Frozenstein
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Hy guys. This is my first (and possibly last) fanfic, so don't go hard on me. Just tell me how it is.
wease:
Chapter 1.
Hinata vs Naruto
A sunny morning in the history of the Leaf. The village is awakening from the silent night. Sleepy employees walking on the streets to their workplace. Ninjas gathering at the gates to depart for their important missions. Boys and girls, youngsters and elders, everyone live their regular lives. Oh wait something happened! A man fell on the street, let’s get closer…
No way, he is sleeping! Get up you lazy bastard, go to work!!! I can’t believe it… this is… this is… ah sorry everyone I get carried away. Let’s continue with this sunny morning… So the birds are chirping, the students of the ninja academy are running on the roofs, GET DOWN FROM THERE!!! Erm… sorry sorry, you know my nerves… don’t mind me, just continue…
The weather is good, the village is peaceful, the boring everydays are continuing. We can’t really say this day is a special day, but in fact, it is! Just let’s get closer we can’t see well from this distance. While we are walking I’ll tell you more about this story.
This story is about the famous Leaf 12. Naruto, Sakura, Sai, Hinata, Kiba, Shino, Lee, Neji, Ten Ten, Ino, Shikamaru, Choji. We all know them, so why I bother to set out them? I haven’t a clue… really. Maybe to lengthen this stroy. You think this is funny? NO, IT’S NOT! We are still walking remember? I have to say something and entertain you… I SAID DON’T LAUGH! Really man you are getting on my nerves. I have to get some tranquilizer…
So the stroy is about a brilliant idea made up by the biggest mind in the entire Leaf Village, yes you are right, and you too, we are all agree on that okay? So, this person is the famous and great Green Beast of the Leaf, Rock Lee. Don’t make this expression, I’m serious… One day, this great man bored (while he was training) and come up with an idea. „Why don’t we make a tournament, just with my friends? We could train together and we could decide who is the strongest!”
Pathetic don’t you think? First he is boring while training, and then he comes up with this stupid tournament... but it can’t be helped. He stopped his training and went to his friends to convince them to participate. After a few hours (and some days) later they are all agreed to join and they discussed the time and place, when and where to hold the event. And the day has finally come! We are here, standing on the training ground where Team Kakashi hold their first match for the bells, the holy ground where everything has started a few years ago. Here are the trees, the river, the birds, the Leaf 12, their angry faces, their eyes what are staring at us…... …... ...… (maybe we should find a place a little farther…)
All right, now we can start now! The first 2 competitors (big cheer to them), in the blue corner, the next leader of a great clan, the girl who is in love, Hinataaaaaaaaaaaaa Hyuugaaaaaaaa! Her opponent in the red corner, the child of prophecy, the next hokage, the strongest in the village (or at least as he thinks), Uzumakiiiiiiiiiii Narutooooooooo! Let’s get started…
Naruto is warming up, crouchings, arm circles, it seems he is serious this time, even he's smiling… and Hinata, erm... she is just standing there, staring at the ground and blushing. No wonder, she is the girl in love after all... but enough from the speaking you are bored I can see...
Naruto is on the move, running toward Hinata and creates clones, yes these are perfect clones as expected from him. Now finally Hinata waking up and realizing the situation.
Hinata: W… w… wait… why’s there 3 Na… Na… Naruto?
She faints, I can’t belive it. She fainted and now she’s laying on the ground and unconscious. This match is already over? No, wait. Naruto is trying to wake her up…
Naruto: Hinata what’s wrong?! Hinata! Wake up, we are in the middle of a fight!
He can wake her up? Is there a chance for it? Yes, he can! Hinata started to wake up… she is moving and now, yes she opened her eyes… maybe we can see her while fighting and… wait a minute… what’s happening? Why is her face turning to red?
Hinata: N.. N.. N.. Na..!
She fainted! She did it again! This is incredible… and what’s with this satisfied expression?!
Naruto: What a weirdo…
Now Sakura is charging in and her expression... oh I don’t want to be in Naruto’s place…
Sakura: NARUTOOOOOOOOOOOO…what are you doing with a girl?!?!?!
It seems she is gonna hit Naruto. Oh man this will hurt. Yes, she reached him and wait wait wait… Hinata started to move again. She will wake up!
Kiba: Come on Hinata don’t faint again! Fight already!
Shino: If she see you again she’ll faint.. Naruto, use Henge no Jutsu and change your appereance.
Naruto: Oh… this is a good idea!
Naruto changed his appereance and… why Sasuke? You can’t be a bit more creative, moron?! Ah doesn’t matter Hinata woke up, but she’s still in Sasuke’s (Naruto’s) arms. What will she do? She is staring at him… still staring… still staring… come on this is boring... Now she moved! What a move I’ve never seen something like that! She used her head, a perfect hit in the face. Naruto is on the ground and hold his nose. This must hurt a bit...
They are standing again, face to face. Hinata seems to be confused (and Naruto in pain). What will be the next move? It doesn’t seem Hinata’ll attack and Naruto… DON’T GET TOO CLOSE FOR HER! Hinata’s face turning to red, she will faint again, she will faint again!!!
Ino: Oh man this is BORING! Shinranshin no Jutsu!
This is a mess! Ino controlling Hinata! What is she doing and what’s wrong with Naruto? He doesn’t even realised what happened.
Now Hinata (Ino) punches Naruto in the groin. And again, but this time in the face! A whole body throw, Naruto is flying, he will fall on the ground, but no! He landed on foot, he can continue this fight! This is the time for a counterattack, go Naruto go! Ah man too late Hinata (Ino) is there… Hinata (Ino) wants to punch him again, defend yourself boy! Yes, this is it, you can block it! Hinata (still Ino hehe) is pu… no she’s using her leg. It’s a kick, A KICK! Oh man, right between Naruto’s legs. This is over… Naruto is laying on the ground, Hinata erm... I mean InoHina won! I wonder if a medical nin can heal that wound…
wease:Chapter 1.
Hinata vs Naruto
A sunny morning in the history of the Leaf. The village is awakening from the silent night. Sleepy employees walking on the streets to their workplace. Ninjas gathering at the gates to depart for their important missions. Boys and girls, youngsters and elders, everyone live their regular lives. Oh wait something happened! A man fell on the street, let’s get closer…
No way, he is sleeping! Get up you lazy bastard, go to work!!! I can’t believe it… this is… this is… ah sorry everyone I get carried away. Let’s continue with this sunny morning… So the birds are chirping, the students of the ninja academy are running on the roofs, GET DOWN FROM THERE!!! Erm… sorry sorry, you know my nerves… don’t mind me, just continue…
The weather is good, the village is peaceful, the boring everydays are continuing. We can’t really say this day is a special day, but in fact, it is! Just let’s get closer we can’t see well from this distance. While we are walking I’ll tell you more about this story.
This story is about the famous Leaf 12. Naruto, Sakura, Sai, Hinata, Kiba, Shino, Lee, Neji, Ten Ten, Ino, Shikamaru, Choji. We all know them, so why I bother to set out them? I haven’t a clue… really. Maybe to lengthen this stroy. You think this is funny? NO, IT’S NOT! We are still walking remember? I have to say something and entertain you… I SAID DON’T LAUGH! Really man you are getting on my nerves. I have to get some tranquilizer…
So the stroy is about a brilliant idea made up by the biggest mind in the entire Leaf Village, yes you are right, and you too, we are all agree on that okay? So, this person is the famous and great Green Beast of the Leaf, Rock Lee. Don’t make this expression, I’m serious… One day, this great man bored (while he was training) and come up with an idea. „Why don’t we make a tournament, just with my friends? We could train together and we could decide who is the strongest!”
Pathetic don’t you think? First he is boring while training, and then he comes up with this stupid tournament... but it can’t be helped. He stopped his training and went to his friends to convince them to participate. After a few hours (and some days) later they are all agreed to join and they discussed the time and place, when and where to hold the event. And the day has finally come! We are here, standing on the training ground where Team Kakashi hold their first match for the bells, the holy ground where everything has started a few years ago. Here are the trees, the river, the birds, the Leaf 12, their angry faces, their eyes what are staring at us…... …... ...… (maybe we should find a place a little farther…)
All right, now we can start now! The first 2 competitors (big cheer to them), in the blue corner, the next leader of a great clan, the girl who is in love, Hinataaaaaaaaaaaaa Hyuugaaaaaaaa! Her opponent in the red corner, the child of prophecy, the next hokage, the strongest in the village (or at least as he thinks), Uzumakiiiiiiiiiii Narutooooooooo! Let’s get started…
Naruto is warming up, crouchings, arm circles, it seems he is serious this time, even he's smiling… and Hinata, erm... she is just standing there, staring at the ground and blushing. No wonder, she is the girl in love after all... but enough from the speaking you are bored I can see...
Naruto is on the move, running toward Hinata and creates clones, yes these are perfect clones as expected from him. Now finally Hinata waking up and realizing the situation.
Hinata: W… w… wait… why’s there 3 Na… Na… Naruto?
She faints, I can’t belive it. She fainted and now she’s laying on the ground and unconscious. This match is already over? No, wait. Naruto is trying to wake her up…
Naruto: Hinata what’s wrong?! Hinata! Wake up, we are in the middle of a fight!
He can wake her up? Is there a chance for it? Yes, he can! Hinata started to wake up… she is moving and now, yes she opened her eyes… maybe we can see her while fighting and… wait a minute… what’s happening? Why is her face turning to red?
Hinata: N.. N.. N.. Na..!
She fainted! She did it again! This is incredible… and what’s with this satisfied expression?!
Naruto: What a weirdo…
Now Sakura is charging in and her expression... oh I don’t want to be in Naruto’s place…
Sakura: NARUTOOOOOOOOOOOO…what are you doing with a girl?!?!?!
It seems she is gonna hit Naruto. Oh man this will hurt. Yes, she reached him and wait wait wait… Hinata started to move again. She will wake up!
Kiba: Come on Hinata don’t faint again! Fight already!
Shino: If she see you again she’ll faint.. Naruto, use Henge no Jutsu and change your appereance.
Naruto: Oh… this is a good idea!
Naruto changed his appereance and… why Sasuke? You can’t be a bit more creative, moron?! Ah doesn’t matter Hinata woke up, but she’s still in Sasuke’s (Naruto’s) arms. What will she do? She is staring at him… still staring… still staring… come on this is boring... Now she moved! What a move I’ve never seen something like that! She used her head, a perfect hit in the face. Naruto is on the ground and hold his nose. This must hurt a bit...
They are standing again, face to face. Hinata seems to be confused (and Naruto in pain). What will be the next move? It doesn’t seem Hinata’ll attack and Naruto… DON’T GET TOO CLOSE FOR HER! Hinata’s face turning to red, she will faint again, she will faint again!!!
Ino: Oh man this is BORING! Shinranshin no Jutsu!
This is a mess! Ino controlling Hinata! What is she doing and what’s wrong with Naruto? He doesn’t even realised what happened.
Now Hinata (Ino) punches Naruto in the groin. And again, but this time in the face! A whole body throw, Naruto is flying, he will fall on the ground, but no! He landed on foot, he can continue this fight! This is the time for a counterattack, go Naruto go! Ah man too late Hinata (Ino) is there… Hinata (Ino) wants to punch him again, defend yourself boy! Yes, this is it, you can block it! Hinata (still Ino hehe) is pu… no she’s using her leg. It’s a kick, A KICK! Oh man, right between Naruto’s legs. This is over… Naruto is laying on the ground, Hinata erm... I mean InoHina won! I wonder if a medical nin can heal that wound…
