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Sup ^^

So heres my tech, analyze it would you kindly

(Suiton: Mune no sono) - Water Release: Will of the Deep
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+15 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user will focus their chakra and form the Boar>Dog handseals and create a (basketball sized) orb of water that floats in the air next to them, within short range. The main purpose of this technique focuses upon the creators next use of a projectile technique or a technique that originates from them and moves towards the opponent. For when this occurs the orb of water will release a simple blast of water that is B ranked, this blast of water will combine with and accompany the technique that the creator used if it is compatible. It will continue to do this for each compatible technique that the user employs automatically, until it is destroyed or dispersed(A separate +20 chakra cost is applied for each blast.) This technique will take a small constant toll on the users chakra to replenish itself with water as it is being used. Compatible techniques are in general techniques that originate from or close by to the user and travel towards the opponent and can be used with all elements excluding fire and those based on fire if they meet these requirements. Anything which would be weakened by the water or vice versa (anything that weakens the water) are considered incompatible.

Note:
~The orb can release a maximum of 4 separate blasts
~The orb is created short range but the blasts can reach up to long range
~Lasts 3 turns before dispersing
~Can only be used 2 times
~Cannot use water techniques above A rank while this is active
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
 

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It's pretty cool, firstly can be used with any element except fire or fire related ce's, then the orb itself being able to use 4 blasts of water which add B rank power to whichever projectile based attack they combine with. I would also imagine it could be used as a defense by itself, shooting a B rank blast out even if not combined with another jutsu.

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(Genjutsu - Yuugen Sho) - Illusionary Arts - Phantasmal Fists
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (if the strike connects)
Description: The user begins by molding chakra and sending it into an opponent's system, putting both hands palms out facing the enemy triggering the illusion. They will then begin to circle both hands outwards like making a sideways 8 as the user disappears from view, only the encircling hands remain as the background goes black and more hands appear encircling the area 360* horizontally around the target. In reality, the user swiftly maneuvers to behind the enemy, molding Futon chakra to the hands and strikes, thrusting with both hands together like a blade hard enough to pierce bone.

~Notes~
-Can be used 2x's per battle
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
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Its a cool genjutsu, blocks your opponents sight of you while also allowing you to flank and attack them at the same time. Very useful if you are fighting someone who doesn't like CQC, like me :p
 

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G'day Houdinii

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( Hebi Kuchiyose - Raditz ) Snake Summoning - Raditz
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplemental
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By wiping blood on their snake tattoo and molding chakra, the user can summon Raditz to the field. Raditz is a snake that lives in muddy, murky environments near Ryūchi Cave and thrives in it being able to move swiftly thru-out it. He is 40 meters long and 3 1/2 meters diameter with black and brown scales and has a wide enough head to support several people. He is relatively older than most snake summons, however he doesn't seem like it as his speed is that of a Sage Ranked Tai specialist. Living in this muddy murky swampland he studied for years to master Earth release, becoming able to use all jutsu up to S ranks without the need for seals and can use Snake Ninjutsu as well. His years of studying Earth release in his natural environment has led him to gain some special abilities, he created his own techniques for using muddy environments in his attacks by coating his scales in a specially molded earth chakra. Instead of sinking in a watery/swampy or muddy environment as seen when Manda was assaulted, he is able to move about freely as if swimming with ease and doesn't sink. He is able to be summoned above ground as well as underground, and if he is summoned under a normal earthen environment, upon summoning him the area he is summoned in will be converted to mud upon his summoning, allowing him to emerge from below ground. Due to coating his scales in specially molded earth chakra, he is immune to attacks B rank and below following logic and S/W. Due to his immense size coupled with his scales, a melee attack from either his head or tail will do tremendous damage. A bite from him would cause paralysis after 2 turns to the affected area, and he is large enough to easily consume someone whole.

~Notes~
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Cannot be on the field if Manda is present
- Stays on the field for 4 turns or until dispersed
- In the turn summoned, no Snake Ninjutsu above A rank after Raditz is summoned
- If changing the consistancy of the ground during summoning, it counts as 2 moves though occurs in the same time frame

(Hebiātsu - Akireusu no shi) Snake Arts - Death of Achilles
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Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40 (15 per turn after initial bite)
Description: By molding chakra and wiping blood on their summoning tattoo, the user summons 2 snakes 1 inch in diameter and 1 foot long that travel down the users pant legs entering the ground behind each heel. Being small in size, it takes the 2 snakes 1 turn to travel to mid range, and 2 turns to travel up to Long range. the snakes are fairly weak, and only live for 2 turns as is but they have 1 purpose in life upon being summoned, to seek out the opponent and bite into their Achilles tendon on each of the opponents legs. Upon biting, they pump venom into the enemy that begins to numb their legs. After 1 turn movement speed will drop 1 rank and after 2 turns the legs begin to go completely numb making speedy movements impossible. After 3 turns the victim will have the same limitations as the 1st turn, then on the 4th turn they will return to normal speed.

~Notes~
- Can be used 4x
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Must have signed the Snake contract and completed Snake Ninjutsu training to use
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G'day Houdinii

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( Hebi Kuchiyose - Raditz ) Snake Summoning - Raditz
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplemental
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By wiping blood on their snake tattoo and molding chakra, the user can summon Raditz to the field. Raditz is a snake that lives in muddy, murky environments near Ryūchi Cave and thrives in it being able to move swiftly thru-out it. He is 40 meters long and 3 1/2 meters diameter with black and brown scales and has a wide enough head to support several people. He is relatively older than most snake summons, however he doesn't seem like it as his speed is that of a Sage Ranked Tai specialist. Living in this muddy murky swampland he studied for years to master Earth release, becoming able to use all jutsu up to S ranks without the need for seals and can use Snake Ninjutsu as well. His years of studying Earth release in his natural environment has led him to gain some special abilities, he created his own techniques for using muddy environments in his attacks by coating his scales in a specially molded earth chakra. Instead of sinking in a watery/swampy or muddy environment as seen when Manda was assaulted, he is able to move about freely as if swimming with ease and doesn't sink. He is able to be summoned above ground as well as underground, and if he is summoned under a normal earthen environment, upon summoning him the area he is summoned in will be converted to mud upon his summoning, allowing him to emerge from below ground. Due to coating his scales in specially molded earth chakra, he is immune to attacks B rank and below following logic and S/W. Due to his immense size coupled with his scales, a melee attack from either his head or tail will do tremendous damage. A bite from him would cause paralysis after 2 turns to the affected area, and he is large enough to easily consume someone whole.

~Notes~
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Cannot be on the field if Manda is present
- Stays on the field for 4 turns or until dispersed
- In the turn summoned, no Snake Ninjutsu above A rank after Raditz is summoned
- If changing the consistancy of the ground during summoning, it counts as 2 moves though occurs in the same time frame

(Hebiātsu - Akireusu no shi) Snake Arts - Death of Achilles
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Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40 (15 per turn after initial bite)
Description: By molding chakra and wiping blood on their summoning tattoo, the user summons 2 snakes 1 inch in diameter and 1 foot long that travel down the users pant legs entering the ground behind each heel. Being small in size, it takes the 2 snakes 1 turn to travel to mid range, and 2 turns to travel up to Long range. the snakes are fairly weak, and only live for 2 turns as is but they have 1 purpose in life upon being summoned, to seek out the opponent and bite into their Achilles tendon on each of the opponents legs. Upon biting, they pump venom into the enemy that begins to numb their legs. After 1 turn movement speed will drop 1 rank and after 2 turns the legs begin to go completely numb making speedy movements impossible. After 3 turns the victim will have the same limitations as the 1st turn, then on the 4th turn they will return to normal speed.

~Notes~
- Can be used 4x
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Must have signed the Snake contract and completed Snake Ninjutsu training to use
Any questions?
I only have a question regarding this section on Raditz:

if he is summoned under a normal earthen environment, upon summoning him the area he is summoned in will be converted to mud upon his summoning

Does this mean up to mid range is turned to mud? Or just the area immediately around his body like 1-2m?
 

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I only have a question regarding this section on Raditz:

if he is summoned under a normal earthen environment, upon summoning him the area he is summoned in will be converted to mud upon his summoning

Does this mean up to mid range is turned to mud? Or just the area immediately around his body like 1-2m?
I would say the immediate area around his body, however with a 40 meter long body this leaves much to translation. For example, you could summon him coiled effecting a larger more local area or summon him lengthwise for a longer but narrower area
 

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I would say the immediate area around his body, however with a 40 meter long body this leaves much to translation. For example, you could summon him coiled effecting a larger more local area or summon him lengthwise for a longer but narrower area
Alright awesome, here's my tech

(Katon: Kuryouken)- Fire Release: Baskerville
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description:
The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated ash will spew forth. This ash has a unique composition that unlike normal ash is formed of dense, heavy particles which without the aid of chakra, would only hang in the air for a limited time before falling to the ground.(As a secondary effect the heavy ash is unaffected by conventional wind blasts that could disperse regular ash.) Upon being formed the ash will first quickly surround the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud of ash shaped like the head of a Hellhound.

As it surrounds them the user will manipulate the ash so as to not come into direct contact with it, keeping it a distance from their body without jeopardizing its form.Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it unscathed(following elemental adv/disadv). The user can form either one, two or three heads depending on their needs but doing so however will decrease the rank for each respective head (eg. S rank each for two heads).

The Hellhound is intangible in form, allowing it to pass around and through solid/physical obstructions that would hinder tangible objects while remaining unaffected. As the Hellhound makes contact with and passes through targets or techniques it would incinerate them from the exposure while causing a layer of ash to stick to them. The layer of ash would encase the target or technique, forming a compact shell over them that would make it quite difficult to move. The heavy ash by nature is sparingly spread out while in the air which makes it impossible to ignite under normal circumstances, however when it is concentrated in a layer it is able to be ignited by external sources which has explosive results. When the hellhound is sent to attack the entirety of the ash goes with it, so it no longer surrounds the user.

Note:
~Can only be used once per battle
~No katon techniques above S rank in the same turn or the next
~Due to the damage to the users arms they cannot use arm-based taijutsu attacks in the same turn or the next two turns.
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

Any questions?
 

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Alright awesome, here's my tech

(Katon: Kuryouken)- Fire Release: Baskerville
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description:
The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated ash will spew forth. This ash has a unique composition that unlike normal ash is formed of dense, heavy particles which without the aid of chakra, would only hang in the air for a limited time before falling to the ground.(As a secondary effect the heavy ash is unaffected by conventional wind blasts that could disperse regular ash.) Upon being formed the ash will first quickly surround the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud of ash shaped like the head of a Hellhound.

As it surrounds them the user will manipulate the ash so as to not come into direct contact with it, keeping it a distance from their body without jeopardizing its form.Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it unscathed(following elemental adv/disadv). The user can form either one, two or three heads depending on their needs but doing so however will decrease the rank for each respective head (eg. S rank each for two heads).

The Hellhound is intangible in form, allowing it to pass around and through solid/physical obstructions that would hinder tangible objects while remaining unaffected. As the Hellhound makes contact with and passes through targets or techniques it would incinerate them from the exposure while causing a layer of ash to stick to them. The layer of ash would encase the target or technique, forming a compact shell over them that would make it quite difficult to move. The heavy ash by nature is sparingly spread out while in the air which makes it impossible to ignite under normal circumstances, however when it is concentrated in a layer it is able to be ignited by external sources which has explosive results. When the hellhound is sent to attack the entirety of the ash goes with it, so it no longer surrounds the user.

Note:
~Can only be used once per battle
~No katon techniques above S rank in the same turn or the next
~Due to the damage to the users arms they cannot use arm-based taijutsu attacks in the same turn or the next two turns.
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

Any questions?
No questions, very nice technique
 

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Here you go sir.
(Katon - Shisan e no hai) Fire Style - Ashes to Asset
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A unique fire style jutsu based on chakra flow abilities. This particular technique focuses on the unique aspect of some fire release jutsu, namely those based on explosive ash, such as Asuma's technique he used vs Hidan. By forming this explosive ash the user is capable of applying the ash to his limbs or any weapons he uses. By activating this jutsu the user is able to release the ash during taijutsu or other weapon attacks. Though this costs a move slot each time the ash is released. By using the momentum behind physical attacks the user of this jutsu is capable of sending streams of red hot ash from the seals to augment the range of the attacks and cause increased damage in close range. However as to prevent the user suffering from his own jutsu, the ash from this seal can only be caused to explode with a subsequent technique this technique must be a higher ranked fire technique due to the strength of the chakra stored in the ash release and it's density. In regards to scaling each time the jutsu is used, the user may release an amount of ash with a maximum range of mid. If it was to travel in a straight line from the user to mid ranged. A total of 15 meters, this can also be used to form the ash in to smaller patterns that instead have wider ranges provided they follow the initial dimensions. This ash behaves in an adhesive manner sticking to enemy targets similar to boiling sugar.

~Notes~
- Once activated remains active for the rest of the battle.
- Each time the ash is used it costs a move slot.
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

(Katon - Yūgure ni dasuto) Fire Style - Dust to Dusk
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The follow up jutsu to the Technique - Ashes to Asset, this technique allows the user to supercharge fire chakra in to any ash present on the field from the ashes to asset technique. Causing the ash to become incredibly volatile before triggering a large explosion that causes considerable damage to anyone caught in it's range. The size of the explosion will be entirely dependent on how much ash is present on the battlefield.

~Notes~
- Usable twice per battle.
- Once used the user may not activate ashes to assets abilities for three turns.
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

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Here you go sir.
(Katon - Shisan e no hai) Fire Style - Ashes to Asset
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A unique fire style jutsu based on chakra flow abilities. This particular technique focuses on the unique aspect of some fire release jutsu, namely those based on explosive ash, such as Asuma's technique he used vs Hidan. By forming this explosive ash the user is capable of applying the ash to his limbs or any weapons he uses. By activating this jutsu the user is able to release the ash during taijutsu or other weapon attacks. Though this costs a move slot each time the ash is released. By using the momentum behind physical attacks the user of this jutsu is capable of sending streams of red hot ash from the seals to augment the range of the attacks and cause increased damage in close range. However as to prevent the user suffering from his own jutsu, the ash from this seal can only be caused to explode with a subsequent technique this technique must be a higher ranked fire technique due to the strength of the chakra stored in the ash release and it's density. In regards to scaling each time the jutsu is used, the user may release an amount of ash with a maximum range of mid. If it was to travel in a straight line from the user to mid ranged. A total of 15 meters, this can also be used to form the ash in to smaller patterns that instead have wider ranges provided they follow the initial dimensions. This ash behaves in an adhesive manner sticking to enemy targets similar to boiling sugar.

~Notes~
- Once activated remains active for the rest of the battle.
- Each time the ash is used it costs a move slot.
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

(Katon - Yūgure ni dasuto) Fire Style - Dust to Dusk
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The follow up jutsu to the Technique - Ashes to Asset, this technique allows the user to supercharge fire chakra in to any ash present on the field from the ashes to asset technique. Causing the ash to become incredibly volatile before triggering a large explosion that causes considerable damage to anyone caught in it's range. The size of the explosion will be entirely dependent on how much ash is present on the battlefield.

~Notes~
- Usable twice per battle.
- Once used the user may not activate ashes to assets abilities for three turns.
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

Any questions?
No questions, a couple of cool techniques. I'll have your custom order delivered shortly
 
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Katon: Subete no Shōhi Ago)-Fire Release: All Consuming Maw

Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage:N/A (+1 rank to first jutsu)
Description:
This is a unique technique utilising the flammable gas form of Katon similar to the canon Mist Blaze Dance jutsu. To begin the user will string two additional hand seals onto the performance of another jutsu. By doing so they will form a cloud of flammable and extremely volatile gas in an area chosen by the user and in an amount proportional to the first jutsu.

Alone this gas is harmless to any targets but due to its nature it is able to be ignited by any heat source in the area it is formed in, however slight it may be. For example any naked flame, heat present in sparks or generated through friction would be enough to ignite the gas and produce violently explosive results. The user can employ chakra control to angle the explosion away from the first jutsu to prevent any unwanted negative effects.

Note:
~Can only be used 4 times
~Cannot be used in consecutive turns
~Can only be taught by Mellow
- only useable on A ranks and below
 

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Katon: Subete no Shōhi Ago)-Fire Release: All Consuming Maw

Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage:N/A (+1 rank to first jutsu)
Description:
This is a unique technique utilising the flammable gas form of Katon similar to the canon Mist Blaze Dance jutsu. To begin the user will string two additional hand seals onto the performance of another jutsu. By doing so they will form a cloud of flammable and extremely volatile gas in an area chosen by the user and in an amount proportional to the first jutsu.

Alone this gas is harmless to any targets but due to its nature it is able to be ignited by any heat source in the area it is formed in, however slight it may be. For example any naked flame, heat present in sparks or generated through friction would be enough to ignite the gas and produce violently explosive results. The user can employ chakra control to angle the explosion away from the first jutsu to prevent any unwanted negative effects.

Note:
~Can only be used 4 times
~Cannot be used in consecutive turns
~Can only be taught by Mellow
- only useable on A ranks and below
Excellent, no questions..

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