Vocaloid #2: Rin Kagamine

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Manners? Hah! Manners run away screaming from Kagamine Rin!

Basic Information

Name: Rin Kagamine
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Clan: N/A

Looks

R in has blonde hair that's about shoulder length with four, white hair clips that keep her hair from getting in the way of her large, ocean blue eyes, and a really big, white bow at the top of her head. The shirt Rin wears resembles something that a sailor would wear a bit except that her shirt is sleeveless so that the 02 tattooed on left arm can be seen, she has a yellow bow, and the shirt stops just above her navel. As an alternative for not having sleeves on her shirt, she wears dark gray sleeves that start at her forearm. Rin's shorts are also dark gray but her orange belt kind of takes away some of the dullness of the color. Her shoes are white with these gray leg warmer-like things that go up to approximately her knees.
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Personality

Rin is one of those types of people who is really hyper but has a short fuse. Even though she gets mad easily, it's even easier to make her happy. Everyone has that soft side inside of them but Rin, just like a few others, doesn't really show it to others. When she's sad Rin tends to keep it to herself so that others won't be burdened with her problems and the only way she does express her feelings is through singing but there is that rare occasion where she will confide in her twin brother, Len, when he's concerned and tries asking her about it. To put it bluntly, Rin and Len were always close and tended to linger around each other when there was no one else to depend on and they seemed contempt with it even though they were complete opposites. Since Rin was really energetic and outgoing, she usually was the one leading her timid twin around. You could say this is one of those "Opposites Attract" things going on here but in a different set of circumstances.

Village Info

Village of Birth:
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Konohagkure
Village of Alliance:
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Kirigakure

Rank and Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Unofficial Sage
Specialty: N/A
Elements:

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-Wind Release: Needs Training.

Ninjutsu: Academy Rank Jutsu.

Background Information

In Konoha, Rin had a pretty uneasy start in life. Her mother died soon after giving birth to her and her brother and at age fourteen their dad died from a heart disease he had since he was young. Ever since the death of both of their parents, Rin and Len had been doing their best to succeed in missions and help people out with minor things so they could earn enough money to keep their house and take care of themselves. For about half a year, no one had known of the twins' situation because of how happy they seemed to be when doing all these things, especially Rin. Despite her over-excited, energetic, and hyper nature, Rin tended to break down into tears or become infuriated a lot faster than her cool and collected brother but at the same time she had a really convincing smile. You wouldn't suspect her to be mourning over a death with a grin on her face. On the inside, Rin truly was sad but didn't want it to show. She didn't like to see other people depressed so she did her best to keep others happy even when she was sad.

One day, when Rin wasn't busy on a mission or running errands for people of Konoha, she was relaxing by a tree and singing a melancholy song about her parents' death. Kakashi had returned from a mission and overheard Rin singing. Out of curiosity, he asked what exactly had happened and she answered back quickly, showing no hesitation. The sensei offered his help but Rin politely turned it down. She didn't want to burden others with her problems and actually enjoyed going on missions to help with her training. Every here and there, Kakashi would help the twins anyway without asking for any payment in return but Rin and Len both decided they'd repay him someday for his help anyway. Rin ended up befriending Kakashi. He was more of a second father to her and her brother and whenever she got the chance, she'd spar with him to test if she was excelling in her skills as a kunoichi or not.

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( Special Thanks to Délta for this Edit. :happy: )

~Approved~
 
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Haha, great job, Shy!

Some tips for your bio:

1. The font is too big. Maybe make it a little smaller?

2. Put your basic jutsu between spoiler tags: [ spoiler ] [ /spoiler ] <--- (remove the spaces)

3.
As for your theme song, try this: [ video=youtube; (here, you want to put the youtube video code) ] (here, put the direct link to the video) [ /video ]

example (from my bio, just quote my reply and see how I did it):
[VIDEO=youtube;TzFl6sWHmXI]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TzFl6sWHmXI[/VIDEO]

Great character choice, here's to getting it approved! :win:
 

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Don't worry about it, this first attempt is the hardest. Some quick tips,
1. Dat FONT is HUGE.
2. You can upload videos from youtube for you theme song by copying the link and pasting like this:
[video]http://some link at end of link put /video inside [].
3. You can put a border around text by:

text, then at end of text put /border with [] around it.
4. you can hide your jutsu list with the spoiler tag:
e rank jutsu info, then at the end put /spolier in [].
If you have any questions, just ask and I'll help =D

Here's a page of code commands:
 
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Cursed Prince

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Reduce the font Size >_<

Nice bio though...
 

shycatgirl00

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Thanks Ausar! I didn't realize the font would be that big. ^^"
 

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I hope your bio gets approved. Why did you use such a large font?
Nice bio
 

Perception

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What was your inspiration for the character?
 

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Vocaloid! I made a Miku one just recently! Nice Rin bio :3
 

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:(....why didn't you tell me, i said i'd make you a bio if you ever wanted to join the rp :(

its a nice first bio though, i look forward to seeing you Rp with us, come join Kirigakure ^_^

EDIT: i PMed you a bio, delete the one you have and copy and paste the text inside the PHP code here, and enjoy Lol
 
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Ermergerd, I have Kaito *^*
Nice bio x3
 
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