CheesyNaruto
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Vorikans
Chapter 1:Little Tommy
It’s the year of 2045. The world and it’s people have been stripped of their freedom, and humans are treated like worthless filth.
The planet has been put under siege by an alien race; a race with such inquisitive intelligence and devastating weaponry. The people were in turn overwhelmed;they had no choice but to admit an embarrassing defeat. It was, like some could say, an ant vs. an elephant. Predicatable outcome.
And so we set our scene in what was formally New York, and now known as the alien’s HQ. A young boy lays in his cell, depression slowly turning into insanity. Little did the deprived boy know that his world was about to change forever…
In the prision…
Tommy: God dammit, I hate this place. Let me out you green freaks!
(Tommy is 7 years old and has a limited understanding of the world, not to mention his vocabulary. He's got brown short hair and has an average height and weight.)
*Tommy runs to the lasered door, only to be blown away by it.*
*Realising his efforts are futile he goes back to his corner, crying*
Tommy: Man, them meanies have got me stuck here, how the hell am I gonna get out?!
*An alien walks to Tommy’s cell and disarms the laser door*
*The alien uses a voice converter to speak English, as do all aliens when speaking the humans*
Alien guard: Come with me human, the Jargonas need feeding.
*Tommy is taken away by 2 alien guards*
Tommy: (thinking) I sure hope they don’t mean I’m the food!
*Tommy is taken to a bloody, cold room which reeks of death.*
*The aliens place Tommy in a guillotine, ready for a brutal beheading*
Tommy: (crying) Please don’t kill me, I’m only 7 and..and *yells*
*An alien guard signals the executioner to use the guillotine*
Tommy: No please don’t, NOOOOO!
What will happen to little Tommy?
Find out next time in the next chapter of Vorikans!
This is my first go at a fanfic, so please give me feedback and constructive criticism.
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