[Doton] Toku teaches Deviation

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Hello Toku-sensei. Thanks for the help. ^__^

Here is a link to my previous training, sensei.



Last technique I performed was:
(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal Tiger, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.
 

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Show me how you would use it in battle...

*creates a clone*
With a puff of smoke a clone was made and I knew I had very little time to react. Using my instincts, I grabbed some dirt, held it tightly in my hand, and as we approached each other I threw it in your face to get your distracted. As I swurve around you, I channel my chakra from throughout my body. Then once behind you I make the tiger handseal and release my chakra into the ground and transform it into a flowing river of mud that should unbalance you and take you with it as it flows away from me. Once you are quite a ways away, I leap into the air and throw several kunai at you with bomb tags attached. Once I can perceive they are at a close distance to you I make a seal of confrontation with my right hand only as I say the words "Katsu!" causing the tags to explode.

I then land on the ground and get in a ready stance to see what you will do next.
 

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With a puff of smoke a clone was made and I knew I had very little time to react. Using my instincts, I grabbed some dirt, held it tightly in my hand, and as we approached each other I threw it in your face to get your distracted. As I swurve around you, I channel my chakra from throughout my body. Then once behind you I make the tiger handseal and release my chakra into the ground and transform it into a flowing river of mud that should unbalance you and take you with it as it flows away from me. Once you are quite a ways away, I leap into the air and throw several kunai at you with bomb tags attached. Once I can perceive they are at a close distance to you I make a seal of confrontation with my right hand only as I say the words "Katsu!" causing the tags to explode.

I then land on the ground and get in a ready stance to see what you will do next.
*whacks you with a stick* 0_0 the clone not me!
OOC: I was referring to the clone, sensei. My writing skills were taking a nap. Let me rephrase it. >_>

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With a puff of smoke a clone was made and I knew I had very little time to react. Using my instincts, I grabbed some dirt, held it tightly in my hand, and threw it in his face to get him distracted. As I swerved around him, I channeled my chakra from throughout my body. Then once behind him I made the tiger handseal and released my chakra into the ground and transformed it into a flowing river of mud that should have unbalanced him and took him with it as it flowed away from me. Once the clone was quite a ways away, I leapt into the air and threw several kunai at him with bomb tags attached. Once I perceived that they are at a close distance to him I made a seal of confrontation with my right hand only as I said the words "Katsu!" causing the tags to explode.

I then landed on the ground and got in a ready stance to see what would happen next.
 

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show me how you would defend against it...

*creates a clone and he performs earth flow river beneath you*
As Yamato begins to flow away he knew he had to come up with something creative that could help him out of the situation. He channels his chakra and releases a small amount beneath him to mix with the flowing river and deviate him from its path. With the help of the water technique, he is able to curve the river underneath him at an angle and arrive out of the earth's technique and within Mid distance of the clone. He quickly channels his chakra again and releases it into the ground below the clone causing a tremor which should cause him to fall back. Without any hesitation and as expected of a former ANBU-nin, Yamato channels his chakra again and releases a stronger amount underneath the fallen clone in the form of dense, sharp spikes. Yamato then looks on while crouching keeping his eye on his surroundings.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
 

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show me how you would defend against it...

*creates a clone and he performs earth flow river beneath you*
As Yamato begins to flow away he knew he had to come up with something creative that could help him out of the situation. He channels his chakra and releases a small amount beneath him to mix with the flowing river and deviate him from its path. With the help of the water technique, he is able to curve the river underneath him at an angle and arrive out of the earth's technique and within Mid distance of the clone. He quickly channels his chakra again and releases it into the ground below the clone causing a tremor which should cause him to fall back. Without any hesitation and as expected of a former ANBU-nin, Yamato channels his chakra again and releases a stronger amount underneath the fallen clone in the form of dense, sharp spikes. Yamato then looks on while crouching keeping his eye on his surroundings.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
(Doton: Yochi no Dōyō) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
the water would only aid your opponents technique making it harder to get out of...try again
As Yamato begins to flow away he knew he had to come up with something creative that could help him out of the situation. Using his keen intellect and little experience, Yamato, combines his water and earth-natured chakra to create two wooden pillars to grow apart and at an angle out of the ground and like a track on a roller coaster, he manipulates the wood to veer him off track and away from the river and lands on the ground mid-range from the clone. He quickly channels his chakra again and releases it into the ground below the clone causing a tremor which should cause him to fall back. Without any hesitation, Yamato channels his chakra again and releases a stronger amount underneath the fallen clone in the form of dense, sharp spikes. Yamato then looks on while crouching keeping his eye on his surroundings.

(Mokuton No Jutsu) - Wood Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Creates small wood pillars or trees to trap, defend, or fight with. These can be created from the users own body or from the ground.

(Doton: Yochi no Dōyō) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremor that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
 
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(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra while performing the hand seals then release it into the ground to raise rock pillars that can be controlled to trap a target...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
 

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(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra while performing the hand seals then release it into the ground to raise rock pillars that can be controlled to trap a target...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.

One/three advantages:
  • 1. it traps your opponents
  • 2. the prison allows you to confine your enemy to a space
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. i assume your enemy can see the earth rise up against him so he can use hiding like a mole technique
  • 2. a lightning field can dispel it
Yamato channels his chakra as he makes the Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake handseals and releases his chakra into the ground. The released chakra then travels through the ground and lifts up strong earth pillars. The rock pillars then rise up and create a prison of rock that surrounds you clone.
 

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My apologies sensei. I got overexcited. >_<

One/three advantages:
  • 1. it traps your opponents
  • 2. the prison allows you to confine your enemy to a space
  • 3. Limits your opponent to escape to the air or underground.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. i assume your enemy can see the earth rise up against him so he can use hiding like a mole technique
  • 2. a lightning field can dispel it
 

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good, now try it on the clone...

*creates a clone*
Yamato channels his chakra as he makes the Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake handseals and releases his chakra into the ground. The released chakra then travels through the ground and lifts up strong earth pillars. The rock pillars then rise up and create a prison of rock that surrounds you clone.
 

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Yamato notices the rock pillars begin to arise from the ground and readies himself as he begins going over quick strategies in his mind. He knows that earth's natural enemy is lightning and could essentially dissipate its effectiveness though that always depended on the user's skill and prowess with it. As the pillars stop he feels that that is essentially all there was to the technique and he proceeded to channel his chakra quickly as he knew he didn't require too much due to the nature of the technique he had observed thus far. He focused the chakra in his right arm and generated lightning bolts around his forearm. As he suddenly slams his right palm on the ground, he releases the electrical energy to become discharged into the ground in the form of lightning bolts. They travel all around him (up to 5 meters out) which should cause the rock pillars to explode and counter the technique successfully.

"......"

(Raiton: Denki Railanshō) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
 

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(Doton: Doroku Gaeshi) - Earth Release: Earth Shore Return
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user manipulates the ground in front of him to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks. In addition, the user can also create 2 slabs that will rise and tilt to the sides in front of him, as if "opening up" the ground. This can be done to create a clear path if anything hazardous is above the ground in that specific area.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra and release it into the ground manipulating it to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
 

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(Doton: Doroku Gaeshi) - Earth Release: Earth Shore Return
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user manipulates the ground in front of him to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks. In addition, the user can also create 2 slabs that will rise and tilt to the sides in front of him, as if "opening up" the ground. This can be done to create a clear path if anything hazardous is above the ground in that specific area.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra and release it into the ground manipulating it to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can defend against taijutsu if you don't want to get into taijutsu.
  • 2. You can create the wall and if they are right next to it, use a earth technique to lower the wall having it fall on them.
  • 3. It does not require any handseals to perform.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It only blocks frontal attacks so they could go from the sides or above.
  • 2. It isn't the best defense and can be broken through easily.
  • 3. It is at a short ranged so whatever technique they decide to use to knock it back could go right through it and hit you as well and since it is short-range it might be hard to defend against.
 
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