilst a falcon that has partially re-merged will upscale in strength but will obviously not be as strong as a fully re-merged falcon. During flight, the falcon(s) is/are able to rotate extremely quickly, generating a vortex of fire, which counts as a move. Anybody trapped inside the vortex will experience suffocation due to the lack of oxygen and smoke, whilst also suffering from severe burns from the heat of the flames. The high speeds of the rotation of the vortex will restrict movement, and being trapped inside for longer than 1 turn will lead to loss of consciousness and death.

⇒ Lasts 4 turns
⇒ Splitting and re-merging falcons count as moves
⇒ Usable 2x per battle




Farao no Hōrei #3. Ōshima no Oshirisu – Pharaoh’s Decree #3. Osiris the Overlord
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (same as targeted technique)
Description: This technique is not one that is intended to directly produce or empower fire, but rather, to exert total control over and manipulate pre-existing fire on the battlefield. By tapping into the chakra within a fire technique of the user’s creation and making three handseals, they can harness it and thus directly control it through hand gestures and movements, identical in principle to how the individual fireballs of the Phoenix Sage Fire technique are controlled through their individual chakra masses, and more. For example, the technique could be used to change the trajectory of a fire technique they released that would ordinarily miss due to the opponent evading it, or manipulating a fire technique to branch out and attack. Alternatively, the user could take control of one of their techniques and manipulate it to clash with an opponent’s jutsu. This accounts for the most rudimentary and basic application of the technique. The ability to control jutsu on the field is not merely limited to manipulation of trajectory, but the ability to reform the very structure and composition of the technique itself. Harnessing the chakra within a fire technique, the user is able to apply shape manipulation to it, allowing them to alter the composition and form of the technique. For example, breaking the Great Fireball technique into two fireballs instead of one, and performing shape manipulation to give them the form of weapons. It is also possible to merge components of a technique, even entire techniques themselves, into others using this jutsu. Instead of the chakra mass being broken apart into separate pieces, the individual pieces of chakra are compounded into each other to form a single one. The technique(s) being acted upon will behave according to its new rank (e.g. A-Rank + A-Rank = S-Rank, B-Rank/2 = C-Rank). Whilst this technique is in use, the user can only perform fire release jutsu and elements that have fire as a component.

⇒ Usable 4x per battle
⇒ Usable once per turn
⇒ Control of a technique/usage of this jutsu lasts for the duration of the turn that it is used in.
⇒ Can only be used on one technique per usage




Farao no Hōrei #5. Sōzō no Sugata – Pharaoh's Decree #5. Semblance of Creation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Forming a set of 3 handseals, the user will focus their Fire chakra around the target, manifesting it around them in a formation which closely resembles the appearance of an atom. The structure itself is singular in nature, meaning that though the ring-like formations of fire around the target appear to be separate pieces, the entire technique is one whole and behaves as such. The atom itself spawns at short-range around the target, and then closes in at an alarming rate. Throughout the atom, volatile energy constantly pulsates throughout, causing it to pulse with light and heat at a constant rate. Once the atom completely converges on the target, which is done by it approaching within 1 meter of the opponent, heat will gather and concentrate in the center of the technique; which is also the location of the target. The heat will form itself into a ball of fire that rapidly expands to encapsulate the space within the atom. The orb of heat will explode once it completes the expansion and fills the atom, which will result in a localised (short-range) explosion that will easily eviscerate anything caught inside. Should the atom’s structure itself make direct contact with the opponent, they will be dealt major burns.

⇒ Usable 3x per battle
⇒ No S rank and above Fire in the same turn

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Katon: Zonnenkind – Fire Release: Sun Child
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: N/A (+20 to Fire techniques)
Damage: N/A (same as host technique)
Description: This technique is considered as a special application of Fire Release: Gladsheimr. The use of this technique is reliant on the presence or use of any ash-based surface or structure created by the user, as without one, it cannot be used. Once this condition is met, the user is able to perform this technique in two different ways; in the same timeframe as the creation of another Fire Release technique which is made primarily of ash, or as a technique which is applied to an ash-based structure or surface after it has been created. Both usages consume a moveslot, but the latter usage requires 2 handseals. The user will infuse more chakra into the ash, which imparts a special function upon it. In the same vein as Gladsheimr, the ash will passively spawn a number of skeletons each turn, with a maximum of 4 per turn being created. The strength of each individual skeleton is divided amongst the total number of skeletons that spawn per wave, with their combined strength being equivalent to the rank of the technique it is used on. Each and every skeleton possesses the same features and abilities as mentioned in Gladsheimr, with the exception of the largest skeleton, which cannot be created through this technique, unless the ash surface in question is at least similar in size and scale to the ash structures created in Gladsheimr. The duration of this technique is equivalent to the technique it is applied to, e.g. a technique that lasts for 4 turns will spawn skeletons for 4 turns. Once the host technique expires, skeletons will no longer be produced, but the skeletons themselves will remain on the field until they explode or are otherwise neutralised. Whilst this jutsu is applied to a host Fire technique, it cannot be used on another until the host technique expires. This technique cannot be used on Gladsheimr, as it is simply a supplementary ability that extends the special function of Gladsheimr to other techniques.

⇒ The targeted technique cannot have been targeted by any other supplementary jutsu prior to this technique’s usage, nor can they be the target of other supplementary techniques after this ability is activated on a given jutsu
⇒ This jutsu cannot be used on supplementary techniques which create ash
⇒ This jutsu cannot be used whilst Gladsheimr is active, nor can Gladsheimr be used whilst this technique is active
⇒ Usable 3x per battle

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Farao no Hōrei #1. Uraeusu wa Kesshin – Pharaoh’s Decree #1. Uraeus the Unwavering
Type: Offensive / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: The user will concentrate their fire chakra (and make 4 quick handseals) within their body and form a fiery cobra that loosely coils around the user’s body. This fire cobra can be mentally manipulated, allowing the user to control it without any sign or warning for the opponent. Whilst wrapped around the user, the jutsu is considered in resting position, and possesses defensive ability in its greatest capacity. Whilst coiled around the target in resting state, the snake will have slight gaps in its body, enough to provide the user with sightlines on the opponent whilst being thin enough to ensure maximum protection without letting anything in. Due to the chakra being condensed, giving the fire tangibility, it is able to defend easily from attacks of both tangibility and intangibility. Weapons such as kunai, shuriken or swords will easily be deflected, whilst elemental attacks interact with the technique according to the S&W scheme. Upon command, the fire can be manipulated to attack a target in any manner, as a whip, a surging beam, or even as a coiling snake to constrict. This being said, the fire is capable of dealing physical damage characteristic of blunt force and sharp-edged objects, even piercing through objects, due to the tangibility of the fire. The fire is capable of splitting off into branches in order to attack multiple targets, but will not suffer from any rank or strength decreases, as the branches are still connected to a singular structure. Whilst commanding the snake to attack outside of mid-range, it uncoils around the top half of the user’s body, leaving them vulnerable to attack. Though, the snake can be controlled to return to the user at any point, as quickly as it left. Even when coiled, it is still easily taller than any normal human being. When lashing out and pursuing targets, the snake moves at high speeds, making it dangerous for opponents in close quarters and escaping to far ranges alike.

⇒ Lasts 3 turns
⇒ Usable 2x per battle




(Farao no Hōrei #6. Sentōin Montu) – Pharaoh’s Decree #6. Menthu the Militant
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank: A (S)
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60 (80)
Description: By performing a sequence of 3 seals, the user will create a familiar made entirely of ash, whether by creating the ash themselves, or manipulating pre-existing ash of their own on the field (e.g. a Fire technique made of ash) to summon the familiar. If used through the latter usage, the familiar’s creation does not weaken the original jutsu which it was spawned from, though its strength is dependent on the technique it comes from. For example, if used on anything less than an A-Rank structure of ash, its damage will decrease to reflect the source technique (e.g. B-Rank source will create a B-Rank familiar). This principle can be applied to S-Rank structures as well, instead resulting in the familiar’s damage being increased, though only a single familiar can be created possessing S-Rank strength. The familiar will possess the appearance of an armored humanoid, standing at approximately two meters tall. Within its chest cavity is a small but powerful flame that keeps the familiar partially ignited at all times as a cosmetic effect, and also acts as a source through which it can form tangible weapons made of these flames by igniting and shifting the ash’s shape. These weapons can reach up to 3 meters in size, with a whip being extendable to mid-range. The strength is a single construct is equivalent to the strength of the familiar, and is divided equally in the case of more than one construct. The familiar is also able to use any Fire Release techniques the user knows within reason (techniques with pre-requisites that cannot be met, e.g. Wall of Flames, which requires a lighter, cannot be used). Both variants of this jutsu last for four turns, and cannot be used again within the turn of deactivation or in the user’s next turn. The familiar must be created at least five meters away from the target enemy. The user will be unable to use S-Rank and above Fire Release for the turn following the creation of an S-Rank familiar. This jutsu can, overall, be used thrice per battle.




(Farao no Hōrei #8. Anubisu no Jūshō-do) – Pharaoh’s Decree #8. Anubis the Austere
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10)
Damage: 60
Description: Anubis the Austere is a technique combining the ash variant of Fire Release and Fūinjutsu. This technique can be performed in the same timeframe as another ash-based Fire technique, or by forming two seals and targeting an active technique currently on the field. Alternatively, the user can target inert (unranked) ash that was created as a result of a technique's function or its dissipation. Regardless of method, this technique is activated by the infusion of additional chakra, whereby the user creates a familiar that, rather than roam the field, will reside within the body of ash that was imbued with the user's chakra. Upon creation, the familiar will generate an invisible barrier (though still detectable through sensory, Dōjutsu etc.) around the ash it inhabits, its perimeter maintaining a consistent five meter distance from the ash itself. The barrier detects any and all physical movements inside it, and detection of an opponent will trigger the emergence of the familiar, though it also obeys the will of the user, and can be withheld to attack at a more opportune moment. In terms of physical appearance, it is a muscular humanoid with the head of a jackal. Because of its size, it never fully emerges from the ash it resides in, only a part of its body will. It can reach up to the barrier's perimeter; five meters outside the ash it lives in, and can attack the opponent with clawed hands, a tail which functions as a whip, and its jagged maw. In the case of multiple opponents, the familiar can emerge in up to different four places at once, using a different part of its body (head, arms, tail) to attack each target. The power of each limb does not decrease in this case, as they all originate from the singular familiar. The strength and duration of the familiar is dependent on whether it is created within an active ash-based Fire technique or an inert body of ash. In the case of the former, the familiar will adopt the strength of the jutsu it targets, reaching a maximum of base S-Rank power, defaulting to A-Rank strength if the targeted technique is weaker, and its duration will always become equivalent to four turns. Should the technique be activated on an inert body of ash, the familiar will possess A-Rank strength and last for four turns, costing 5 chakra per turn to maintain. This technique can be performed four times per battle, and cannot be used again for the duration of the turn in which it deactivates or the subsequent turn.




Katon: Brahmastra Kundala / Fire Release: O' Brahma, Curse Me
Type: Offensive / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique has two methods of being performed. The first involves the user simply coating a held weapon, such as a shuriken, kunai or sword, in ash. The second usage instead requires handseals, and is used in situations where the user doesn’t have a weapon on them to use, or cannot apply the jutsu to their present weaponry for any reason. By performing 3 handseals, the user will create a construct of ash, being a maximum of 3 meters in length and width. When the weapon is thrown or collides with another object, or any other event occurs which will produce friction, will cause the Fire Release chakra within the weapon to activate, setting it alight with the flames of Fire Release. When the coated weapon is thrown, the weapon will erupt in a short-range blast of highly intense flames upon collision with any object, target, or surface. This ignition allows it to play on par with other Ninjutsu, particularly large-scale techniques. Blasts are always angled away from the user so as to prevent them from being injured. When interacting with other techniques, the clash follows the S&W of Fire Release.

⇒ Coatings and constructs last for 3 turns
⇒ Usable 5x per battle
 
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