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Special Credit to Kazuya who inspired me deeply

I was born in the streets, they called me a ''fighter'' , i never backed down from a fight, I hit them until they cant go up, i was grown up this way, in the hood where fighting, drugdealing, vandalism happens everyday...

My life is a survival contest... i dont now if i will live tomorrow... or today.. who knows?

I live with my mother and my younger brother , our father got murdered by some whiteass mothafuc*ers racist... my mother is poor and my brother is in jail for smoking mary jane and taking cocaine... I will follow another path, i will prove to those white people that i can become succesful, skin colour doesn't matter, religion doesn't matter, where you from doesn't matter, its you, yes yourself who matters... everyone is different... dont judge a book by the cover they say...

22 April 2011
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My mother commited suicide... my brother got killed in a gangwar .... Im all alone, the socialisation decided to adopt me to parents who are willing to accept me, i need to get away from the streets, i needed a new life, where i can study and live in peace... no more fighting.

-Court-

???- Khaled Mohamed Fahli Jama, your hereby living with the Family Gustavsson, they are willing to accept you as a family member.

Khaled- Thank you.

-Outside Family Gustavssons House-

Khaled- *So this is the place... its so quiet and peaceful... not like back home*..

Khaled knocks on the door beel

???- *Opens the door*

Khaled- Hi, I'm Khaled Jama, and...

???- COME ON IN KHALED! we have been expecting you for hours now! Im Ms: Helena Gustavsson, welcome to your new home.. step in !

Khaled- Thank you so much Mam *walks in*

Today.. my new life started, Mother, Brother... and Father, I will make you guys proud... i will show everyone that i can become succesful, rest in peace...

As i started to live with this new family, I slowly enjoyed life, no more fighting... i could play basketball outside in this neighborhood without anyone disturbing me, even though some whitepeople looks at me in a ugly way its ok.. im used to it though... I like my new family aswell... the husband of the Family Mathias Gustavsson is a really nice man... he earns all of my respect.. a really good guy... and the Wife.. Helena.. Damn real MILF! .. they also got childrens... a girl named Matilda... age 17, Shes hot... 9/10... heck i give her a 10/10.. i would do anything to bang her... but unfortunately she has a boy friend... and then her younger brother Mikeal... age 14... great geek... i mean.. if he was cocky.. i suppose.. i would have beaten him up if no one was watching...

May 3 2011

Highschool starts today.. im a freshman... sucks... well... lets just wait and see how highschool is... i wonder if there is anyone strong... , i dont wanna fight.. and im not here to fight.. but i want to try some of this kids out.

Khaled- So this is my new school huh? it's so big compared to the middle school i went...

Matilda- Haha dont compare our high school to a ghetto middle school... well go to your first class now! I have to go see my boyfriend

Khaled- Whatever.... Peace!

Khaled- *Lets find a really tall guy and beat him up... but wait khaled.. you not here to fight.. and you dont want to fight... wtf.. Well i just wanna see whose the strongest *

as the time past... finally .. lunchbreak has come...

Khaled sees a forever alone guy sitting ''alone'' in the lunch cafeteria

Khaled- Sup mate! Im Khaled!

Hank- H.....i... im Han...K

Khaled- Cmon bro.. say it more clearly... anyways.. do you know whose the strongest guy in this school?

Hank- Yes... It's...

???- *slaps Hank on the neck* Hey KID! gimme your lunch! or do you want to get beaten up?

Hank- Take it please dont hurt me!

Khaled- *Shieet hes huge*

???- Whose your Nigger friend her? Whats your name Punk?

Khaled- Im Khaled, who tha fuc* are you calling me a nigga? wanna get beaten up?

Louise- Im Louise, Senior.. Guess your a freshmen if you dont know who i am... do you dear challenge me punk?

Khaled- Oh Louise.. Call the Police... LOL , Yeah im up! where and when ?

Louise- 3PM in the park just outside school.

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Romours spread through hole school, almost everyone knew about the fight now...

3PM Park outside school

Louise- So you came Nigger? Why dont you go back ´to your choclate moma and cry?

Khaled- What you call my moma you mothafuc*ing white trash! *Runs towards Louise with hes right fist*

Louise- To slow! *Dodges the fist* *seizes khaleds right arm* *makes him fall down*

Khaled- *Jumps back on hes feet, goes again with hes right fist*

Louise- Good Fighting spirit but, *Blocks the fist, punches him in the face, kicks him in the stomach, and elbows him on the back*

Louise- Are you done yet?

Khaled- *stands up slowly...Nose bleeds* Not yet... I will...

Matilda and her boyfriend appears in the crowd and..

Matilda- please stop it! Help him A...

???- *Fimps the cigarr* Oi! Louise... thats enough...

Louise- Huh.. Why are you here....

???- Why are you acting so high and mighty... have you forgot?

Louise- BRING IT ON MOTHAFUC*ER! *Runs towards the unknown man and tries to hit him with hes right fist*

???- *Dodges, in a second 3 Punches in the stomach and a kick in the face then the unknown man uses a uppercut on Louise cheek*

Louise- urggh.... help me...

???- have you forgot who i am Louise?...

Louise- No... Tigerfury...

???- Arian Shoeibi

First chapter i re edit later
 
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I don't really read most Fanfics, story's whatever you want to call it, but i gotta say this was awesome.
Thanks man, glad you liked it :)

Its very good really Khaled lol xd

:)

Love it
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Haha im from sweden xD , this story is half based on my friends life :p anyways thanks man:D!

that was the Best Fanfic i Ever read Nice work rep+
really:O thank you! i keep writing it xd
 
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