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Looks good, I guess o:
well blended, text fits
nothing that stands out as bad, but also nothing that stands out as really cool/interesting

imo I wouldn't darken the text that much, there is also nothing interesting under the text- could be cropped a bit
background looks a bit flat
 

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looks nice:yay:
Thanks.
Looks good, I guess o:
well blended, text fits
nothing that stands out as bad, but also nothing that stands out as really cool/interesting

imo I wouldn't darken the text that much, there is also nothing interesting under the text- could be cropped a bit
background looks a bit flat
I'm myself satisfied with the text since it goes on with the atmo. Though it's true a bit more of good effects would've been better. Thanks for commenting m8.
 
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So,here we go:
The lightning is nice but i think different colors would fit more,also i don't like the background.I see what you were trying to achieve the tag is pretty plain,even fractals couldn't save the situation.
Another thing,the right side is pretty dark and the light on his left arm is unusually bright,i mean it doesn't look like it the light is coming from the fire in his arm.You darken render's arm a bit IMO.
The text is nice,i like it.And overall the tag is not bad,really^^much better than all the trash that people post at DS today.
 

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So,here we go:
The lightning is nice but i think different colors would fit more,also i don't like the background.I see what you were trying to achieve the tag is pretty plain,even fractals couldn't save the situation.
Another thing,the right side is pretty dark and the light on his left arm is unusually bright,i mean it doesn't look like it the light is coming from the fire in his arm.You darken render's arm a bit IMO.
The text is nice,i like it.And overall the tag is not bad,really^^much better than all the trash that people post at DS today.
True that. The tag is a plain for a reason U_U.
The light is coming from the glowing lights around his arm though I think they do need to glow a little in this case.

nice work man.thx for sharing it.
No problem and thanks. :)
 

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Its a bit plain, but I'm sure the Psd is long in terms of layers xD
I really like the text effect :)
Keep it up and thank you for making signatures in this section ^^
 
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