Squinting my eyes at Feg I exhale before taking another shot at his request.
There lays a valley, obscured by a large mountain range, that holds a mysterious lake named Lake of Antiquity. Dwelling within that lake are unique cartilaginous fish known as Rays. The many species have distinct characteristics ranging between them like toxic barbed tails, the ability to release electromagnetic charges, and even saw like noses. The rays of Lake Antiquity range in size being as big as Gamabunta to their normal size. Even though rays are naturally aquatic creates the rays of Lake Antiquity have the special ability to use their chakra to fly through the air as if they were swimming in water, for various periods of time depending on the ray. Unfortunately the Rays that reside in the Lake of Antiquity, are currently separated due to a civil war brought about due to triplets being born as heirs to the throne and no record remaining of their birth sequence. They all strived to establish dominance over each other resulting in a stalemate that caused the separation of the ray population. The siblings are all bosses of their part of the three segregation, keeping a level of peace, but still much tension between the separated groups. Something that I'm striving to amend. (u-u)
Now, was that better?