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So I'm planning on recording in a few weeks, hell, maybe next week, and this beginning is giving me struggle. Basically I just need you guys opinion on whether I should keep the intro and the chorus or start with the chorus. Try reading it with the chorus and intro and with just the chorus by itself. Red is the intro and blue is the chorus. And I know it's what I think but i need some opinions.....can't wait for you guys to hear the rest of it......
Theme: Resisting...Getting Back Up and beginning who you are
starts @ 0:21
[video=youtube;uqOEo8maNlw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqOEo8maNlw&feature=share&list=FLtmPVikJ-6qKmHuoujw-tzA[/video]
This rap is for......
those who at first was too blind to see
those who were kicked, stomped and beat down
but its not over, so raise yo hands up, repeat after me!
There’s no pen in my hand, but I’m ‘bout to rewrite history
with those words I’ll paint portraits, call it lyrical imagery
can you see the picture, step in my shoes to see clearly
that everything I do is me and I say that sincerely
Theme: Resisting...Getting Back Up and beginning who you are
starts @ 0:21
[video=youtube;uqOEo8maNlw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqOEo8maNlw&feature=share&list=FLtmPVikJ-6qKmHuoujw-tzA[/video]
This rap is for......
those who at first was too blind to see
those who were kicked, stomped and beat down
but its not over, so raise yo hands up, repeat after me!
There’s no pen in my hand, but I’m ‘bout to rewrite history
with those words I’ll paint portraits, call it lyrical imagery
can you see the picture, step in my shoes to see clearly
that everything I do is me and I say that sincerely