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Dean Winchester arrives on the training field, finding a young man there. He had to teach him Lightning, the ferocious element. He walks up to his student, and looks at him.

"Oi, there. The name's Dean Winchester, and I will be teaching you Lightning. Now, I want you to tell me everything you know about Lightning in the Narutoverse, it's strengths and weaknesses and also, known users of the element. Use as much detail as you can please. "

Dean then awaits his student to answer him, hopefully, it will be a good one.
 

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Raiton revolves around the use of lightning ninjutsu. By increasing the high frequency vibrations in the users chakra, the user of Raiton are able to paralyze and pierce enemies with it. It can also be used to increase the speed of its user. Although it can be rather uncommon, blades and katana are fused with the lightning element.

It's strongest against Suiton(Water Release). Clearly we all know the two dont mix. Well in this case if they do mix, barbecue for everyone.

It has the ability to nullify Doton ninjutsu(Earth Release)

And it's greatest weakness is wind or Fuuton.

The greatest amount of combined users of the Raiton element is Kumogakure. The village that dwells withing the lightning country.



Going into cannon chars.

Kakashi, Sasuke, Darui, Omoi, A, Third Raikage.
 

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Raiton revolves around the use of lightning ninjutsu. By increasing the high frequency vibrations in the users chakra, the user of Raiton are able to paralyze and pierce enemies with it. It can also be used to increase the speed of its user. Although it can be rather uncommon, blades and katana are fused with the lightning element.

It's strongest against Suiton(Water Release). Clearly we all know the two dont mix. Well in this case if they do mix, barbecue for everyone.

It has the ability to nullify Doton ninjutsu(Earth Release)

And it's greatest weakness is wind or Fuuton.

The greatest amount of combined users of the Raiton element is Kumogakure. The village that dwells withing the lightning country.



Going into cannon chars.

Kakashi, Sasuke, Darui, Omoi, A, Third Raikage.
"Alright, that is okay, Lightning rips through Earth because of it's properties and it's weak to Wind because the wind insulates it. It is usually combined with Water for that extra effect and is quite the destructive element. Not very versatile though. I hope you have what it takes to tame this monstrous element.

Now, since this is your start of training, I want you to grab onto this chakra paper, and focus your Lightning chakra into the paper. If done correctly, the paper should start to wrinkle and fold, showing you know how to correctly mold Lightning chakra. Sit over there and meditate whilst channeling your chakra into it. Close your eyes whilst doing it."


Dean hands Benn the small white paper and waits for him to do as he was told.


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Thank you for pointing it out, it is now all fixed.
 

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Benn grabs the paper and sit where he is told. As he meditates he places the paper between his index and middle fingers and forms the tiger hand seal, beginning to focus chakra into his hands. As he manipulates the nature of his chakra, his mind begins generating thoughts of the form and force of the lightning element over and over.

"I was born ready for this sensei""

He says as he continues to focus. His eyes remaining shut as the paper begins to wrinkle and fold between his fingers. He continues to focus un aware of what he has done.


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I'm sorry for the inconvenience. I'll do my best to do my research more often before making big choices. Again my bad :)
 
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I forgot to subcribe to this one z.z



Dean watches as the young shinobi focuses, his eyes closed and it actually working. Oblivious to what he has done, Dean let's out a slight laugh, and walks towards his young student.

"You got it right, Benn. Now, I hope you are ready for some real action. My training method works as follows, I'll explain the jutsu to you, then you will perform it and give me advantages and disadvantages of the jutsu, plus how you would use it in battle. If you have questions about the jutsu, be sure to ask me!

Okay, now for the first one, I want you to manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and hold your hands outwards. After concentrating for a while, I want you to create small bolts of Lightning that you will fire towards your opponent, in this case, my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Benn, he has to act quick to take him down.
 

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No biggie :)
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Benn quickly forms and holds the rabbit seal
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molding his chakra as he did when focusing it into the paper.

He increases his chakra output, using more chakra than with the paper. As lightning begins to form, Benn releases the chakra from his left hand as he uses it to grab his left wrist. He then doubles the output within his right hand to take place for his right hand and throws his arm outward toward the clone.

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Benn gives a slight push to his physical attributes, clenching his muscles as he does. Releasing a single ball of lightning from his hand, firing it toward the clone.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. Great against Suiton users
  • 2. Long range
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Preparation period
  • 2. Fuuton insulates the jutsu
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle:
I'd use a clone distraction to set up a target for the opponent to focus on.
Then I'd set up Kirigakure No jutsu just for added assurance and then fire this jutsu off at the target at a Mid-Far range.
 

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"More detail, but since it is the first technique, I will let it slide. Here is the first jutsu you just learned."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.



"Okay, now for the next jutsu, I want you to concentrate your Lightning chakra in your hands, and manipulate it. Then once Lightning starts crackling around them, slam your hands towards the ground and release a surge of Lightning that moves across the ground to the opponent's feet, shocking them. Try it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that stands before Benn.

PS: No need for handseals yet, just do as I say ^^
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. Great way to catch someone off guard
  • 2. close to mid range
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Fuuton insulates the jutsu
  • 2. Can be avoided by jumping
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle:
I would start off small. Utilizing certain jutsu to lure the target in or gain some closer ground. I'd start off in this combo

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

Forming the hand seals and expelling water from my mouth as I circle my target. Relaxing my chakra, I'll set up a diversion using ninjutsu as a buffer between the two elements I shall own.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

If successful, I'd run up to the opponent, focusing lightning chakra in my right hand and then using it to not only sike out my opponent who thinks I'm gonna use taijustu when I attack.






And actually use the lightning chakra in my hand and slam it into the ground in front of them. Performing a one handed cart wheel flip into the air as the lightning releases from my hand forward toward the target and I fly over them aiming to strike them with my sword. The effect of the Kirigakure No Jutsu means the lightning may or may not cause the lightning to rise higher into the air and travel faster and further.
 
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"Hmm, alright. Next time, just do the jutsu how I ask it please. Here is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.



"Okay, for the next one, I want you to manipulate your Lightning based chakra. After that, move your hand, and release a wave of Lightning at your opponent. This is able to shock the opponent. Try it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that dashes towards Benn.
 

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Benn deciphered his senpai's instructions.

"Manipulate your Lightning based chakra, move your hand, and release a wave of Lightning at your opponent."

Dean creates a clone that dashes towards Benn.
He quickly changes his eyes from Dean to his clone. "Okay Senpai, I'm ready to give it a go."

Benn begins reliving the paper segment of his lesson. Fully focusing on exerting the same type of chakra that caused it to wrinkle and fold. As he molds it, he thinks.

**Okay, this one reminds me of 'Raiton No Jutsu' except its a wave of lightning. Not a ball. Maybe if**


His mind wonders as he attempts to recreate the Raiton no justu sequence. Forming the ball of lightning in his hand, Benn extends his hand outward toward the clone and begins focusing even more chakra into it, causing his ball filled palm to be engulfed in lightning chakra. With one fierce clench of his muscles he would see a stream of light and dark blue lightning chakra zig zagging its way to Dean's clone.


One/three advantages:
1. Great against Suiton users
2. Mid-Long range
3.

One/three disadvantages:
1. Preparation period
2. Fuuton insulates the jutsu
3. If dodged by a mid-close range opponent. Your open for attack.

How you would use it in battle:
I personally would use distractions. (Kirigakure no jutsu, 5 senses, Clone etc)

Kirigakure being activated

Maybe I would use Suiton No Jutsu and then pierce through it with this technique to give it a added feel of danger.

I would also use this overhead.
As in jumping over an opponent and raining it down like lightning natural intent.

Another idea, set the opponent up by forcing them to jump back to avoid Raikou Oonami. Then catch them mid jump with this as they can't move mid air w/o a CJ allowing them.
 

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"Hmmm, it's alright. Here is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.



"Okay, here is your first jutsu that contains handseals. Form the Tiger → Snake → Dog handseals, and manipulate your Lightning based chakra, to create an electric current from your hand. This current is capable of shocking multiple opponents. Launch it towards my clone, and shock him!"

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Benn, with the intent to slice him with a normal kunai.
 

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Without haste Benn begins forming the seals, shouting them out as he does.

Tora→Hebi→Inu!
He begins manipulating his chakra utilizing his sensei's instructions, quickly releasing a light blue electrical current at the incoming clone. Benn could feel the tingle of the chakra pouring from his palm as the jutsu flowed toward the clone. Dean's clone is shocked with a loud zap before disappearing in a cloud of smoke.

"Okay, good. I did it."

He turns to Dean.

"First things clear...helpful jutsu. So far I see two advantages. One being this jutsus range capabilities. The other being the mixture of my first nature with this making it even more powerful and giving it more range...if I'm not mistaken that is. Disadvantage are....Hand seals. Considering a shinobi using handseals is a must, no big. But still a set back if you fudge them up or you perhaps or too close to do them in time. I keep stressing this jutsu" He laughs "But Kirigakure No Jutsu would be a nice way to set up for this. I would use it for preparation of this. I might use this before using something like Ken Rendan(Kenjutsu: Sword Barrage) or even during Ikari Nomikomu(Kenjutsu:Fury Swallow) before I catch my blade."

He nods his head at himself before turning to Dean with a stern look that turns into a gentle smile.

"Hows that Dean Senpai?"
 

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"Yeah, that's alright Benn. Here is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.



"Next, manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and focus it to your hands. Then, once it starts crackling as Lightning should, release it forward in the form of a wave that can easily shock my clone, and destroy him. This lightning wave is also capable of ripping through rock. Remember, this technique requires no handseals, and has quite a few creative uses."

Dean creates a clone that dashes towards Benn.
 

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He easily manipulates the chakra into his palm, letting out a large sigh as he does.Ehhhh....And here I thought things were getting more...... Increasing his chakra output as he speaks. !!! He is startled by the loud sound of crackling chakra that roared from his hand. Instantly he looks forward, waving his hand into the front of his body. He yells "HAAAAaaa!!!!"

The lightning would fly in a zigzag form towards Dean's clone. As the clone rushed toward Benn, The lightning strikes, shocking the clone causing its arms to flail as it hits the ground. Twitching. Electrical current moving around its upper and lower body in thin spike like lines seconds before it disappeared in a thick cloud of smoke.

Benn releases the grip on his lightning releasing arm and stands up straight. Small signs of lightning chakra fading from his hand.

Dean Senpai. I'm impressed with this technique, but the core flaw is that is vaguely similar to other techniques...The advantage to that of course is using a weaker similar jutsu...It adapts some of the flaws of previous jutsu as well, and countering is as simple as moving out the way. That's how I'd dodge it.

He pauses and turns to Dean.

In this case. One flaw..is an advantage. Most dumb asses would think its just like everything else. But if I used...Raikou Oonami. I can cause the opponent to leap. Then use Ikazuchi Kashou before this..The opponent will think they can block this attack after/if they block Ikazuchi Kashou. Thus allowing me to make contact considering dodging while mid-air without using a Substitution is...almost impossible. Thats a good way to use it.

He tilts his head "Right?" smiling waiting for a response.
 

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"Hmm, that's true, well done. Here is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.



"Okay, this is an easy one now. Manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and release it from your very own body. This allows you to create a pseudo Lightning armor, and electrocute anyone who comes into contact with it, though only for one attack. You are also very vulnerable to water based attacks. Try it out against my clone."

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Dean creates a clone that runs towards Benn.
 

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Benn starts off focusing chakra into both his hands. The lightning grows up his arms as he unsheathe his blade, holding it in similar fashion to that of the samurai in front of him. The lightning chakra would grow along his body, Benn just standing as it did. Forming an armor of sorts around the boy. His blade tossed to his right hand and extended outward behind him, him runs towards Dean's clone. Ikusa!!!!!!!!! he yells, dragging his blade against the ground as he slashes upward toward the clones chest. The lightning crackling around him as he quickly lands on his left foot and spins, ripping his tanto off his right side. He slashes the clone in the knee before jumping over it. As he flips, Benn grabs the clone by both shoulders, allowing the chakra to shock it as he did. Continuing his flip, Benn throws the clone leaving a lighter image of the lightning chakra shield surrounding it shocking it. He lands, sheathing both his katana and tanto.


He looks to Dean and smiles vividly. YES! He claps yelling "Thats what I'm talking about Senpai!!! He leaps in joy of this technique.

So far I see a lot of awesome in this technique. A real good defense. I honestly would use this all day... Benn feels a faint pain in his chest. Dropping to a knee he gasps for air slightly in a heavy manner. Chokes up he utters "Th...That's intense. The chakra out put of this jutsu is the main flaw. I'd die without being touched if I couldn't maintain this for too long. I'd get strung out. I definitely use this as a great defense when necessary. But... He cringes..."It's very very consuming."
 
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