[Training] With Riku Sensei.

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Nicely executed.

Moving on to C-ranks! O^O

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

From herein, you'll need more chakra than you've been using so far, so really concentrate on each technique. Similarly to the last technique that you just did, focus lightning chakra in your palm and release it outwards in a stream of lightning instead of several lightning bolts. That stream should travel outward from you palm. The stream should be enough to hurt your opponent on your own, but be sure not to make it to condensed because the real ability of this jutsu is that it's one of the easiest techniques for a water technique to conduct. Keep in mind that not every lightning technique will be conducted by water easily, some are far too direct and concise. This however does so fluently.

Woo ^^


*I start to focus, concentrating and gathering up more of my raiton chakara, channeling it to my right hand. once gathered i begin to condense it to give it somewhat of a shape and emit it from the palm of my hands making a lightning stream flying at a short distance keeping its properties of being able to conduct on water. *
 

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Woo ^^


*I start to focus, concentrating and gathering up more of my raiton chakara, channeling it to my right hand. once gathered i begin to condense it to give it somewhat of a shape and emit it from the palm of my hands making a lightning stream flying at a short distance keeping its properties of being able to conduct on water. *

*You release something more akin to a spear of lightning*

Like I said, you don't want to condense it too much. Give it a direction, but not so much a shape. Focus more on releasing a bunch of separate... streams (for lack of a better word) of lightning that go outward. Give the streams one direction but not a shape. Oh God as soon as I typed that a commercial with One Direction came on. @_@ Why...

Try it again.
 

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*You release something more akin to a spear of lightning*

Like I said, you don't want to condense it too much. Give it a direction, but not so much a shape. Focus more on releasing a bunch of separate... streams (for lack of a better word) of lightning that go outward. Give the streams one direction but not a shape. Oh God as soon as I typed that a commercial with One Direction came on. @_@ Why...

Try it again.

xd oh wow xd

*I start to focus once again, concentrating more of my raiton chakara, channeling it to my right hand. once gathered i begin to emit it from the palm of my hands making a lightning stream full of sparks flying at a short distance keeping its conductivity*
 

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xd oh wow xd

*I start to focus once again, concentrating more of my raiton chakara, channeling it to my right hand. once gathered i begin to emit it from the palm of my hands making a lightning stream full of sparks flying at a short distance keeping its conductivity*

*Shoots out a water bullet from my mouth*

*The water conducts the lightning successfully.*

Good, just wanted to see if it would work as it should.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Focus lightning chakra in the palm of your hand and compress it into a small ball of electricity. Afterwards, throw it at your opponent.

By the way for techniques like this where the usage of it is pretty self-explanatory and its almost completely an offensive technique, I may not ask you to describe its uses if I'm confident that you'd already understand them.
 

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*Shoots out a water bullet from my mouth*

*The water conducts the lightning successfully.*

Good, just wanted to see if it would work as it should.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Focus lightning chakra in the palm of your hand and compress it into a small ball of electricity. Afterwards, throw it at your opponent.

By the way for techniques like this where the usage of it is pretty self-explanatory and its almost completely an offensive technique, I may not ask you to describe its uses if I'm confident that you'd already understand them.

Oh ok, I understand sensei

*I begin to gather a decent amount of raiton chakra in the palm of my hands, I envelope it and condense it into a small ball of lightning, feeling a great static tension on my hands I throw the ball at sensei who is nearby.*
 

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Oh ok, I understand sensei

*I begin to gather a decent amount of raiton chakra in the palm of my hands, I envelope it and condense it into a small ball of lightning, feeling a great static tension on my hands I throw the ball at sensei who is nearby.*

*The ball disperses when it comes halfway toward me.*

This is your most concentrated lightning technique thus far. You'll really have to focus on compressing the lightning ball.
 

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*The ball disperses when it comes halfway toward me.*

This is your most concentrated lightning technique thus far. You'll really have to focus on compressing the lightning ball.

*I begin to gather chakra once again increasing the amount and focusing it on the palm of my hands, still gathering a bunch of chakra i start to condense it together it into a medium sized ball of lightning, I move my hand back and throw it with all my might to sensei*
 

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From herein I want you to always explain the uses of this technique in battle. I'll critique it if necessary. The techniques get more varied around here so you'll need to think about some of them a bit.

*I begin to gather chakra once again increasing the amount and focusing it on the palm of my hands, still gathering a bunch of chakra i start to condense it together it into a medium sized ball of lightning, I move my hand back and throw it with all my might to sensei*

Well done.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Focus lightning chakra all throughout your body, and vibrate the chakra as normally as you extend it outwards to make a "coat" of lightning around you. The lightning should surround you completely. The thing is that you have to continue controlling the chakra throughout your body in order to keep the technique active; continue vibrating the chakra and keeping it so that it doesn't disperse outward.
 

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From herein I want you to always explain the uses of this technique in battle. I'll critique it if necessary. The techniques get more varied around here so you'll need to think about some of them a bit.



Well done.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Focus lightning chakra all throughout your body, and vibrate the chakra as normally as you extend it outwards to make a "coat" of lightning around you. The lightning should surround you completely. The thing is that you have to continue controlling the chakra throughout your body in order to keep the technique active; continue vibrating the chakra and keeping it so that it doesn't disperse outward.

Alright, I'll try to explain as best as I can

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*To use this technique, I grab a medium sized rock and throw it over my head. I then quickly focus my chakra on the edge of my body. I feel a slight vibration all over with the lightning and surround myself with electricity. The rock I threw above me comes down the lightning armor is firmly defending me. As the rock falls and hits me, my armor stands strong and shatters the rock and pieces fall to the ground.*

Advantages: Protects you from an attack, also electrocutes a person if they attack you
Disadvantages: Short range, only works for one attack.
 

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Alright, I'll try to explain as best as I can

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*To use this technique, I grab a medium sized rock and throw it over my head. I then quickly focus my chakra on the edge of my body. I feel a slight vibration all over with the lightning and surround myself with electricity. The rock I threw above me comes down the lightning armor is firmly defending me. As the rock falls and hits me, my armor stands strong and shatters the rock and pieces fall to the ground.*

Advantages: Protects you from an attack, also electrocutes a person if they attack you
Disadvantages: Short range, only works for one attack.

*The rock hits you in the head* o.o

Be sure to keep the lightning vibrate. It won't sustain itself; you have to keep it sustained.

Try again.

As for the advantages and disadvantages. It can be used quickly in close combat as a bit of a surprise, so that's always good, and as a result of its speed it can be used to destroy, for example, spikes of earth. Keep in mind though that it doesn't augment your speed. This isn't the Raikage's lightning armor which has a stimulating effect to increase your movements. This merely coats your body in lightning.
 

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*The rock hits you in the head* o.o

Be sure to keep the lightning vibrate. It won't sustain itself; you have to keep it sustained.

Try again.

As for the advantages and disadvantages. It can be used quickly in close combat as a bit of a surprise, so that's always good, and as a result of its speed it can be used to destroy, for example, spikes of earth. Keep in mind though that it doesn't augment your speed. This isn't the Raikage's lightning armor which has a stimulating effect to increase your movements. This merely coats your body in lightning.

Damn rock I'll show you


*I pick up another rock and throw it over my head. I begin to focus my chakra on the edge of my body. I feel a slight vibration starting to form all over my body and i continue to increase it until the electricity surrounds my entire body. seconds later the rock comes down and breaks into pieces as it comes in contact with my lightning armor*


Oh I see, only lightning coating.
 

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Damn rock I'll show you


*I pick up another rock and throw it over my head. I begin to focus my chakra on the edge of my body. I feel a slight vibration starting to form all over my body and i continue to increase it until the electricity surrounds my entire body. seconds later the rock comes down and breaks into pieces as it comes in contact with my lightning armor*


Oh I see, only lightning coating.

Troll rock is successful.

*The rock breaks against your lightning armor*

Or not.

Moving along.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake β†’ Upside down Tiger β†’ Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

*I slam both of my hands on the ground and suddenly the ground under me rises up in a giant plateau.*

Alright, run up the side of this plateau but as you do it make the hand seals mentioned in the technique while focusing your lightning chakra ahead of you. Basically, focus it above you but off to your left and right sides. The lightning should then rip through the side of the plateau and as a result rocks will rain down, flying past your sides and going toward the ground.
 

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Troll rock is successful.

*The rock breaks against your lightning armor*

Or not.

Moving along.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake β†’ Upside down Tiger β†’ Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

*I slam both of my hands on the ground and suddenly the ground under me rises up in a giant plateau.*

Alright, run up the side of this plateau but as you do it make the hand seals mentioned in the technique while focusing your lightning chakra ahead of you. Basically, focus it above you but off to your left and right sides. The lightning should then rip through the side of the plateau and as a result rocks will rain down, flying past your sides and going toward the ground.


*I take off running picking up speed towards the cliff climbing the side, then while running I perform the hand seals Snake β†’ Upside down Tiger β†’ and clap my hands together, I begin to focus my lightning chakra accumulating it ahead of me on my left and right side, I vibrate back and forth making it take form and soon lightning begins to rip the rocks as i continuously run, without breaking concentration I notice that rocks begin to fall down crushing anything down below.*

Advantages: can be used to crush enemies nearby.
Disadvantages: can only be used in certain locations.
 

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*I take off running picking up speed towards the cliff climbing the side, then while running I perform the hand seals Snake β†’ Upside down Tiger β†’ and clap my hands together, I begin to focus my lightning chakra accumulating it ahead of me on my left and right side, I vibrate back and forth making it take form and soon lightning begins to rip the rocks as i continuously run, without breaking concentration I notice that rocks begin to fall down crushing anything down below.*

Advantages: can be used to crush enemies nearby.
Disadvantages: can only be used in certain locations.

*You then land atop the plateau with me after breaking off the rocks*

Yeah, the technique is extremely limited in where and when you can use it. However, you can always make a structure yourself to use this. Such as making a plateau like I just did. Keep in mind. though, that whatever structure you use this on has to be something that could be affected by a C-rank lightning technique.

Nicely done. On to the last C-rank.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Hold out your hands in front of you and focus lightning chakra in them. As your hands begin to glow a pale yellow color, release the lightning chakra forward in the form of several bolts. The bolts should be pointed forward like horns of lightning.

*I make three earth spikes in front of me.*

Direct one horn toward each of these to destroy them.
 

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*You then land atop the plateau with me after breaking off the rocks*

Yeah, the technique is extremely limited in where and when you can use it. However, you can always make a structure yourself to use this. Such as making a plateau like I just did. Keep in mind. though, that whatever structure you use this on has to be something that could be affected by a C-rank lightning technique.

Nicely done. On to the last C-rank.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Hold out your hands in front of you and focus lightning chakra in them. As your hands begin to glow a pale yellow color, release the lightning chakra forward in the form of several bolts. The bolts should be pointed forward like horns of lightning.

*I make three earth spikes in front of me.*

Direct one horn toward each of these to destroy them.

Oh ok, anything that affects C-rank, I understand.

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*I bring my hand forth stretching it as if its a sword, I begin to concentrate my chakra and gather it, vibrating it back and forth as it begins to glow in a pale yellowish color, once i see this, I exend my hand further and release the raiton chakra I had been gathering, creating several bolts in the forms of that of horns*
 

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Oh ok, anything that affects C-rank, I understand.

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*I bring my hand forth stretching it as if its a sword, I begin to concentrate my chakra and gather it, vibrating it back and forth as it begins to glow in a pale yellowish color, once i see this, I exend my hand further and release the raiton chakra I had been gathering, creating several bolts in the forms of that of horns*

Good execution.

But you forgot to put its strengths and weaknesses. Add that and we'll move on to B-rank techniques.
 

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Good execution.

But you forgot to put its strengths and weaknesses. Add that and we'll move on to B-rank techniques.

Advantages: able to hit multiple targets.
Disadvantages: cannot be used on long range.

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Riku sensei, are you going to train me in AACT's as well?
 
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Advantages: able to hit multiple targets.
Disadvantages: cannot be used on long range.

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Riku sensei, are you going to train me in AACT's as well?

Lol, I'm going to be perfectly honest and say that I have no idea what AACT's are referring to. I'd appreciate it if you could let me know, as I never heard the term until I came back and since I just became a sensei again I didn't bother asking anyone what it meant.

Keep in mind that the technique can also be used to hit the same target from different angles. Depending on your movements during battle, you can take advantage of techniques that consist of more than one strike like this to attack your opponent from several angles at once. This basically changes the way that they can defend against techniques. If I send three small fireballs that come from completely different directions, for example, you can't just make a spear of water to shoot through all of them.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Ok, before I explain this technique's execution, the training from herein is going to change a bit. So far you've only been describing the techniques strengths and weaknesses, but now I want you to give an example of a specific situation that this can be used in. Still describe the strengths and weaknesses, but give a short blurb of a situation that this can be used in.

Now, this technique first calls for you to focus lightning chakra in both of your hands. The "electrical essence" described is actually more along the lines of two bolts of lightning that are shot into the sky from each hand. Shoot those bolts into the sky, and then use your lightning chakra, which is now in the sky, to bring down bolts of lightning.
 

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Lol, I'm going to be perfectly honest and say that I have no idea what AACT's are referring to. I'd appreciate it if you could let me know, as I never heard the term until I came back and since I just became a sensei again I didn't bother asking anyone what it meant.

Keep in mind that the technique can also be used to hit the same target from different angles. Depending on your movements during battle, you can take advantage of techniques that consist of more than one strike like this to attack your opponent from several angles at once. This basically changes the way that they can defend against techniques. If I send three small fireballs that come from completely different directions, for example, you can't just make a spear of water to shoot through all of them.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Ok, before I explain this technique's execution, the training from herein is going to change a bit. So far you've only been describing the techniques strengths and weaknesses, but now I want you to give an example of a specific situation that this can be used in. Still describe the strengths and weaknesses, but give a short blurb of a situation that this can be used in.

Now, this technique first calls for you to focus lightning chakra in both of your hands. The "electrical essence" described is actually more along the lines of two bolts of lightning that are shot into the sky from each hand. Shoot those bolts into the sky, and then use your lightning chakra, which is now in the sky, to bring down bolts of lightning.

Well I'm not really sure what the term means exactly as I have only heard it from a few people, I think its some other jutsu from the anime/manga but like I said, I'm not really sure.

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*I begin to meditate and focus chakra in my hands, accumulating a big amount of raiton chakra, creating lightning bolts in my hands, feeling as the vibrate and emit intense heat, i then shoot them up into the sky controlling their movement through the air, and turn them back down and towards where sensei is 5 meters away.*

Advantages: can stun/hurt the opponent, good accuracy.
Disadvantages: can only be used in short/mid range. time delay while preparing it.


Although I'm not really sure if this is correct, I would use it while the opponent is a bit far away from me and he is preparing a jutsu, etc...
 

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Well I'm not really sure what the term means exactly as I have only heard it from a few people, I think its some other jutsu from the anime/manga but like I said, I'm not really sure.

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*I begin to meditate and focus chakra in my hands, accumulating a big amount of raiton chakra, creating lightning bolts in my hands, feeling as the vibrate and emit intense heat, i then shoot them up into the sky controlling their movement through the air, and turn them back down and towards where sensei is 5 meters away.*

Advantages: can stun/hurt the opponent, good accuracy.
Disadvantages: can only be used in short/mid range. time delay while preparing it.


Although I'm not really sure if this is correct, I would use it while the opponent is a bit far away from me and he is preparing a jutsu, etc...

Lol, be sure to let me know when you find out. xd Once I find out I'll decide whether or not to teach you... whatever it is.

*Sidesteps the lightning bolt* o.o Lolwut.

Nice execution. Good accuracy, yes. Can stun or hurt the opponent, well that's a given lol. The one obvious thing that you're missing is that it allows you to attack the opponent from above despite where you currently are. As for your specific situation, eh, I would be inclined to disagree. This technique requires a bit too much time to be used while your opponent is performing a jutsu, correct? Perhaps it would be better for you to use the technique, wait for a while, and then bring the lightning bolt down as your opponent tries to do something. Keep in mind though, to my belief, that you cannot use a different technique in between the time that you shoot this up into the sky and bring it down. Personally I would use this technique, wait for a while and do some other offensive action, even taijutsu perhaps, and then distance yourself from your opponent while suddenly bringing down a powerful bolt of lightning. The key here is making sure that your opponent doesn't have time to react or interrupt, and being that you have to shoot lightning into the sky first, they have plenty of time.

Anyway, if you've got that, moving along.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram β†’ Boar β†’ Dog β†’ Bird β†’ Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

This technique is a bit interesting in the fact that the pillars rising up are actually made of stone, even though you're only using lightning chakra here. When performing this technique, focus your lightning chakra at four points around your opponent, generally it would probably be in front of your them off to the left, in front off to the right, behind them off to the left, and behind off to the right to put them in a square of pillars. Then, bring that lightning chakra up from the ground to surround your opponent with the pillars. Finally, release all of the lightning chakra from the pillars inwards so that a square of lightning is created.
 
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