[Approved] Tsukuda Furumi

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Name: Tsukuda Furumi
Nickname: /
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Clan: /

Looks: Furumi is a short girl of average weight and build, with thick eyebrows and dark blue eyes. She has black, curly shoulder-length hair, which she ties up in a high bun. Working on the family farm on the outskirts of Konoha earned her a tanned, slightly ruddy complexion, as well as a mild tolerance to heat. She usually wears a short, weathered kimono with its sleeves ripped, a pair of woolen ankle-length leggings and geta sandals. Aside from an unaesthetic burn on her jawline and neck, Furumi has an overall pleasant appearance.

Personality: Confident and curious by nature, she doesn't back away from hard work, especially when training. While mostly quiet and laid-back, she acts friendly when approached and is genuinely interested in others' welfare; it is her naive love of people that made her enroll in the Academy. She wishes to one day become a strong ninja and a medical-nin of renown, and dreams of having one large, happy family.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: /

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Elements: Wind - needs training
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move (but cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History: Young Furumi grew up in the Tsukuda farms, working and playing in the fields near Konoha. A healthy upbringing in a tight-knit family taught her the value of life, friendship, and family, and so, she yearns for strong, meaningful bonds. At about 8 years, she enrolled in the Ninja Academy, with high hopes and dreams of becoming one of Konoha's protectors. Not being part of a shinobi clan made her somewhat reserved around her peers, but being a hard-worker earned her good grades, and eventually confidence. At some point before her graduation, her childish curiosity led Furumi to experiment with exploding tags, but not having the proper training, it failed miserably. Thanks to the experienced medical-nin at the hospital, she survived to tell the (now) amusing tale. Needless to say, Furumi decided to pursue the noble art of healing and stitching poor injured shinobi.

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Put the age as 13 or 14, not 13-14. And you might wanna add pictures using this code. If you have questions, you can VM me.

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I think this is the first bio I've seen submitted by a new member that has little and minor problems, unlike most other submissions -.-

Some pictures would be nice though, you can just upload pictures from the internet. The age has to be either 13 or 14.

You can freely edit the bio until it gets approved.

Other than that, nice bio and welcome to the RP.
 

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So this is your custom made biography?
Yup, just don't edit it when it gets approved.
I think this is the first bio I've seen submitted by a new member that has little and minor problems, unlike most other submissions -.-

Some pictures would be nice though, you can just upload pictures from the internet. The age has to be either 13 or 14.

You can freely edit the bio until it gets approved.

Other than that, nice bio and welcome to the RP.
Thanks a lot, guys! :D
 

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Yeah I'm a little harsh but I agree with Silver. The bio is indeed good and one of the best made by a new RPer considering there pretty much aren't any mistakes and most new bio creators make plenty mistakes. Some not even following a template let alone the one they literally give you to use. But find at least one picture that fits your characters looks. It is okay if it is a little off but I can assure you that it will get declined without at least one picture.
 

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Yeah I'm a little harsh but I agree with Silver. The bio is indeed good and one of the best made by a new RPer considering there pretty much aren't any mistakes and most new bio creators make plenty mistakes. Some not even following a template let alone the one they literally give you to use. But find at least one picture that fits your characters looks. It is okay if it is a little off but I can assure you that it will get declined without at least one picture.
Thank you. ^^
It is really alright if I just find some picture that fits on the interwebz?
In retrospect, it might seem hard to approve a faceless character.
 
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