Top of my head poem.

Arcaneos510X

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I have recently returned to this site as my life is worse than ever but as i have been told i do my best work when heartbroken so here goes nothing...

Her nickname beautiful, her eyes like blue flame.
To me she was everything, but i wonder did she feel the same?
She said she did. Empty words but i don't want to cause her any pain.
Robbed of answers by fate, my question am i sane?
All the love, care, promises now seem in-vane.

Whats a man to do when he has nothing and is alone?
All seems lost outside freezing in the cold.
I question myself am i a good man?
I try yet too see her with another man.
Picking pieces of my broken heart from the floor, razor sharp cutting my hands as i ran.

she had a family, i had none.
she has everything and i have no one.
I gave her everything i could but it wasn't enough.
We where fine but to her parents i was never good enough.
she changed my life i wonder if she cries like I?

As i stare into a starry yellow moonlight sky.
I would have spent my life with her you know.
But i never thought i could sink this low.
Could i still if i try?
I wonder, i hope as i cry.

I wish for a second chance i don't deserve.
My past was always dark but it now seems like a blur.
But memories i spent with her.
I gave up so much and yet for all my tears, blood and sweat.
There are many things in life from which i draw regret.

I know these lines are poor and at this point they are quite dated in my life but this is just a quick five minute glimpse into my poetry id like to hear what you have to say i know the lines are dark but i can only write about my life i know i used the same words to often but i am quite rusty so please don't judge to quickly its been a while since i wrote anything.
Thank you for your time -Ghost
 
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Thank you everyone its not my best work at all i wrote this because the mood struck me with no inspiration yet as my inspiration has gone i don't think I'll come out with anything good for a long time, sorry.

Edit* In fact looking back at this poem as a re-read its is quite awful i regret writing a very poorly written poem and hope it will not affect my legitimacy as a writer Thanks again.
 
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