[CJ] Vegeta and Noni trade [DO NOT READ!]

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20. (Katon: Kakatsu no Verbti)- Fire Release: Jurisdiction of Verbti
Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (Created short range, long range movement)
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 chakra per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: N/A (80 for explosion, 20 when contact with the enemy is made)
Description: The user will gather a large amount of fire chakra, perform 3 hand seals, and release outward from their mouth a dense amount of ash. The user through shape manipulation will turn the ash into a demonic, and aggressive creature. Having a wavy exterior and body composition similar to a human, black in color, with a reddish hue in the outer layer of the creature. This beast of ash is around two meters in length. This beast has a special ability, through its impressive movement and lightweight of ash, it can travel along the ground with great ease and float in the air (movement that can be traced with the naked eye), but also interact with dense, earth-like material, burning anything it touches into ashes, the beast will use this ash it burns for its own deeds, allowing the ash to essentially "stick" on to the beast. This has the beast become larger in size (doubles in size with every interaction it comes with, and the structure must be larger then its body is currently when interacting with it) growing with every earth object it comes into interaction with, however, its overall ability and power remains relatively the same, it simply contains an advantage in brute force. Its second ability, is its adaptability with its own body structure, the beast can split himself in multiple "clones" of itself, each being weaker then the other, with up to eight being able to be made (Each would be C-Rank). These beasts will remain relatively the same, in how it attacks, being able to burn and create explosions relative to its size and rank. They can also come back together, reforging into themselves and its previous state as one body, or simply less bodies then before. Each time they split, the bodies will be decreased in half from its previous size. How the creature moves is specific to the users need, its movements are governed entirely by the user's mental commands. This beast can subdue the opponent by covering them completely with its body, burning them to pulp, it can perform basic body-art movements, where it can skin a person with every attack, or it can be set a blaze to create a large explosion (explosion size is equivalent to the size of its body).

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Beast lasts for four turns (unless cancelled)
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Requires two turn cool down before re-use
Note: Cannot use fire S-Rank or above the turn the beast is created
Note: Follows elemental strength and weakness
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Here is the entire technique as is. As you notice a lot of writing, must I describe it again to you? Well i guess I have to <_<

This creates a humanoid like beast as shown in the spoiler composed of heated ash. Now this beast has some nice perks. Firstly, it can destroy earthly material and have the debris stick onto its body, constantly growing in size. It essentially doubles, but whatever material it doubts from, the earthly composition it takes over must be larger then the current body for it to take over. This doesn't increase damage but does make its brute force tougher (also notice the explosion of the ash can also be the size but be careful not to get yourself caught) The beast moves rather fluidly, and in a sentient like manner. The second ability is how the body can split (up to 8, with each being C-Rank), they can also come back to reform, either to create the same single body or just fewer bodies. Its main way of attack is body art attacks, engulfing the opponent, and explosion.

Any questions?
 

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You would do pushups :/



20. (Katon: Kakatsu no Verbti)- Fire Release: Jurisdiction of Verbti
Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (Created short range, long range movement)
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 chakra per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: N/A (80 for explosion, 20 when contact with the enemy is made)
Description: The user will gather a large amount of fire chakra, perform 3 hand seals, and release outward from their mouth a dense amount of ash. The user through shape manipulation will turn the ash into a demonic, and aggressive creature. Having a wavy exterior and body composition similar to a human, black in color, with a reddish hue in the outer layer of the creature. This beast of ash is around two meters in length. This beast has a special ability, through its impressive movement and lightweight of ash, it can travel along the ground with great ease and float in the air (movement that can be traced with the naked eye), but also interact with dense, earth-like material, burning anything it touches into ashes, the beast will use this ash it burns for its own deeds, allowing the ash to essentially "stick" on to the beast. This has the beast become larger in size (doubles in size with every interaction it comes with, and the structure must be larger then its body is currently when interacting with it) growing with every earth object it comes into interaction with, however, its overall ability and power remains relatively the same, it simply contains an advantage in brute force. Its second ability, is its adaptability with its own body structure, the beast can split himself in multiple "clones" of itself, each being weaker then the other, with up to eight being able to be made (Each would be C-Rank). These beasts will remain relatively the same, in how it attacks, being able to burn and create explosions relative to its size and rank. They can also come back together, reforging into themselves and its previous state as one body, or simply less bodies then before. Each time they split, the bodies will be decreased in half from its previous size. How the creature moves is specific to the users need, its movements are governed entirely by the user's mental commands. This beast can subdue the opponent by covering them completely with its body, burning them to pulp, it can perform basic body-art movements, where it can skin a person with every attack, or it can be set a blaze to create a large explosion (explosion size is equivalent to the size of its body).

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Beast lasts for four turns (unless cancelled)
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Requires two turn cool down before re-use
Note: Cannot use fire S-Rank or above the turn the beast is created
Note: Follows elemental strength and weakness
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Here is the entire technique as is. As you notice a lot of writing, must I describe it again to you? Well i guess I have to <_<

This creates a humanoid like beast as shown in the spoiler composed of heated ash. Now this beast has some nice perks. Firstly, it can destroy earthly material and have the debris stick onto its body, constantly growing in size. It essentially doubles, but whatever material it doubts from, the earthly composition it takes over must be larger then the current body for it to take over. This doesn't increase damage but does make its brute force tougher (also notice the explosion of the ash can also be the size but be careful not to get yourself caught) The beast moves rather fluidly, and in a sentient like manner. The second ability is how the body can split (up to 8, with each being C-Rank), they can also come back to reform, either to create the same single body or just fewer bodies. Its main way of attack is body art attacks, engulfing the opponent, and explosion.

Any questions?
great jutsu, and just one question...what happens when this comes into contact with Mountain Smash 0_0...holy crap!
 

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Lmao I knew you would ask, what do you think?
MS is the new Swamp lol, countering it is the new fad. I'll leave that up to the viewers imagination...*looks at the screen*...no further questions...

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(Katon: Shakunetsu no akuma) - Fire Release: Scorching Demoniac
Type: Supplemental/Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The brother jutsu to Scorching Rage and Scorching Berserker. Scorching Demoniac looks to capitalize on Scorching Berserker's ability to focus and sustain the fiery aura of katon chakra around oneself. By making the Dragon seal and farther manipulating the chakra while also molding more katon into the aura (After already using Scorching Berserker), it can be made to shine brightly outwards along the same lines as Fire Release: Fire Whisp, as the fiery golden chakra aura grows outwards and upwards 2 more meters surrounding the user to 2 1/2 meters around/above, and it's heat and strength increases from A to S rank in terms of raw damage to the touch. This can also slightly blind the enemy like looking momentarily into the sun, just nowhere near as intense, and will hinder their vision for one turn. The user has a couple options, as once the chakra is honed and focused to this point, it's very intensified and short lived, and will fade away at the end of the turn. The user can perform punching type motions, firing up to 4 bright 1 meter diameter fireballs at the opponent (also along similar lines of the Fire Whisp technique, strength divided depending on how many are fired off), or the user can make a mad run for the enemy attempting to ram them or use taijutsu/kenjutsu strikes against them. Finally, they can focus the aura around them to a single area, clapping their hands together palms facing outwards, streaming the golden fiery chakra from around themselves siphoning it off them like done in Scorching Berserker, however the strength of the stream would be S ranked and would be able to strike opponents long ranged (as opposed to mid ranged in Scorching Berserker) and would be 3 meters in diameters. No matter what is done (including nothing), the effects of Scorching Berserker will end at the end of the turn if this is used.

~Notes~
-Can only be used 2 times per battle
-Scorching Rage can not be used again for 4 turns
-No S rank Katon or above in the next turn
-Damage to taijutsu is increased +5 to the +10 from Scorching Berserker for a total of +15 from the intensity of the heat.
-User is bound by the same restrictions as Scorching Berserker in terms of maneuverability and can only use katon elemental jutsu/taijutsu/kenjutsu while active.
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Firing off the fireballs will use up the entirety of the cloak/aura
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Since we went over this extensively in PM, I'll just ask if you have any questions, as I believe you understand it quite well as a holder of it's brother techniques.
 

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Well firstly, fire and earth are equivalent in damage, MS has chakra, and the amount it has would prevent this technique to absorb it, unless the user stops sapping chakra to it and it remains a regular stone structure, from their you can start to absorb it. I will use MS for reference on how big it gets and how its done logically.

Well to tell you about it, yes, it can collect the debris of MS, but it would have to remain in relative contact as it continues to grow, and it depends on the size of the MS. It doubles in size, and the MS must continue to be as large for it to double in size. So if its 40 meters large, I would venture to say it would collect the debris, and the amount of debris taken from the rock section will be the equivalent to the size it is increased. So it starts off as 2 meters large, it comes into contact with MS, makes it 4 meters, that decreases a MS section exactly 2 meters, continue on contact the beast will become 8 meters, that collects 4 more meters of rocks and debris (by this time the section is 34 meters large). It remains on contact and doubles again making it 16 meters large, this takes another 8 meters off of the MS (26 meters). And now it doubles again, making the beast 32 meters, taking another 16 meters of debris off the section (making it 10 meters large). At this time, it will no longer be able to obtain debris. Hopefully I did my math right, but you get the jist of it. Now asking how long it will take to fully

However, be extremely careful, this beast is composed of ash that is explosive, and the explosion covers the radius of the source. So be sure to use this discreetly so the opponent doesn't notice ;).

And no, no questions, we discussed it. Good jutsu.
 
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I see, it is best to use logic like you said and not be all "I absorbed your whole freakin MS and made a giant Gedo statue sized ash being". Thanks bro ^^, the jutsu is yours sir.
 
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