[Kin] Training with scorps [Roju]

[Pervyy]

I appreciate scorps has his own method of training but so do i. Before i sign off on the training you must do two things:

Give me two benefits in how you would use the jutsu and how it works and two drawbacks.

(Kinjutsu: Shishō Tenketsu) Forbidden Arts: Pressure Points of Harm and Death
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 70 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (+20 to Crystal Release, +10 to Taijutsu)
Description:
Guren releases two tenketsu points in her core, near the heart, opening them completely, to greatly increase her chakra for a short time by changing her life force into raw chakra, allowing the use of more taxing techniques and boosting her abilities. The amount of chakra released is so much that it causes a visible chakra effect similar to the one caused by opening one of the Eight Inner Gates. Her eyes momentarily go completely white as her speed and power increases, mainly with Crystal Release techniques. She becomes 1.5x faster and gains an additional +10 damage to ninjutsu and +20 to Crystal Release. Once its deactivated, she is left tired and drained, unable to use Taijutsu for 2 turns and mold chakra above A-rank in the turn it deactivates.
Note: Can only be used by Guren bios
Note: Can only be used once per battle and lasts 4 turns.

 

[Summer]

1- not only does this unlock opportunities in battle it gives more then jutsu a boost to crystal chakra. It gives a speed boost which is quite minimal for how much chakra is actually being pumped out. When we seen the video she exerted an immense amount of chakra which should heighten her speed a little better. I believe this would also increase her taijutsu damage to I say this because opening a gate will do more damage then regular taijutsu. So this should be along the same lines.



2- well I made Byakuya's Senki jutsu specifically for this jutsu as it strengthens an already S rank jutsu and boosts its capabilities which is huge for that jutsu. But it also makes me slightly faster while in this jutsu as well, which gives me quite an advantage when I can manipulate swords freely to my hands.

3- this could break me free of high ranking genjutsu I believe because it will release a full body surge of chakra.

Drawbacks

Well I'm not going to fully list but only lasting four turns and not being able to use taijutsu for two turns. Well that is a huge hit because if I am using Senki then I am trying to use CQC to literally close the distance, and kill my enemy.
Not being able to mold chakra above A rank could be dangerous but I made an emergency type jutsu that could keep me from dying if I do have to take damage.

You look at which Tenketsu she is utilizing is the same as The eighth gate which had immeasurable chakra amounts. Although I am not using more then one Tenketsu it seems slightly underwhelming.


- not sure why this needs to give a +10 to ninjutsu if anything it should be to taijutsu.

I've been thinking of making a few other things to compliment this maybe a seal that adds or focuses speed in this activation. Or a seal that directs her chakra being exerted into one punch that can instantly crystallize the enemy and kill them.

 

[Pervyy]

Persoanally, and i know this sounds harsh and it's not meant to, you sound ungreatful.

1.5 x your speed is actually really good, i'd take that with pride. You're not only moving faster, you're getting a huge damage increase. Well nin, i agree isn't the best, but it doesn't say basic nin, it says +10 damage to ninjutsu and +20 to Crystal Release. This includes elemental ninjutsu as far as i'm concerned. Now +20 to all your crystal for 4 turns. And you're moving faster, withs ome of the customs i've seen for crystal release you've got a solid combo going on with this. I should know as you got the crystal cj from my old alt i believe xd

 

[Summer]

Persoanally, and i know this sounds harsh and it's not meant to, you sound ungreatful.

1.5 x your speed is actually really good, i'd take that with pride. You're not only moving faster, you're getting a huge damage increase. Well nin, i agree isn't the best, but it doesn't say basic nin, it says +10 damage to ninjutsu and +20 to Crystal Release. This includes elemental ninjutsu as far as i'm concerned. Now +20 to all your crystal for 4 turns. And you're moving faster, withs ome of the customs i've seen for crystal release you've got a solid combo going on with this. I should know as you got the crystal cj from my old alt i believe xd

Yeah I knew that it included elemental +10 boost which is nice. It just seems a little lacklustre for speed when you gauge that it is forbidden and that you are releasing a huge mass of chakra For instance using your life force. Which is why I said that. When you watch the anime it looks as fast as the first gate but in the Rp it's as fast as not having leg weights on I believe. That's what I meant by slightly lacklustre. It's still really nice to have any type of boosts now a days though. The nice thing about this speed boost is it effects your whole body.

I do love what the +20 does. Especially with the huge list of techniques at my disposal.

Now some more questions does this increase range at all as it is increasing damage quite a bit?
I don't think we traded customs as of yet no. And yeah I've worked quite a bit of my time to compliment this style for power wise.

Edit: also it says +10 Nin but in the damage brackets it says +10 taijutsu. This seems slightly odd

 

[Pervyy]

Yeah I knew that it included elemental +10 boost which is nice. It just seems a little lacklustre for speed when you gauge that it is forbidden and that you are releasing a huge mass of chakra For instance using your life force. Which is why I said that. When you watch the anime it looks as fast as the first gate but in the Rp it's as fast as not having leg weights on I believe. That's what I meant by slightly lacklustre. It's still really nice to have any type of boosts now a days though. The nice thing about this speed boost is it effects your whole body.

I do love what the +20 does. Especially with the huge list of techniques at my disposal.

Now some more questions does this increase range at all as it is increasing damage quite a bit?
I don't think we traded customs as of yet no. And yeah I've worked quite a bit of my time to compliment this style for power wise.

Edit: also it says +10 Nin but in the damage brackets it says +10 taijutsu. This seems slightly odd

It doesn't increase range.
You get +10 to tai and nin buddy.

1.5 x speed is still better than nothing, and when you use this the surge will break gen too.

 

[Summer]

It doesn't increase range.
You get +10 to tai and nin buddy.

1.5 x speed is still better than nothing, and when you use this the surge will break gen too.

Yeah I enjoy the fact that it can break Gen because I dispise genjutsu at times.
Thanks!

 

[Pervyy]

Yeah I enjoy the fact that it can break Gen because I dispise genjutsu at times.
Thanks!

Good luck and have fun with guren bro xd