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I decieded to get back to this, in case anyone liked it (other than McAfeezy, or Darui.., as he's known now). I know it's short, but so are the other chapters... (If you want any of the other chapter's links, just ask me. :D)
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Han (To Gobi): I have to hunt one of my own?
Gobi (To Han): Just do it; the Kyuubi is a representation of everything that's evil and rotten with the world!
Han (To Gobi): But Kushina's one of us; I can't just-
Genzo: Here.
Genzo handed Han a kunai, and turned his back.
Han: What am I supposed to do with this?
Genzo: Mark your headband; like this.
Genzo gestured to his headband, which had a scratch through the village symbol, with his thumb.
Genzo: Let's us know who's apart of the Akatsuki even when we lose our cloaks. It also let's others know that we've turned on our village. Just do it!
Without removing his headband, Han ran the kunai over the village symbol, nearly cutting his own head in the process.
Genzo: Most people take it off first, but you've got more guts than that, eh? Let's go, then!
Han: Alright, then.
Han and Genzo then took off at a run towards the Leaf Village, and Han's first act as a traitor to his kind; the jinchuriki.

Kushina: Just watch! I'm going to become the first female Hokage!!
?: Yeah right; that's not going to happen.
??: Like the Tomato's gunna be Hokage!
?: Yeah, Tomato!
A young boy stood at the edge of the kids mocking Kushina, and then simply turned away from the group.
Kushina: Watch who you mock, kids!!
?: Why, the future Hokage's gunna punish us when she becomes the leader of the village?
All the kids burst out laughing, and Kushina punched the kid in the face.
Kushina: YEAH! Now it's your turns.
The rest of the kids scrammed, and Kushina knocked out anyone she could reach. Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed the kid who had turned away smiling, as if he enjoyed watching her beat the crap out of people.
Kushina: HEY YOU! You want some!?
The boy turned and ran away without a word, and Kushina turned away from where he was.
Kushina: Wimp.

Later that evening, Han and Genzo approached the Leaf Village.
Genzo: Here.
Genzo handed Han a Cloud headband, putting one on himself.
Han: Why? I thought the whole point of our own headbands was-
Genzo: DO WHAT I SAY!
Han reluctantly tied the Kumo headband over his own, and the two snuck down into the village. They found Kushina's house, and snuck inside.
Kushina: Mmm... What's going on?
Han, with some prompting from Genzo, placed a gloved hand over Kushina's mouth and led her outside.
Genzo: You're comming with us, little missy. Now let's go, Han.
Han: Alright, Genzo.
Han and Genzo led Kushina well out of the Leaf Village, and towards the Akatsuki hideout, unknown to them that they were being followed...

As Kushina put up a small fight to keep the Akatsuki away from her, a young boy woke up in his position near her house. He woke up too late to see the men take her away, and couldn't even follow her by sound. He was about to give up trying to help the girl he helplessly had a crush on, when he noticed something odd on the ground. A clump of red...

Sasori (H): Now, my puppet-
Orochimaru: Stop calling me your "Puppet"!
Sasori (H): Why? Do you not know what happened to the Third Kazkekage?
Hiruko looked up at Orochimaru, and gave him what appeared to be an evil smirk. Any color that may have been in Orochimaru's face drained, and he ran out to Pain.
Orochimaru: PAIN! PAIN! PAIN! PAIN! PAIN!!!
Pain: Orochimaru...
Pain lifted a hand and threw Orochimaru into a stone wall of the cave. Orochimaru then slowly made his way over to Pain, who was standing next to Sasori in his Hiruko shell.
Pain: Yes?
Orochimaru: HE WANT'S TO TURN ME INTO A HUMAN PUPPET!!!! JUST LIKE THE THIRD KAKZEKAGE!!!!!!
Pain glared at the yelling Orochimaru.
Pain: Calm down, and then say that again. I don't listen to people who yell at me.
Kisame: I'LL BE HIS PARTNER! Orochimaru can have Itachi.
Pain: Itachi?
Itachi: Whatever; I'm fine.
Orochimaru (To Himself): Excellent...
Pain: Then it's settled. Itachi and Orochimaru, I want you to go and cover Genzo and Han's tracks tomorrow morning, got that?
Orochimaru & Itachi: Yes sir!
Sasori (H): And us, Lord Pain?
Hiruko's tail was twitching.
Pain: Hm? Oh, whatever; I don't care. Just don't bother me; this evil organization has turned into some teenage soap-opra!
Kisame: Alright.
Sasori (H): Come, my puppet...
Orochimaru: Good luck...
Orochimaru (To Himself): You're gunna need it. Now, onto a little "body-snatching" of my own...

Han and Genzo got Kushina to the top of a mesa at daybreak, and decided to rest for a short while.
Han: Is that smart? She is a jinchuriki, after all...
Genzo: I'll place her under my Dust Tomb; with a little room to breathe. She'll be fine, and so will we.
Han: Alright-
Gobi (To Han): To the left, NOW!
Han jumped to the left, and the boy punched Genzo in the back of the head.
Genzo: What was that!?
Han (To Gobi): Thanks for the warning.
Gobi (To Han): Your pain is my pain...
Genzo looked around, and saw the blonde kids hair highlighted against the rising sun as he stood ontop of a small outcrop of rock.
???: Stop right there! Kushina's not going any further!
 
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It was really a good chapter! If I'm not wrong, I think that your idea is that you want to reveal thing which weren't revealed at Naruto in your own way.

Two cloud ninjas kidnapping Kushina. Oro and Itachi together, as partners!
 

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It was really a good chapter! If I'm not wrong, I think that your idea is that you want to reveal thing which weren't revealed at Naruto in your own way.

Two cloud ninjas kidnapping Kushina. Oro and Itachi together, as partners!
In case you want it; This is chapter 6
 
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