~Tobi poetry ~

[IzunaUchiha2]

Poetry of tobi . Nuff said U_U hope u like , haters leave plz
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Eeenie Meenie Minei Moe

Catch the lier by his toe

If he attacks , Let Kakashi know

if if he attacks let Kakashi know


Tobi , very Op , has a mode of ghost

Since part 2 , stealing beasts from their Hosts

With rinnengen he'll turn you to roast

Saying his Madara , thats just some Boast

Madara came from the west , tobi came from the rest

Wants the Juubi simply to be Best

His idenity is unknown

Andray arshavin is on a loan

Some people say its obito , kagami or Izuna

Thats just bliss

But the way tobi lies just makes me piss

Says his Uchiha

Another lie ( maybe) ?

His fave dessert is Pie

If your anbu he'll make you DIE!

Than the hokage will cry



Finish-

 

[נıм]

Legen...

 

[From the Dark Spire]

This is great, I enjoyed it. You should write more soon. +rep

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[IzunaUchiha2]

This is great, I enjoyed it. You should write more soon. +rep

Do you like to read fan fic stories? If so, could you check my story out?

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i love fanfics .. made one of my own

 

[From the Dark Spire]

i love fanfics .. made one of my own

Cool, I'd love to hear your feedback.

it'll take you to chap 2, but I have the link to chapter one in there too.

 

[Dribbles]

I liked some parts of it, but some didn't really make sense.

Remember poetry is an art form, and its mainly a mature art form.
Don't just try to cram in rhymes in there, actually try to border out your lines and set them up before you go writing.

Other then that, i liked it, good work.
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[SQY]

Poetry of tobi . Nuff said U_U hope u like , haters leave plz
***********************************************************

Eeenie Meenie Minei Moe

Catch the lier by his toe

If he attacks , Let Kakashi know

if if he attacks let Kakashi know


Tobi , very Op , has a mode of ghost

Since part 2 , stealing beasts from their Hosts

With rinnengen he'll turn you to roast

Saying his Madara , thats just some Boast

Madara came from the west , tobi came from the rest

Wants the Juubi simply to be Best

His idenity is unknown

Andray arshavin is on a loan

Some people say its obito , kagami or Izuna

Thats just bliss

But the way tobi lies just makes me piss

Says his Uchiha

Another lie ( maybe) ?

His fave dessert is Pie

If your anbu he'll make you DIE!

Than the hokage will cry

Because he Simply wants to destroy

Because Tobi is such a Good Boy!


Finish-

Fixed that for you

 

[נıм]

dary !

 

[Rujel96]

Its cool