Tobirama Senju Pencil Sketch!

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Here is a sketch I drew just now since I'm so bored! ;)

This is my first drawing again after so long (maybe 5 years XD)

Hope I didn't make your eyes bleed with this ugly sketch! :whip:

Feel free to leave a comment. Don't holdback or worry I know its ugly to begin with so I can take criticism just fine :happy: XD

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It's a nice sketch ! For me it is just odd to see Tobirama smiling XD
 

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head should be wider, especially the chin.
 

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Hahaha. Nah Its pretty good drawing.

The only criticism i would make is that, the face looks are distorted O_O
 

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Ugly sketch if you want my real oppinion..
 

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Ugly sketch if you want my real oppinion..

Be nice... Please... If you don't like it, then there is no reason to post. Maybe tell him where he can improve instead of being rude U_U

OT: Well done! Maybe watch some sketch tutorials and see how they start off with simple light shapes and continue from there. Good job again ^.^ but there is always room for improvement. :)
 

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Try spending more time on the face and less on the hair. The hair looks great though. His face looks like a monkey's face lol.
 

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Be nice... Please... If you don't like it, then there is no reason to post. Maybe tell him where he can improve instead of being rude U_U

OT: Well done! Maybe watch some sketch tutorials and see how they start off with simple light shapes and continue from there. Good job again ^.^ but there is always room for improvement. :)

Thanks that's a good advice.

Although I'm always been lazy when it comes to drawing, so I take shortcuts.

I never did those dummy model outlines first, I just draw it straight and just try to finish it from there on, which is why this didn't turn out good or as proportional! :whip:

Nice job ^^

A hell of alout better than what I can do lol

Try spending more time on the face and less on the hair. The hair looks great though. His face looks like a monkey's face lol.

Thank you again for the feedback. :happy:

I actually just do casual sketches so I might not improve at all in the future. XD

However I just like sharing some of my work every now and then, no matter how ugly they are. :whip:
 
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i really like it man =D
 
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