Tobi Gaiden : The Grass village

[Makoto Yuki]

-Setting: The Grass Village approximatly a week after team minato destroyed the bridge, Orochimaru,Zetsu and an aging Madara and 3 rock shinobi walk through the forest, Orochimaru and madara lead as zetsu and the shinobi follow-

Orochumaru: Are you sure we are going the right way?

Madara: Are you saying im lying?

Orochumaru: Im Saying you may be trying to lure me away from the young uchiha so you can have him for your self

Madara: -activates sharingan- watch your tone with me Orochimaru

Zetsu: Sir?

Madara: What?

Zetsu: The Body, its up ahead

Madara: -jumps to a cliff to see- There lies the body -points to a large boulder-

Orochumaru: finally, it took you long enough

Madara: its not like he is alive

Orochumaru: hmmmph

-The ninja jump towards the boulder and land infront of it-

Rock shinobi 1: How are we going to get him out?

Madara: with snakes

Orochumaru: -places hands on ground as four large snake appears under the boulder, the snakes lift the boulder enough to see a dead obito lying there-

Madara: grab the body

-the rock shinobi grab Obito-

Rock shinobi 2: what do you want us to do with him?

Zetsu: -follow me-

-zetsu and the sshinobi dissappear in an instant-

Madara: i have no further use for you now orochumaru

Orochumaru: WHAT?!?!

Madara: -starts to walk-

Orochumaru: -a large snake starts to wrap around Madara- oh no......where is the uchiha you promised me?

Madara: -mangkyou sharingan activates- Do you dare test me orochumaru?

Orochumaru: you cant hurt a leaf genin let alone one of the great sannin

Madara: Release me now orochumaru!

Orochumaru: pathetic -the snakes start to squeeze madara-

Madara: -Amaterasu- -the snakes catch on fire and release madara-

Orochumaru: -ughh- -starts to back up

Madara: -takes out katana- Do you FEAR Me -places orochumaru in a genjutsu-

Orochumaru: -starts to hallucinate- Agkkkk ughhhh ackkkkk -falls down and passes out-

Madara: phase one is complete.........on to phase two

 

[ElementNami92]

Pretty cool.

 

[Makoto Yuki]

thank you

 

[beastbomb9]

good thread it was interesting to read thts about it

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

The dialouge is kinda off and there's a lot of typos. Besides that, I like where the story is heading. +rep fellow author

 

[Makoto Yuki]

its one of the tobi theorys my brother told me about i just put it into a fanfic

 

[Makoto Yuki]

The dialouge is kinda off and there's a lot of typos. Besides that, I like where the story is heading. +rep fellow author

eh ive had worse spelling

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

eh ive had worse spelling

It's alright man. As an author myself, I just notice small things like that, but it's no biggy. I'm really liking your story though, how often are you going to be posting new chapters?

 

[Οdin]

Good read. Hope to see more chapters.

 

[Makoto Yuki]

i dont know, ive came up with this chapter a week ago and i can only get on the computer some times

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

i dont know, ive came up with this chapter a week ago and i can only get on the computer some times

Ohh I understand. I post new parts of my FF like every 1 or 2 weeks. Well, rushing one's FF is a bad thing anyway.

 

[Makoto Yuki]

yeah plus i got to work on my grammar xd

 

[Omnislash X SageMode]

Perhaps...was orochi in the akatsuki at this time when minato was kage? if so then this is a rather good read

 

[Makoto Yuki]

i think so im not to sure