Time to Wake up Snorlax [Unofficial]

Sterling Malory Archer

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Don't underestimate my eyes boy....they are deadly.

*activates Byakugan*
 

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Don't underestimate my eyes boy....they are deadly.

*activates Byakugan*
Richard Rahl in signature, needs massive updates too.

*As I look at you, quickly through 3 kunai with smoke bombs. When they reach short range, I detonate the smoke all around you, then launch:


Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.



straight at you. I then wait on your counter.*
 

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*as the smoke comes around me I laugh*

I already told you not to underestimate my eyes....

*As your wind jutsu races at me, I spew a giant dragon head at it, they then cancel each other out as I run through the collision into short range in front of you*

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

*Just before they collide with each other, I cause the ground beneath you to start spiraling inwards absorbing you towards the center and throwing you off balance as I run into short range through the explosion*

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

*I you see me appear in front of you, I have already formed a Rasengan in my right hand which I thrust at you as you are unbalanced*

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
 

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*as the smoke comes around me I laugh*

I already told you not to underestimate my eyes....

*As your wind jutsu races at me, I spew a giant dragon head at it, they then cancel each other out as I run through the collision into short range in front of you*

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

*Just before they collide with each other, I cause the ground beneath you to start spiraling inwards absorbing you towards the center and throwing you off balance as I run into short range through the explosion*

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

*I you see me appear in front of you, I have already formed a Rasengan in my right hand which I thrust at you as you are unbalanced*

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
*As soon as the ground bellow me moves, I unleash lightning all around me in short range, stoping any earth jutsu affecting me, but also hitting you since you're now in short range.

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.



While you defend that, I then immediately preform:

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



Blowing myself backwards into long range, as to get away from the mess that just happened.*
 

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"Sitting on a tree, popping my Vicodins and watching my mini tv and my two students fighting to the death for me. Beings crying out of happiness." :3
 

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"Sitting on a tree, popping my Vicodins and watching my mini tv and my two students fighting to the death for me. Beings crying out of happiness." :3
:blush:I shall claim vicotryyyyy


*As soon as the ground bellow me moves, I unleash lightning all around me in short range, stoping any earth jutsu affecting me, but also hitting you since you're now in short range.

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.



While you defend that, I then immediately preform:

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



Blowing myself backwards into long range, as to get away from the mess that just happened.*
-As I see you performing Nagashi i slam my hand to the ground causing the earth to rise up into a dragon form and slam right into you. Straight after the dragon comes out of the earth and before it hits you, I cause the ground behind you to rise up behind you to stop you from being blown backwards. I then do a rasengan charge at you (Like they do in the anime) and thrust a flamed rasengan into your midriff-

(Doton: Dosenkiryu) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse ? Dog ? Bird ? Ox ? Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.


(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
 

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*as the smoke comes around me I laugh*

I already told you not to underestimate my eyes....

*As your wind jutsu races at me, I spew a giant dragon head at it, they then cancel each other out as I run through the collision into short range in front of you*

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

*Just before they collide with each other, I cause the ground beneath you to start spiraling inwards absorbing you towards the center and throwing you off balance as I run into short range through the explosion*

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

*I you see me appear in front of you, I have already formed a Rasengan in my right hand which I thrust at you as you are unbalanced*

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
o_O First of all, in the very first turn, Cookie did nothing against those 3 flying kunais, so he's basically dead. Second of all, you didn't specify as how did you recognize that the wind blast is racing towards you?

Next thing is that, Omnom has expelled an A-Ranked wind, and Cookie has expelled an A-Ranked fire. You'd only need an B-Rank fire to cancel an A-Ranked wind, so Cookie's fire blast would still continue towards you, and as you did nothing about it, your dead, the nagashi won't do anything against a blast like that.

Secondly, if that fire blast was to only cancel his wind, (which was part of it, as it should of continued) There is smoke al around because of the collision, so you didn't give any reason as to how did you recognize his Nagashi. As you ran through the smoke, making you within short range, the Nagashi should have paralized you, since your in short range.

Since he used Nagashi and after immediatelly performed Senpuuken, you don't have enough time to trap him, since the dragon needs 4 handseals, and his Senpuuken doesn't need any.

Another thing with the rasengan, if you haven't learned B-rank ninjutsu, the ninjutsu rasengan, you won't be able to make a flame rasengan, and your not minato, so you won't be able to make the rasengan that fast.

If you guys would like to end this, concluding all the fails and technical issues in this fight, Omnom won.

So, in the end, let's say that all these things did not happen, Omnom can start defending against that earth dragon that's closing in upon him as Omnom is in mid-air flying onto long range.

"Jumps back into Omnom's pocket."

:blush:I shall claim vicotryyyyy




-As I see you performing Nagashi i slam my hand to the ground causing the earth to rise up into a dragon form and slam right into you. Straight after the dragon comes out of the earth and before it hits you, I cause the ground behind you to rise up behind you to stop you from being blown backwards. I then do a rasengan charge at you (Like they do in the anime) and thrust a flamed rasengan into your midriff-

(Doton: Dosenkiryu) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse ? Dog ? Bird ? Ox ? Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.


(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
 

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-As I see you performing Nagashi i slam my hand to the ground causing the earth to rise up into a dragon form and slam right into you. Straight after the dragon comes out of the earth and before it hits you, I cause the ground behind you to rise up behind you to stop you from being blown backwards. I then do a rasengan charge at you (Like they do in the anime) and thrust a flamed rasengan into your midriff-

(Doton: Dosenkiryu) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse ? Dog ? Bird ? Ox ? Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.


(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
*As I am flying backwards through the air, I see the massive earth dragon coming towards me. I quickly do the hand seals and preform


Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.




Blasting and melting your earth dragon, and continuing up to you. As I land in long range, I then preform:

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: User will concentrate on his wind chakra and then send it into the sky. Originally Gaara's technique, different characters will need to perform handseals in order to imbue their chakra in the air. In conjunction with the wind primary sent to the sky, a huge spiraling sphere of wind is created than is strong enough to do major damage to even a Summoning like Gamabunta.



Twice, dropping one directly on to you, and the second one 5 meters behind you.*
 
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Kini Gu, have you mastered ninjutsu? If you haven't, you've lost this match U_U
He wouldnt lose the match. His flame rasengan would just not work :/

As for the mastering of ninjutsu part, I would be more concerned with his mastery of fire, and if mastered, who taught him that technique. Because that would fall under the sensei's fault.
 
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