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Juinjutsu/Ototon: Morsmorde ) - Cursed Sealing Arts/Sound Release: Morsmorde
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Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 ( -10 per item marked and for communication, -20 per turn for barrier )
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is based foremost on Fuuinjutsu such as the Tongue Twister Seal and the various types of Ototon Jutsu. The user creates a "cursed" seal on his arm called the Dark Mark, resembling a skull with a large intricate snake extending from it's mouth. This seal itself allows for a myriad of effect, the first and most basic ability being it allows the user to communicate with others who have been branded with the Dark Mark. Through simple touch and fueling of chakra, this allows the user to create a burning sensation which is procured through the intense vibrations resonating through the seal and being replicated in the sister seals marked across others. This acts as a sort of honing device, alerting those with the mark ( either as a group or individually ) to the user's location. In addition to this, the user is able to mark items with the Dark Mark, allowing him to summon the specific item should it be needed to him, much like a Reverse Summoning and Summoning: Lightning Blade Creation jutsu mixed. Up to 4 items can be marked each use. In addition to this base effect, the user is able to actively stimulate the seal and cause another effect. Through direct contact with the seal, the user releases sound vibrations through the seal and it erects a cursed barrier around the field. This barrier is designed not to harm, but to hinder and taunt the opponent; when erected, those within the barrier's 15 meter radius are left unable to enter or exit the barrier. The key to it's exit and entry is the seal on the user themselves, meaning only those with the Dark Mark are able to cross the barrier. Due to it's sealing abilities, it prevents the ability to use high level ninjutsu that require concentration, namely S rank and higher Ninjutsu ( this would encompass Kinjutsu, medjutsu, S/T jutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc - various branches of Ninjutsu itself ) and Forbidden ranked Elemental Ninjutsu. To break the barrier itself, multiple walls (at least two) must be attacked with S ranked strength simultaneously.
Note: Barrier can only be erected twice per battle with at least a 2 turn break in between use. The barrier itself is of A rank strength.
Note: The communication aspect as well as basic summoning can be done an unlimited amount of times, as long as the jutsu is posted with each use and abiding by the 3 jutsu per turn rule.
Note: While the barrier is in effect, the user can only use Sound, Lightning or Wind and cannot use any other Fuuinjutsu techniques.


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A curse seal technique, so the primary purpose is to control, empower or restrict the opponent. The seal allows communication, and uses sound ninjutsu as basis. Alternatively, it can be placed on a objects to summon them towards user or erect a barrier that prevents use of S rank Basic Ninjutsu, Advanced Ninjutsu, F rank Elemental ninjutsu.

My question: While the barrier is in effect, the user can only use Sound, Lightning or Wind
That restriction was created when sound was still considered an element. Could the user use basic and advance ninjutsu (excluding fuuin) alongside sound, lightning and wind?
 

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Logically, yeah. However, it'd probably be best to abide by the restriction until the technique is updated. As, in the case of a quote, the checker would most likely rule against the usage of anything not specified in the restriction. Did you want anymore CJs?
 

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( Ototon: Avada Kedavra ) - Sound Release: Avada Kedavra
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 ( -40 to user )
Description: The Avada Kedavra jutsu is one of the three Unforgivable Jutsu, usage of any appropriate for a death sentence on the user. Generally considered the most fatal of the three, the Avada Kedavra is the jutsu associated with Death, as that is it's primary effect and objective. Beginning by channeling large amounts of Ototon chakra, the user begins releasing this chakra in two waves; the first wave is released by the uttering of the word "Avada". By speaking this word, the user releases several Hindering Sound waves of high frequencies, but low energy, causing waves to affect the target, causing localized paralyzation of certain parts of the target's body. This is achieved through the sound waves vibrating intensely and causing the targeted body part to be affected by alternating waves, essentially preventing movement ( the chosen body part can be limbs, such as the arm or legs, organs, such as liver or tongue, or even small digits, such as fingers and toes ). This doesn't include the heart nor lungs, however. While this effect is immediate, it's main goal is to prevent the target from moving while the latter, more destructive part of the jutsu is released towards the opponent. Upon speaking the word "Kedavra", a low frequency but high energy sound wave is released from the user's hand or weapon, moving towards the enemy. What is unique about this wave is that it is clearly visible in the form of a bright green wave that appears like a jet of light. Accompanying this bright wave, the sound of rushing wind can be heard, almost as if an invisible force was rushing through the air, though this is just the sound created that occupanies the Ototon jutsu. As the bright green wave travels, it causes no noticeable damage on contact with a foe, it's effect being more internal than external. Upon hitting a sentient, living target, the wave passes through the body of the target, causing high level vibrations in the targeted area, enough to cause minute and cellular destruction of such a level that the area is left unusable, it's cells fractured beyond normal repair ( this does not include high level Medjutsu, like Sakura's Yin Seal ). Upon ripping through a target, the sound wave forces a target backwards 10 meters, causing greater damage. The damage the user takes pertains to mostly the arms, preventing high ranking Taijutsu of A rank and above the same turn.

Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle but only once against each opponent
Note: After each usage, the user must wait at least 3 turns before using again.
Note: After using, the user is left unable to use any Ototon jutsu above A rank the rest of that turn and S rank and above next turn.

( Ototon: Cruciatus Jutsu ) - Sound Release: Cruciatus Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The Cruciatus Jutsu is one of the three Unforgivable Jutsu, usage of any appropriate for a death sentence on the user. Considered the most sadistic of the three, the Cruciatus Jutsu is associated with Pain, as that is it's primary effect and objective. Beginning by channeling high amounts of Ototon chakra, the user begins by releasing this chakra through the usage of a lone word. Upon speaking the word "Crucio", the user triggers a high frequency, but low energy wave to be released, casting a genjutsu on the target, casting excruciating pain on the victim. As the genjutsu is cast, the target doesn't see his surroundings change at all, only the user speaking the words and feeling as if pressure is pushing on the body, seeing slight ripples emanating from the user, causing the target to potentially believe this is a projectile approaching the target that is causing damage. Considering the fact that this curse doesn't physically harm the victim, it only stimulates pain receptors, overloading the with such high signals that it impairs motor abilities over time, the concept of pain being so high that they cannot physically move. While seemingly lasting a long time due to the echoing of the user's voice in the genjutsu, the actual illusion lasts only 2 turns, causing pain the entire process, but should the user subject an opponent to it for more than a turn, the target's mind will be broken, causing them to become vegetative, and comatose.

Note: Note: This jutsu can only be used 3 times a battle, lasting 2 turns each use.
Note: After each usage, the user must wait at least 2 turns before using again.

Same as the above
 

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Both techniques trigger by vocabulary rather than hand seals. Avada Kedavra, is two part technique: When the user says avada, the technique sends out a hindering sound wave, that affects a select region of the body. Saying kedavra releases a low frequency but high energy visible sound wave that travels towards the target. Continued contact with the wave begins to disintegrate inner organs.
Cruciatus similarly activates on command, crucio. The technique stimulates pain receptors around the body using a sound based illusion. While it deals no physical damage. The emotional strain can break a persons mind

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