To fall in love with words

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Irie

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I don't know. This is for those who... actually you guys make your mind up on this :) if you ask me what it's about maybe I'll tell you.

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You are only words
But the words that make you up
Are the words I love.
In one place many words gather
You are the only word I seek
Oh beautiful word
You have enchanted me
You have made my heart
Happy
Sad
Angry
Calm
To fall for only words
It shows how you captivate me so
It shows how much I trust you so
To fall for only words
There is no limitation
Even though I'd like to put a face and voice
On what lovely words you are
I cannot.
For they say a picture is worth a thousand words
A thousand words
...my love...
You are undoubtedly more than that.
 
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I love it.

one part that gets to me is line 14. most of the poem is from a present tense and that line is past. I'm no poet, but that line sticks out to me the most because of the change-up.

great work though. absolutely love last 4 lines!
 

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this is so beautiful.
thank you!
I love it.

one part that gets to me is line 14. most of the poem is from a present tense and that line is past. I'm no poet, but that line sticks out to me the most because of the change-up.

great work though. absolutely love last 4 lines!
oh my. thanks for pointing that out XD I shall run off and change it.

thank you though ♡♡
 
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