Hey guys, Need to get this rust off. You make the rules but I will say no customs, let's keep it canon and not too ridiculous :elmo:. Any terrain is fine and I'll be using my Minato bio so use whatever you like.
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Having broken free from Fu's grasp for a moment Keji decided to travel a bit. Whilst walking through a field he saw a man with spiky blonde hair and a cloak that read 4th Hokage. Intrigued by this Keji walked closer and spoke up so the man could hear him Yo, nice hair man I don't see blonde to often, well except for Geets and Trunks occasionally. Anywho what brings you out to these parts? You must know you are close to Ame territory.
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Having wandered for years now Minato had finally broken free from his stupor, having been locked in a genjutsu that forced control of his mind and body he had been forced to roam the lands unable to stop until sleep or hunger forced him to. He had become a mindless beast these past few years and he hadn't even seen the face of the man whom had cast this hell on him. For some reason on this featureless plain his mind and body became his own again...
Bewildered, the first thing he heard from after awakening was a voice...
"Yo, nice hair man I don't see blonde to often, well except for Geets and Trunks occasionally. Anywho what brings you out to these parts? You must know you are close to Ame territory."
Minato stopped and turned.... Could this be the person who had ruined him?.... Minato wasn't thinking clearly and was in a state of survival mode, this man was not safe, not from his wrath.
Without words just a look of rage on his face Minato ran at the man intent on killing him...
As he charged and came into close range he raised his leg in a lateral kick aiming for the man's head intending to seperate it from his body...
(Konoha Daisenkō) - Leaf Great Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Charka cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: Similar to Tsunade’s Sky leg but the user user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send their opponent flying away.
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Charka cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: Similar to Tsunade’s Sky leg but the user user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send their opponent flying away.
OOC: Good luck dude, have fun
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As the man turned Keji tilted his head. The man then ran towards Keji to which he responded by activating his byakugan once within short range the man went to kick Keji's head. Keji in response to this channeled chakra to the target area creating a barrier that would damage the man's leg upon impact. Keji then released a burst of chakra pushing the man back Yo, you didn't even give me your name. said Keji as he began to quickly weave hand seals and cause clouds to form and rain to fall.Having wandered for years now Minato had finally broken free from his stupor, having been locked in a genjutsu that forced control of his mind and body he had been forced to roam the lands unable to stop until sleep or hunger forced him to. He had become a mindless beast these past few years and he hadn't even seen the face of the man whom had cast this hell on him. For some reason on this featureless plain his mind and body became his own again...
Bewildered, the first thing he heard from after awakening was a voice...
"Yo, nice hair man I don't see blonde to often, well except for Geets and Trunks occasionally. Anywho what brings you out to these parts? You must know you are close to Ame territory."
Minato stopped and turned.... Could this be the person who had ruined him?.... Minato wasn't thinking clearly and was in a state of survival mode, this man was not safe, not from his wrath.
Without words just a look of rage on his face Minato ran at the man intent on killing him...
As he charged and came into close range he raised his leg in a lateral kick aiming for the man's head intending to seperate it from his body...
(Konoha Daisenkō) - Leaf Great Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Charka cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: Similar to Tsunade’s Sky leg but the user user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send their opponent flying away.
OOC: Good luck dude, have fun
While Minato was in a rage he clearly saw the man's eyes change. He faintly recognised them but that was a long time ago and his mind was still recovering. As his kick landed on a barrier he felt pain again for the first time in years, it helped to jog his memory and his instincts kicked in. Minato having his leg raised high used him arm for support by touching the ground with his hand. While touching the ground he placed a seal on the dirt and obscured by grass:
( Fūin Hirashin no Jutsu ) - Seal of The Flying Thunder God technique
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the technique through which Senju Tobirama and Namikaze Minato apply the sealing formula, that will allow the use of their trademark space time techniques, to any desired object through physical contact and allowing him to teleport to that desired location through the Flying thunder God Technique and the use of its variations. While Minato carries with him multiple kunais marked with the seal (making the core aspect of his fighting style which revolves around the use of FTG Kunais), Tobirama doesn't. To use the Flying Thunder God technique on kunais, Tobirama has to apply the seal to them though through one use of the technique he can mark up to 5 kunais (this is valid only for kunais and other basic weapons, not enemies or other targets of the seal).
Note: Can only be used by Senju Tobirama and Namikaze Minato bios.
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the technique through which Senju Tobirama and Namikaze Minato apply the sealing formula, that will allow the use of their trademark space time techniques, to any desired object through physical contact and allowing him to teleport to that desired location through the Flying thunder God Technique and the use of its variations. While Minato carries with him multiple kunais marked with the seal (making the core aspect of his fighting style which revolves around the use of FTG Kunais), Tobirama doesn't. To use the Flying Thunder God technique on kunais, Tobirama has to apply the seal to them though through one use of the technique he can mark up to 5 kunais (this is valid only for kunais and other basic weapons, not enemies or other targets of the seal).
Note: Can only be used by Senju Tobirama and Namikaze Minato bios.
Feeling a sudden force of energy push him upwards he went with it, he felt some pain, but it only fueled his rage and instincts. After the man's technique had passed where Minato had placed his seal Minato used his signature technique:
(Hiraishin no Jutsu) - Flying Thunder God Technique
Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A complex Space Time Ninjutsu technique, the Flying Thunder God Technique works almost as a summoning technique. The user basically teleports himself to the location of a given seal mark. This seal mark is place by the ( Fūin Hirashin no Jutsu ) - Seal of The Flying Thunder God technique and can be placed in anything. Normally used in special kunais, thrown by the user, the technique can also be used to teleport to any thing marked with the tag. The technique is not a movement technique but rather simply a pure teleport technique.
Note: Only Minato and Tobirama bios can use this jutsu. It is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu and can only be used 4 times per battle
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A complex Space Time Ninjutsu technique, the Flying Thunder God Technique works almost as a summoning technique. The user basically teleports himself to the location of a given seal mark. This seal mark is place by the ( Fūin Hirashin no Jutsu ) - Seal of The Flying Thunder God technique and can be placed in anything. Normally used in special kunais, thrown by the user, the technique can also be used to teleport to any thing marked with the tag. The technique is not a movement technique but rather simply a pure teleport technique.
Note: Only Minato and Tobirama bios can use this jutsu. It is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu and can only be used 4 times per battle
Appearing where he had placed the seal right back in front of the enemy while he was forming handseals for his technique. Wasting no time Minato pushed up from the dirt right at the man while gathering chakra in his right palm he formed a blade of lightning using the momentum of his body and the momentum of the blade extending outwards he aimed for the man's head:
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
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As Keji blocked the man's kick he noticed a small imprint of chakra on the ground making it a footnote he continued to push his opponent away. As he began to weave his seals the man would reappear next to Keji and as he began his thrust Keji saw the raiton being channeled into his hand. Knowing that what was coming due to his primary affinity to raiton Keji sidestepped right whilst pushing the man's right hand left simultaneously turning his right palm towards his opponent pushing him back into mid-range. Neat skill, ever think about joining Ame?
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Having his hand deflected so masterfully Minato took everything in using his fast reactions and realised he was dealing with someone whom specialised in taijutsu. At the point where his hand was deflected Minato used his fast speed to move from this man's front area as the enemy went to do his palm strike. He moved to behind the man but made sure to be out of reach of his hand's so that he could not deflect like he had before:
(Chiratsuki Kaihi) Flicker Evasion
Type: Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple yet effective Ninjutsu technique, Minato will dash in a burst of raw speed and jump, run or dodge an incoming attack. This is done by taking advantage of his enhanced reactions and his fast intellect when perceiving an attack and combining it with a burst of pure movement speed. Off course this can only be used on a battle ground that enables it and never mid air. It has some limitations though as Minato himself doesn't have a high movement speed but its still enough to mimic what can be described as an "instant" movement. Because of this, if the user wants to dodge or evade attacks from faster bios such as Raikage bios or EIG users, he needs the use of his space time techniques. The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns. Doujutsu users (at least 2T for Sharingan), Sensors or EIG users/masters as well as users with high reaction/reflexes or senses will still be able to track the user although, in some cases, become unable to react.
Note: This version can only be used by Minato and Tobirama bios once every 2 turns, a maximum of 3 times.
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple yet effective Ninjutsu technique, Minato will dash in a burst of raw speed and jump, run or dodge an incoming attack. This is done by taking advantage of his enhanced reactions and his fast intellect when perceiving an attack and combining it with a burst of pure movement speed. Off course this can only be used on a battle ground that enables it and never mid air. It has some limitations though as Minato himself doesn't have a high movement speed but its still enough to mimic what can be described as an "instant" movement. Because of this, if the user wants to dodge or evade attacks from faster bios such as Raikage bios or EIG users, he needs the use of his space time techniques. The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns. Doujutsu users (at least 2T for Sharingan), Sensors or EIG users/masters as well as users with high reaction/reflexes or senses will still be able to track the user although, in some cases, become unable to react.
Note: This version can only be used by Minato and Tobirama bios once every 2 turns, a maximum of 3 times.
With the Chidori spear still active instead of a thrusting motion he did a slashing motion from left to right with the now full size blade (10 metres), intending to bisect his opponent:
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
Minato had heard the man speak before, but his brain was unable to properly put together speech as he had not used it for a long time. Minato was in a blind rage and only his fighting and survival instincts were still intact.
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As he went to strike his opponent would disappear in what seemed to be an instant and reappear behind Keji "Fast." thought Keji as he saw the man's blade headed towards him from his left. Keji gave a Tsk (one of those almost had'em ones) as he released chakra from all of his tenketsu forming a chakra barrier just before the hit. The barrier would briefly stop the chidori spear as Keji immediately began to rotate shattering the blade whilst pushing everything around him into mid range. His rotation would also destroy the ground around him removing the seal his opponent had placed earlier.
As the rotation ended Keji wove a single seal causing four pillars to erupt in each of his opponents cardinal directions just inches from his body in hopes to electrocute the man Dude can you hear me? said Keji as the pillars rose.
Minato thought his victory was at hand, how would this person be able to react in time and use a technique fast enough to defend against his blade. He was surprised when the person exerted visible chakra in a rotation which not only stopped the blade but pushed it back. At the point of when the blade shatters Minato raised his other (left) hand while he formed a jutsu that he had created. He noticed the barrier was expanding outwards and so he pushed forward and thrust with one of his strongest attacks:
(Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80 (100 because of Minato's mastery of Rasengan)
Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball, following the same method, limits and logic behind the original, smaller technique.
Note:Must already know rasengan.
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80 (100 because of Minato's mastery of Rasengan)
Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball, following the same method, limits and logic behind the original, smaller technique.
Note:Must already know rasengan.
This large ball of chakra clashed with the rotation, it briefly held against each other but eventually pushed through (because of Minato's Rasengan mastery his rasengan get +20 damage meaning it would overpower yours in a clash). Minato followed up his first rasengan with a second one in his other (right) hand and slammed both one after one into the man:
(Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (80)
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage, Namikaze Minato. The technique was taught to his sensei, Jiraiya, who then passed it on to Minato's young son, Naruto, years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact.
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (80)
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage, Namikaze Minato. The technique was taught to his sensei, Jiraiya, who then passed it on to Minato's young son, Naruto, years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact.
Minato roared, lost in bloodlust....
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As he was rotating Keji watched as his opponent created a massive rasengan in his left hand while familiar with this jutsu Keji also noticed that this was stronger than most. As the rasengan hit Keji's kaiten he did the only thing he could think of at the time and channeled chakra into his opponent causing him to snakes erupt from the ground only to wrap around and constrict him temporarily immobilizing the man just before impact as Keji jumped back into mid-range.
Now in mid-range Keji wove a single seal forming an orb of water behind himself which upon creation would launch a razor sharp whip into the man's hands and knees.
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As his Rasengan clashed with the Rotation he felt it give way as it dispersed, seeing the man becoming desperate Minato saw the snakes rise from the ground. In a quick and fluid motion he slammed what was rest of his Rasengan into the snakes. The snakes did not react at all to it and simply phased through and he realised that he had been placed under genjutsu.... This man had dared to use Genjutsu on him... rage was not enough to describe the emotion that Minato felt, he had been far past anger but when this person had been folly enough to use genjutsu after what Minato had been through.. something in him just snapped. With his now free hands (as the snakes wrap from the bottom up) he reset his chakra flow:
( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
Rank: C-S (B)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15-40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. A Sage rank user can dispel Genjutsu up to S-Rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu. The technique can only be used once per turn and the user still needs to fully follow the logic as to why he figured out it was an illusion.
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15-40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. A Sage rank user can dispel Genjutsu up to S-Rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu. The technique can only be used once per turn and the user still needs to fully follow the logic as to why he figured out it was an illusion.
Breaking the genjutsu he noticed the man had moved away and had used a water technique. Raising his hand with lightning chakra he sent forth a wall of lightning to combat the opposing jutsu and to give him time to make two clones (Mina & Ato)
(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and himself and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clones, a max number of 4, are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force, returning 10% of its individual chakra to the user. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or normal Chakra Sensing. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones.
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and himself and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clones, a max number of 4, are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force, returning 10% of its individual chakra to the user. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or normal Chakra Sensing. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones.
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As Keji's orb launched whips at his opponent he saw that he had broken free of the gen and released a mass of lightning to defend against his water. As the lightning grew closer Keji used the exact same jutsu to defend and as the jutsu clashed electrical currents and sparks were left in the aftermath.
As his opponent created more clones Keji did the same Dude you have got some serious anger issues! said Keji as and his clones took defensive stances.
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Min--Minato--Ato
Just so you know which clone is on which side.
Also sorry there will probably be less rp on my side for a little bit as directing clones is gonna take up most of my time.
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Min slides an FTG kunai from his sleeve and immediately throws it high into the sky making the trajectory so that it would land in the middle of us but slightly more on your side. Ato at this time moves into mid range behind me (so long range for you). When Min throws the kunai Minato activates his chakra sensing in order to help logistically for this battle and then pulls out his own kunai:
(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.
Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passively.
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.
Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passively.
When the kunai reaches it's downward trajectory Min multiples the kunai 1000's fold covering the battlefield in my kunai (I threw it in a way so that the cloned kunai will hit you guys if you don't move but will stop short of Min and Minato:
(Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After throwing one shuriken or more against their target, the user creates up to a thousand shadow clones of the shuriken (or kunai, senbon, etc, basically any basic weapon) after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger which multiply the damage as its striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal. This is valid for any weapon copied and it has been seen that the copied weapons will also have the tags or markings of the original, like sealing or explosive tags or sealing marks.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After throwing one shuriken or more against their target, the user creates up to a thousand shadow clones of the shuriken (or kunai, senbon, etc, basically any basic weapon) after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger which multiply the damage as its striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal. This is valid for any weapon copied and it has been seen that the copied weapons will also have the tags or markings of the original, like sealing or explosive tags or sealing marks.
After reaching into long range from you Ato will fire off fireballs into the sky:
( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.
Minato was still locked in his head and the words of the Ame ninja could still not reach him.. Minato was bloodlusted and was putting the final pieces in place to end this all...
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Forgot to mention my clones names are K1 and K2 with K2 in front of Min and K1 in front of Ato.
While his opponent was still unresponsive one of his clones would throw a single kunai into the air as another retreated backward into long-range. As this kunai began to descend they multiplied into the thousands Keji would jump back a few meters behind his clones still remaining in short-range of them(3m) and thrust both palms forward releasing a massive amount of chakra enough to send all the kunai flying well into the clouds.
As this was happened K1 being Ato's match saw his opponent enter mid-range and begin to inhale filling their lungs with chakra. As the fist fireball was released K1 would slam his hands on the ground summoning a massive amount of water to intercept and continue to come crashing down on top of Ato if successful; this would slowly start to fill the battlefield with water if left unhindered.
Having hopefully dealt with the kunai, for now, Keji quickly wove six seals as if they had been one causing storm clouds to form and rain begin to fall all whilst K2 kept an eye on the remaining opponents.
Formations should look like this if I'm not mistaken:
Keji
K2---K1
Min---Minato
Ato
P.S. Just noticed what you did with your clones xDMin---Minato
Ato
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Yeah formations are correct.
Also your air palm wouldn't push every single kunai made (it's not wide enough, not an actual wall)., but I will agree that it knocks away all the kunai that would have landed on you guys (way past myself) the rest will have landed in the middle of the field between us.
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Ato seeing the water appear above him moves at high speed backwards to dodge the torrent of water while still firing off the rest of the fire jutsu into the sky as he had planned which would cause storm clouds on the next turn:
(Chiratsuki Kaihi) Flicker Evasion
Type: Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple yet effective Ninjutsu technique, Minato will dash in a burst of raw speed and jump, run or dodge an incoming attack. This is done by taking advantage of his enhanced reactions and his fast intellect when perceiving an attack and combining it with a burst of pure movement speed. Off course this can only be used on a battle ground that enables it and never mid air. It has some limitations though as Minato himself doesn't have a high movement speed but its still enough to mimic what can be described as an "instant" movement. Because of this, if the user wants to dodge or evade attacks from faster bios such as Raikage bios or EIG users, he needs the use of his space time techniques. The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns. Doujutsu users (at least 2T for Sharingan), Sensors or EIG users/masters as well as users with high reaction/reflexes or senses will still be able to track the user although, in some cases, become unable to react.
Note: This version can only be used by Minato and Tobirama bios once every 2 turns, a maximum of 3 times.
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple yet effective Ninjutsu technique, Minato will dash in a burst of raw speed and jump, run or dodge an incoming attack. This is done by taking advantage of his enhanced reactions and his fast intellect when perceiving an attack and combining it with a burst of pure movement speed. Off course this can only be used on a battle ground that enables it and never mid air. It has some limitations though as Minato himself doesn't have a high movement speed but its still enough to mimic what can be described as an "instant" movement. Because of this, if the user wants to dodge or evade attacks from faster bios such as Raikage bios or EIG users, he needs the use of his space time techniques. The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns. Doujutsu users (at least 2T for Sharingan), Sensors or EIG users/masters as well as users with high reaction/reflexes or senses will still be able to track the user although, in some cases, become unable to react.
Note: This version can only be used by Minato and Tobirama bios once every 2 turns, a maximum of 3 times.
While Ato does this Minato and Min both do seperate jutsu at the same time. Min slams his hand on the ground and raises the ground beneath you guys 20 meters up while Minato does one handseal and summons a large lid above you guys:
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.
(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.
Intending to crush you guys from the force of being raised up and the lid being dropped down
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So timeframe would be:
-Keji jumps back and Air palms kunai
-At the same time K2 uses the water jutsu above Ato
-Ato uses flicker evasion and minato and min use their respective jutsu while you use your rain at will technique.
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As the water came crashing down Ato would flicker away to avoid it then continue with his fire; soon after Keji and company would see chakra pool both underneath and above them. The ground beneath them began shake and move upwards which K1 already having his hands on the ground would surge raiton chakra into it neutralizing the earth below stopping it about (10m up?). Simultaneously as the ground shook K2 saw what appeared to be a giant earthen lid appear from the sky; to which he responded by channeling raiton chakra into his right hand and condensed it into a ball. He would hurl this ball at the lid which upon impact would create a massive explosion of lightning disintegrating the lid.
Having finished creating rain Keji pulled the storm clouds down around the two groups whilst separating Ato from everyone else(Keji and co are now 10m above the clouds). The ground under Minato and Min would have also become wet from K1's previous jutsu.
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Hey guys, don't mind, just figured i'd post what i thought on the fight in general here, not as a check, just a bit of a friendly check up. I figured it's better than doing it in a pm, and with Raiden just being back after 4 years (?) that any advice or changes would benefit him.
So to start off, Keji you asked me about the limits on the earth dome, if in doubt, you should always check the wiki, there are images on there that can help you. So if you look
About the fight now. I figured i'd have a quick look over the fight [just having the first coffee of the day, so bit of light reading and all] and see if there is anything else i could help clear up for either party.
1. I was enjoying the fight, and i got to the point of the first use of FTG, when Raiden went to use chidori, i should mention, that because your bio says it has a lightning speciality, you wont need to perform handseals to create the chidori. It's not a mistake but in the future it's just something you might like to know. You can see this in a clip where sasuke goes to fight Orochimaru too, he just forms a chidori and extends it, no handseals required, should make you a little faster haha.
2. Keji, you say about primary affinity, knowing the attack, but rather than that, your byakugan has 3t perception, i support this with reference from the
Tracking:
Byakugan: x3
Sharingan:
1 tomoe: x1.5
2 tomoe: x2
3 tomoe: x3
But i did enjoy that counter of yours, but detail is key, you should mention where you hit on his arm, just to be clear you aren't touching the part with the chidori.
3. Sorry raiden, but you miss used flicker evasion, in the way it's been toned down in the rp. You can use it for linear movements which has been done to keep it fair if you will but "The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns." But i guess going behind him isn't really intricate, but it's worth not pushing it, as people will do anything for a win when something is on the line. Apart from that, its a nice move, keeping with the same attack.
4. The large rasengan hitting the rotation: the problem here keji is, Minato's rasengan gets +20 damage, which that plus 20 would go through after the rasengan breaks your rotation, 20 damage is only c/d rank, but it would still hit you, but honestly, trying to use that genjutsu in that time just wouldn't work. The snakes in the illusion would form below him then shoot up to bind him, but being in close proximity, even if you pulled off the gen, by the time it takes full effect to bind him, you would have been hit by the remaining power of the rasengan.
5. One of the issues you mentioned to me is the flicker evasion technique and it's use in
"Ato seeing the water appear above him moves at high speed backwards to dodge the torrent of water while still firing off the rest of the fire jutsu into the sky as he had planned which would cause storm clouds on the next turn:"
So let me start off by explaining, the flicker evasion technique is literally just a jutsu made to make it so their is a jutsu for fast bios to avoid stuff, ones that are capable of moving at intense speeds in such a short burst. This is so you can follow the rules and use a jutsu to avoid a jutsu. What this means is you are able to move using the flicker evasion while casting techniques.
The one problem you come into now, is the cast time of techniques. Because you're moving in an instant it doesn't make the cast time of your technique instant. For the fire dragon balls, it probably takes you 2 seconds to fire each one up into the air. Where as your movement takes one second. What i'm trying to say, is, you will release the first one, in a burst of movement shoot backwards with flicker evasion and continue casting in that sense, it wont end your technique as you're still maintaining it.
[PS. I hate clones for the fact it makes it so hard to keep track of a fight check]
6. Keji, your reaction time isn't that good, you can't just negate the chakra in the earth like that, the ground would drop, you could just about perceive it, but that counter to earth core doesn't work (in my opinion).
Anyway, from the start, just a friendly check, and i hope this helped with any issues you guys may have had and answered any questions. If you have any more feel free to drop me a message any time. Also, character wise this fight is a great read from both of you with a nice flow, went well with the morning coffee ^_^
So to start off, Keji you asked me about the limits on the earth dome, if in doubt, you should always check the wiki, there are images on there that can help you. So if you look
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, there are two images show, one being Kurotsuchi's use. In this use she forms what seems like a half dome, or as you could put it, a wall, to protect her. It's been a long time since i watched the anime, but from that image, i'd say forming a half dome/wall makes it possible to do what you asked.About the fight now. I figured i'd have a quick look over the fight [just having the first coffee of the day, so bit of light reading and all] and see if there is anything else i could help clear up for either party.
1. I was enjoying the fight, and i got to the point of the first use of FTG, when Raiden went to use chidori, i should mention, that because your bio says it has a lightning speciality, you wont need to perform handseals to create the chidori. It's not a mistake but in the future it's just something you might like to know. You can see this in a clip where sasuke goes to fight Orochimaru too, he just forms a chidori and extends it, no handseals required, should make you a little faster haha.
2. Keji, you say about primary affinity, knowing the attack, but rather than that, your byakugan has 3t perception, i support this with reference from the
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. It just makes it so you can base it on your tracking capabilities from than a form of Metagaming.Tracking:
Byakugan: x3
Sharingan:
1 tomoe: x1.5
2 tomoe: x2
3 tomoe: x3
But i did enjoy that counter of yours, but detail is key, you should mention where you hit on his arm, just to be clear you aren't touching the part with the chidori.
3. Sorry raiden, but you miss used flicker evasion, in the way it's been toned down in the rp. You can use it for linear movements which has been done to keep it fair if you will but "The technique also has some limits in the movement it can produce, which are overall linear, lacking the ability to produce intricate and complicated movement patterns." But i guess going behind him isn't really intricate, but it's worth not pushing it, as people will do anything for a win when something is on the line. Apart from that, its a nice move, keeping with the same attack.
4. The large rasengan hitting the rotation: the problem here keji is, Minato's rasengan gets +20 damage, which that plus 20 would go through after the rasengan breaks your rotation, 20 damage is only c/d rank, but it would still hit you, but honestly, trying to use that genjutsu in that time just wouldn't work. The snakes in the illusion would form below him then shoot up to bind him, but being in close proximity, even if you pulled off the gen, by the time it takes full effect to bind him, you would have been hit by the remaining power of the rasengan.
5. One of the issues you mentioned to me is the flicker evasion technique and it's use in
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"Ato seeing the water appear above him moves at high speed backwards to dodge the torrent of water while still firing off the rest of the fire jutsu into the sky as he had planned which would cause storm clouds on the next turn:"
So let me start off by explaining, the flicker evasion technique is literally just a jutsu made to make it so their is a jutsu for fast bios to avoid stuff, ones that are capable of moving at intense speeds in such a short burst. This is so you can follow the rules and use a jutsu to avoid a jutsu. What this means is you are able to move using the flicker evasion while casting techniques.
The one problem you come into now, is the cast time of techniques. Because you're moving in an instant it doesn't make the cast time of your technique instant. For the fire dragon balls, it probably takes you 2 seconds to fire each one up into the air. Where as your movement takes one second. What i'm trying to say, is, you will release the first one, in a burst of movement shoot backwards with flicker evasion and continue casting in that sense, it wont end your technique as you're still maintaining it.
[PS. I hate clones for the fact it makes it so hard to keep track of a fight check]
6. Keji, your reaction time isn't that good, you can't just negate the chakra in the earth like that, the ground would drop, you could just about perceive it, but that counter to earth core doesn't work (in my opinion).
Anyway, from the start, just a friendly check, and i hope this helped with any issues you guys may have had and answered any questions. If you have any more feel free to drop me a message any time. Also, character wise this fight is a great read from both of you with a nice flow, went well with the morning coffee ^_^
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