Toshiro Hitsugaya

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Hair and Face looks super weird O_O But the rest is nice. The haori and such is brilliant. Except Toshiro doesn't look like Toshiro, only the hair color
 

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That's pretty friggin awesome.
I couldn't do that well as a beginner. Keep it up.
You can only become the "most awesome."
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this time the legs looks better, but those hands dafaq? :D
 

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I like it its good
 

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Heh, thanks. :D And yea i messed up the head part.
 

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trust me... you try better than most of them that are accusing your sketch
 

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its very good... you will be a good artist and trust me; you did better than most of them that are accusing your sketch would've done
 

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its very good... you will be a good artist and trust me; you did better than most of them that are accusing your sketch would've done

Hehe, thanks. And im grateful to those, who say bad things and show my mistakes, thanks to them i can improve bit by bit. :D
 

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Looks fine but the hair needs some adjustment also the ice(or effect)coming out of the sword needs to be a little defined
 

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It's really good, but you did ask for advice. The only real advice I have is to reexamine the hands, they look kinda awkward.
The right hand for example:
- The thumb is missing. Looking at the length of the other thumb, if his thumb is extended you'd still see a piece of it on the other side of the hilt. If the thumb is gripping the hilt, it would be in front of the other fingers.
The left hand thumb is on the wrong side, it's be behind the other fingers.

P.S.

Your still a wayyyy better drawer than I am. My art major friends come to me when they want critiquing because I'm brutally honest. It's a double-edged sword though...

GL
 

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It's really good, but you did ask for advice. The only real advice I have is to reexamine the hands, they look kinda awkward.
The right hand for example:
- The thumb is missing. Looking at the length of the other thumb, if his thumb is extended you'd still see a piece of it on the other side of the hilt. If the thumb is gripping the hilt, it would be in front of the other fingers.
The left hand thumb is on the wrong side, it's be behind the other fingers.

P.S.

Your still a wayyyy better drawer than I am. My art major friends come to me when they want critiquing because I'm brutally honest. It's a double-edged sword though...

GL

Heh thanks, left hand was meant to look like thumb is behind the other finger, its that bone inside, i dont know how to exlpain it, but i thought of it as thumbs start for the other side, but it looks bad. ;D Thanks for advice anyway, i will keep that in mind. :D
 

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