Touching The Beyond: Prologue

[Light Of The Night]

This is just an experiment hope you like.

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Her golden brown locks gently swayed with the breeze, she sat knees under her chin upon a rocky cliff, the profound blue ocean beneath her.

Her eyes were serenely closed as if embracing the light touches of air on her skin.
Her body was draped in luxurious golds and angelic whites.


She gradually stood up her bare feet planted on the rough surface.

She walked to the tip of the cliff arms spread out, ever so slowly she leaned forward until she dropped.

Wings sprouted out from her back and..... she flew

 

[Netferarri]

Sounds like a good cliffhanger. I hope you make the story.
Nice job. ^^

 

[Light Of The Night]

Thanks ^^ I will maybe

 

[Psy]

It's a bit short, but I guess that's to be expected of an prologue. I liked it, seeing as you used a lot of descriptive terms. I felt as if I was there. Good job.

 

[Light Of The Night]

thanks much

 

[Raphael sannin]

interesting!!!!.....I need more....

Very good!!!