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No previous training in raiton.

*sits and waits for sharingdork senpai*
 

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Then we're starting from scratch, aren't we?
  • What is lightning in the narutoverse?
  • What is lightning's strengths and weaknesses?
  • Who are three effective lightning users in the manga (not A, his father, or Kakashi)?
  • What are three lightning jutsu in the manga?
 

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•Lightning in the naruroverse is one of the 5 basic elements and it involves the user manipulating electricity to attack their enemy. The user can pass lightning through both the air and the ground.

•Lightning is strong against earth as lightning can just travel through it breaking it up, lightning is weak against wind as wind has no physical form for the lightning to damage and is a natural insulator. Lightning is also one part of both storm release.

•Some lightning users are: sasuke, darui, kakuzu

•Some lightning moves:Lightning release armor, chidori, kirin
 

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Nice.
*I put my finger on your forhead, sending a spark into your head. Then, I spit a dragon-shaped fireball into the sky.*
(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.
Now tell me how lightning feels. If lightning were an emotion, what would it be? How does lightning affect your fives senses (look like, smell like, feel like, ect.)? What does exposure to lightning do to objects? After that, I want you to meditate on the lightning which will be above your head when you finish; feel it's energy, and become one with it.
 

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•Hmm, to me lightning wouldn't be an emotion because the way I see it lightning flows through the sky in a carefree manner Lightning itself affects many of the senses. It could affect our sight by the blinding light it causes. It can sometimes affect our sense of hearing due to it always being followed by the roar of thunder. And last but not least it could affect our sense of touch by paralyzing, burning or just plain out cutting through us. Some objects can amplify or nullify the affects of lightning all together. For example, if lighting comes into cantact with water the water could amplify the lightning slightly. On the other hand if hit by a strong enough wind the lightning could be severely weakened.

• I then sat down in a criss cross position and began to meditate. While meditating I purely focus on the lightning conjuring above my head,sparking and making my lightning chakra react. I then felt my chakra flowing through my body in a quick,sharp manner just like the lightning in the sky.
 

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You say it wouldn't be an emotion, and then say it's carefree. :rolleyes:

Well, it's time for your first jutsu.
(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.
  • Focus your raiton chakra throughout your body
  • Condense your chakra outside your body
  • Continue to condense raiton chakra until the chakra's energy begins to leap across the air, creating bolts of lightning
  • If you want to focus this technique, only focus your chakra around one part of your body (hand, foot, ect.)
If you could give a pro/con to each jutsu, that would be appreciated so I know you understand the jutsu. If you can’t think of a pro, give a combo, and if you can’t think of a con, give a counter, alright?
 

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Care= emotion soo carefree which means free of care is being emotionless in a good way. >_>

-I start to focus my chakra within my body evenly so that my raiton chakra was on every part. I then start to let the raiton chakra seep out of me thus covering my skin.I continue to let it seep while at the same time I focused on condensing the chakra onto my skin. After focusing and condensing the chakra for awhile it started to create small bolts of lightning that leaped around my body. I then begin to focus the raiton to my right hand as I held it in front of me. Instantly after being focused to my hand the raiton bolts shot from my hand.

Pro:
• can be used to shock an opponent that is making a physical attack.
Or it can be used to shoot bolts at an opponent from a distance.

Con.:
• Weak against wind based techniques at any level.
 

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Good job. Keep it up. :D
(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.
  • Focus your lightning chakra into your hand
  • Slam your hand onto the ground
  • Release your chakra at once through the ground forwards
 

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-I start to focus on the raiton chakra that dwells within me, building it up to a comfortably strong level. Once that is achieved I start to force that chakra into the palms of my hands thus causing small sparks. After that I suddenly slam my palms on the ground and on contact I begin to fuel the ground with my raiton chakra. While forcing my chakra into the ground below I start molding and pushing it forward to shock whatevers in its way.

Pro:
• Can be used to shock opponents from below. Can be used more effectively by shocking bodies of water

Con:
•Completely ineffective against opponents that aren't touching the surface of whatever's being shocked.
 

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Excellent.
(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.
  • Focus raiton chakra throughout your body
  • Unleash the lightning around your body like a shell, creating a lightning barrier
  • Focus your lightning at one point to deflect this kunai *Throws a kunai at you*
 

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--I begin concentrating my chakara and I focus on building up a nice amount in my body. I then convert my normal chakra into lightning based chakra and I focus this lightning in my body. I then unleash the chakra from my body creating a shell-like barrier made of lightning around my skin. I, finally, focus this shell to one point in front of me in the direction of the flying kunai thus deflecting it, sending it flying off of me.

Pro
• Can defend against physical attacks such as taijutsu,shuriken and Kunai.

Con.
• Hmm can't really think of any besides being weak against nearly any fuuton based technique.
 

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You're also weak to water (it'll redirect your lightning with the water jutsu, which is probably going towards you).
(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.
  • Focus your raiton chakra around your body
  • Create a field of lightning around yourself
  • Focus this field on one point and release all of your chakra in that direction, creating an "explosion" of energy in that direction
 

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-- I instantly start building up a good amount of raitin chakra throughout my body and made sure it was evenly proportioned. After that I push my chakra outwards thus creating a small raiton field around my skin.
I then focus the entire raiton field to a single point on my back and the released it backwards thus making an explosion in that direction.

Pro
-Can be used to blast an enemy that is coming from any direction.

Con
-Weak against wind, and suiton can redirect the raiton to me..
 
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Good job.
(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
  • Focus your raiton chakra into your hands
  • Collect sparks of electricity in your palms
  • Release the electricity in a wave outwards, directed in a single direction
 

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- I stand in a stationary position and start focusing my raiton to my hands in a slightly large quantity. After gathering an amount of chakra that I thought was necessary a single spark flickers on my palm.
I then fuel even more chakra to my palm thus creating dozens of electrical sparks that jumped around my palm quickly. Then after concentrating on gaining decent control over the sparks I hold my arm outward to the side with my palm facing outward also and release a wave of sparks in that direction.

Pro.
-Can be used to attack an opponent from a distance or shock a body of water from a distance.

Con.
-- Can easily be countered by fuuton techniques or redirected by a strong enough water tech.
 

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Good job.
(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
  • Focus your raiton chakra around your hand
  • Focus the energy to create a field of static bolts
  • Focus the bolts forwards in a series of bolts, making an attack
 

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- I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra through out my body once I have gathered enough of it I start chanelling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through my body into my hands once I have chanelled it I release the gathered raiton chakra through my hands and when I release as it is beeing released it forms small static bolts that shoot forward as an attack.

pro.
- It can be used in attack and defense ,it doesn't require much chakra and I guess it can hurt and paralyze the oponent.

cons.
- It is short range,it isn't that powerfull and if when you have the lighning in your hand and somebody covers you with water you will electrify yourself I guess.
 

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Good job. Alright, now the fun part. I want you to defeat my clone using at least two techniques you've just learned. Think of it as a test to see if you actually know how to use these jutsu now.
 

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- As you make a clone I quickly slam my hands on the ground, sending lightning throughout the ground thus shocking the clone. When that happens I take advantage of the slight paralysis the shock should have done by launching a kick at the clone, but before I could make contact I focus a raiton field to the sole of that foot to cause an explosion in that direction.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) -Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost:10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) -Lightning Style: Thunder Saber Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.
 
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Good job. Onto the C-ranks.
(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
  • Focus raiton chakra into your hands
  • Focus the chakra into one spot (your palms)
  • Force the chakra outwards in a single direction through the air
 
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