TRON (NB Version) ~ Chapter 1

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The NB Legacy ~ Chapter 1



In the future, in the year of 2045 there is no such internet surfing forum that were made by mankind but a real-experienced forum world where you get stucked in a completely mere computer world. The City of NB is one of the advance city in the world, no mankind had yet to surpass their technologies. The city plays as a game arena where people fight in the gladiator ring. Though, the government goes corrupted and they revolve the city as a pit of hell. No one ever succeed to escape from the world and go back in the world of living. No one ... but some day someone will!


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Narrator: He opened his eyes, as if just woke up from the sweetest dream of no one ever had before. He scan the room and never thought that he might be living here forever. It is almost 4 years living here, stucked in a world of computer. He then leave the room and walked out from his house, do it like how his daily routine used to be. As he about to leave his house, he saw that someone is waiting for him with his super techno car parked outside his apartment.

???: Tendo? What make you came here?

Tendo: Waiting for you boy, come on we got show to catch up.

Narrator: Tendo used to be a rich man in the town. He is lucky to have such a good business in his restaurant. Rumor say that he sells drugs in the black market, making him to be that rich as his restaurant is such a failure and there's no way for him to be a Kumi millionare.


???: Show? What show?

Tendo: You typical Fallen. I knew you will forgot about it, that's why I came here to pick you up. Today is Monday isn't?

Fallen: ... Monday? Oh yes the Game?! Damn! I almost forgot about it. What match we have this time?

Tendo: Oh, Dont be a loser. Dont tell me every single thing you forget. Today is such an epic match. The Mod is going to kick some ba'day ass. Come on, we don't have much to talk.

Narrator: Every Monday, the Government will have the gladiator game, where everyone will watch people fight to death, it is better known as the game of TRON. Both of them then ride the NB-Mobile 318* that is belong to Tendo. He is a rich guy after all. That car almost worth 2million kumi, and it is hard for a normal forumer like Tendo to afford buying it. The city is always been made differently from the world of living, all the creation over here is always something that mankind can't archive to complete in the world of living. All this credits always goes to the Great Versuvio, the creator of the NB city. But after that incident when the Great V was assassinated, corrupted government started to rule over the city and declared themselves as the new admin, and evolve the world into a world of people must fakely fear.
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It is the latest released from the NB Mobile Company run by the famous man in the city, The Dark king. Due to the law of the Mod, the car which originally was meant to be the fastest car gotten disapproved by the Mod's policy at their first attempt, as the Government are afraid that terrorism might misused the facility for battle against the Government. Thus, the speed of the car was then set at the standard speed or a normal car, in order to get it approved by the Mod.
The car is said to be the most expensive in the city and those who owned it has to be very rich to afford it.

Narrator: Getting to the Gladiator Ring, they have to go to the main city of NB where that is where the Goverment are, it probably explain why the city has high security such as soldier and Mod* patrolling everywhere and CCTV can be found every corner. And getting inside the stadium, they have to show their Identify Card or better known as ACCOUNT to the guard before they can park their car.

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MOD (Moderator) is a code name given for the military police of NB City, directly orders under the Admin or better known as the government of NB. Their job is to ensure peace and stability in the city and to prevent such crime and terrorism act. They usually wear mask as part of their semi-armed uniform which is a protective gear. The usage of the mask is probably to hide their identity, other than that it might also protect them from a poisonous or harmful gas.
MOD has different kind of gear and uniform at each different rank as the MOD consists of several classes; highest is known to be the Successor of MOD.
Forumer used to fear Mod just because they have the power to "BAN" them or in order word they have the authority to arrest and sentences a person to the prison accordingly to what crime they committed.




Mod: Good evening Forumer. Can I see your ACCOUNT please, and also a license from the right owner of this car.

Tendo: *Hands the card* Here you go boy! Let me think? Im sure you know me soldier...Im one of the richest man in this city!! Hahaha...right?

Mod: Shut up you dawg. Also, I dont care to know a guy named Tendo *Hands back the card back to Tendo and Fallen* Okay, you can go now. Enjoy the show. Also, you better support Antikorper not the opposite team and dont let me catch you both do that or I will just BANNED you. You here that?

Tendo: Dont worry boss. We will always support the Mod and the Government. Forever and ever! *close the wide screen and starts driving*

Fallen: .... Who's Antikorper?

Tendo: Good grief, almost everything you forget you typical ... Well, he is one of the successor of Mod. He is said to be the best player of TRON, no one ever defeated him before in the NB history. I wonder who will be his opponent for tonight.

Narrator: After the guard let the gate open, they then continue drive in and straight to the carpark located at the basement of the Gladiator Ring. After they had parked their car, they straight for the stadium to see the match. After finding their seat, they waited getting ready for the match to start. The atmosphere was totally energetic, everyone who is cheering and shouting couldn't wait for Antikorper to show up. Everyone has been love the game of TRON, Antikorper who is said to be the best player became their favorite. After waiting, someone came up in the middle of the ring...

Antikorper: Hello to all Forumer! I the Successor of MOD shall bet that tonight we will be entertaining you until you couldn't forget! Especially tonight, we have a very entertaining guest. The scum! Hahaha!

Fallen: ... Tendo? What "scum"?

Tendo: Oh my, is the supporter of the Great V for goodness sake. Don't you know, supporting the Great V or be his follower, in the secret society called "V resistance" is the greatest crime ever in this city.

Fallen: They are criminal? Why the MOD just ban them instead?

Tendo: Dont ask too much. The reason they haven't get a permanent ban now is that the MOD wanted to have this way to punish them.

Fallen: The government is totally corrupted! The V resistance do it this for justi --

Narrator: Before he could continue, Tendo quickly covers his mouth by using his hand. And saying "shhh" to him. It is totally pointless to say that word, if the MOD or some forumer who supports the current Government might hears it you might get "ban" permanently or worst send into the TRON arena and fight to death.

We see that several prisoners has already enter the ring. It looks like the TRON game is starting soon. The game consists a simple rule actually, what you have to do is to fight for survival. The NB Forumer was created with power called Chakra helping you do technique called the Jutsu. In the game of TRON, you have to fight using these weapons. If you weak, then it is too bad for you.

Antikorper then masked his face, and get ready to fight the several prisoners. He take both of his hand and just CLAP. And it goes ...


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Author's Note

I hope you guys like this FF. I know this chapter might be boring for some, it is probably because of the long-winded note or explanation about the story. Also, I would like to thanks those of my friend FF for making an inspiration upon this FF. Well, this is my 2nd FF ... so please, rep (Just press the "Thank you" button $_$), comment & Critics!

Note: Also Im looking for characters to be in my next chapter. Im looking for more MOD and Admin. Also, I want some people to be part of the V resistance who fight for Justice and also to avenge for Versuvio :|
 
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Pretty good. Good lenght (not a huge chapter, sweet spot).
Interesting story to progress, good grammer and language.
Nice presentation and hoping for good battles and a nice war!!
Keep it up my friend.
 

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Nice!I'm looking forward to next chapter.You have created an impressive story.But this chapter was short and I wanted to read more,but I hope next chapter will be a little longer:)
 
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And yet another story based on this website...

Is this so you can get loads of votes and fans and stuff?

I find this overwhelming NB based story population just annoying.

I have never seen Tron and only know it is a movie.

I'd rather you'd explain this game more clearly as many people (including myself) will have no idea what your talking about with this game.

Of course make more but I am not really happy about people making so many stories based on NB. I will read the next chapter but please follow my advice.

(If you assume this harsh then you must be dead, as there is more things in life that are harsher than this)

(Consider this a CnC *Comment & Criticism*)
 

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Thanks.

ha that's pretty tight
What's that? xd

Nice. Hopefully the next chapters are worth the explanation.
Thank you ^^ Yeah, I hope so.

Nice story. I love it because im such a huge fan of TRON and NB ^.^
Thanks :)

Pretty good. Good lenght (not a huge chapter, sweet spot).
Interesting story to progress, good grammer and language.
Nice presentation and hoping for good battles and a nice war!!
Keep it up my friend.
Thanks Bro :D Also, for the reps too :)

xd Amazing!
Thank you! >.<

Nice!I'm looking forward to next chapter.You have created an impressive story.But this chapter was short and I wanted to read more,but I hope next chapter will be a little longer:)
Good to know that :) Yeah, it is quite short...I will try make a longer one next chapter. Thanks for reading :)

And yet another story based on this website...

Is this so you can get loads of votes and fans and stuff?

I find this overwhelming NB based story population just annoying.

I have never seen Tron and only know it is a movie.

I'd rather you'd explain this game more clearly as many people (including myself) will have no idea what your talking about with this game.

Of course make more but I am not really happy about people making so many stories based on NB. I will read the next chapter but please follow my advice.

(If you assume this harsh then you must be dead, as there is more things in life that are harsher than this)

(Consider this a CnC *Comment & Criticism*)
Well, I been prefer to make a FF based on the base. I find it better that way, using people name that is already exist. I dont have intention to get fame, it is my interest for making this FF and this FF need to be based on the base. Yes, I agree with you, cuz' sometimes I feel that way too people making a FF based on the base, but later I find it much interesting reading that kind of FF and it motivates me to make one.

Yea, I haven't explain how the games work. I will explain in the next chapter maybe :rolleyes: Critics is fine, without it we might not know where are the errors.
 
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Superbly imagined, Fallen! And as you always do, using NB people's names, basing your stories on NB, is as amazing as ever. I may have not seen or ever heard of TRON but I get the entire idea. Imagination is the key to read and write, right? Trapped in the world of computer. My, oh, my! Just see how you mold the forum into something that really moves and not typing. Geez, what a coincidence. In the past weeks, I have been thinking - what if the forum comes alive like, we all get to interact and beat up each other for real instead of sitting in front of the PC and typing what we do and what we say. Good heavens! I am thrilled to see what will happen next. Especially the part that says "No one ever succeed to escape from the world and go back in the world of living. No one ... but some day someone will!" Meeeh, Fallen, I hope you get to finish this story this time!
 
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Well it takes place inside of a computer so you need all the NB geeks in it.
Sure why not xd

Superbly imagined, Fallen! And as you always do, using NB people's names, basing your stories on NB, is as amazing as ever. I may have not seen or ever heard of TRON but I get the entire idea. Imagination is the key to read and write, right? Trapped in the world of computer. My, oh, my! Just see how you mold the forum into something that really moves and not typing. Geez, what a coincidence. In the past weeks, I have been thinking - what if the forum comes alive like, we all get to interact and beat up each other for real instead of sitting in front of the PC and typing what we do and what we say. Good heavens! I am thrilled to see what will happen next. Especially the part that says "No one ever succeed to escape from the world and go back in the world of living. No one ... but some day someone will!" Meeeh, Fallen, I hope you get to finish this story this time!
Thank you ~ !! :D

Yeah, Im glad you get the entire idea. Tron is a movie, which Im so obsessed right now and yesterday I decided to make one. Wicked it is a coincidence...Im glad that you can even think that way :D But there is a problem, I haven't explain how we all get sucked in the computer world in the first place. Thanks for thre rep too ^^ I promised I will try to finish this FF not like my L4D :|
 

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Sure why not xd

Thank you ~ !! :D

Yeah, Im glad you get the entire idea. Tron is a movie, which Im so obsessed right now and yesterday I decided to make one. Wicked it is a coincidence...Im glad that you can even think that way :D But there is a problem, I haven't explain how we all get sucked in the computer world in the first place. Thanks for thre rep too ^^ I promised I will try to finish this FF not like my L4D :|
How, we all get sucked up into the computer? Yeah, you haven't explained what your version of that would be. Though, I have seen a few movies as to how people get sucked and even come out of the PC and some of which are: lightning strike, super high power surge, and more. I'm sure yours would turn out to be more creative than those, so yeah! explain next chapter. :D
 
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