[Other] Unconventional in a conventional world

[Kishi Uzumaki]

I remember that childhood
there never was search for happiness
search for a path to follow
just by playing with friends
or running in the woods
we just felt satisfied , in peace

then came that teenage years
the time changes whoosh in to our lives
suddenly there came a competition
for recognition , for acceptance and for status
when we grew older competition broadens
wanting to have wealth , career and achievements

we begins to lose ourselves
in this pursuit of things
that suppose to give us a meaning
sometimes others put their beliefs
on us , usually to see our successes
sometimes maybe because they wants
to convince themselves
they are in the right path

we can't stand alone against the tides
as human beings who longs for acceptance
because tides always win
and sea will drag you in and make you drawn
so choose to not go against the tides
or go with the tides , just swims across the tides
maybe not a rebel who fighting against the world
but I'm living a unconventional life , in this conventional world .



Hope you guys enjoy it =D

​

 

[Douryoku]

Can you teach me, too, how to phrase pseudo-profundity?​

​

 

[Erebus]

Nice, i really love the last part(what's it called again stanza?), which i could write stuff like this too.=D Probably not gonna happen though.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Can you teach me, too, how to phrase pseudo-profundity?​

here are some examples use this way

War is peace
Freedom is slavery
Ignorance is strength

try them you will learn

Nice, i really love the last part(what's it called again stanza?), which i could write stuff like this too. Probably not gonna happen though.

Thanks

You must be registered for see images

why not give it a try ? start writing them if you are not afraid of failure
but failing is what makes you a good poem writer .