Things you would have done differently in the series

[mikeeozua]

How would you alter the series and why? Was it because the fight felt bad or because you want to give development to a character that should have been there?

If I could edit some of them, I would have:
-Put Neji against Edo Hizashi. Seriously this would have given a lot of development to Neji and possibly Hinata as well.
-Given Obito more of a reason for Tsuki No Me, since his motives are fairly weak at the moment.
-Made Tenten keep the Banshoshen (I think that's how you spell it), she would have been a badass with those.
-Put Obito and Madara on seperate battlefields, everything's getting a bit too crowded at the moment.

These are just a section of what I would have done differently, but what would you have done differently in one of the situations throughout the series?

 

[sandy uzumaki]

Make Sakura useful somehow. Lol.

 

[Huzaifa]

Not have the uchias as center of attention.

 

[November]

i would

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[- J AV -]

i didnt want jiraya to die,, so i would change that

 

[Corgi]

Obito not turn evil. Deidara not lose to Sasuke because of plot-shield.

Then I'd be happy.

 

[TheAwesomeOne]

-Requirements for Rinnegan, it seems too "meh"
-Hashirama and Madara flashback fight, we barely saw anything legendary.
-Obito breaking free from Madara's control, atleast Madara should've noticed the hand seal.
-How Kurama is now, he seems too friendly.
-The cancellation on ninjustu Obito can use. In my opinion, it was just a way to troll Edos.

 

[Meee]

Nagato's almost instant change of heart
The Unmasking of Tobi it should have never happened, Tobi should have been Tobi
We should have seen the entire Hashi/Madara fight
Tsunade surviving after being chopped in half

Deidara not lose to Sasuke because of plot-shield.

Then I'd be happy.

Ohh Yeah This too

 

[paratise]

New generation fighting instead of zombies.

I would put Lee and Neji against edo jins With Kakashi and Gai so their hype and efforts showed in part 1 would mean something. "But they are weak for dat!1!" Well; it is up to Mangaka to decide their power levels and improvement.

Kill Hinata instead of Neji. She is one dimentional and useless.

Use edos against k11 in war arc. Like Hizashi vs Lee, Neji vs Kimimaro (matchups can be more interesting this way), Sakura vs Chiyo, Hinata vs Pakura etc. all the possible matchups. Not just for Ino-Shika-Cho who hogged the paneltime a lot.

Give Sakura something more specific instead of her being Tsunade's copy. She does not have chakra reserves of Tsunade, it would be better to play over her intelligence, battle with poison or senbon needles to specific points on human bodies like Haku instead of moar and moar strength.

 

[Meee]

New generation fighting instead of zombies.

I would put Lee and Neji against edo jins With Kakashi and Gai so their hype and efforts showed in part 1 would mean something. "But they are weak for dat!1!" Well; it is up to Mangaka to decide their power levels and improvement.

Kill Hinata instead of Neji. She is one dimentional and useless.

Use edos against k11 in war arc. Like Hizashi vs Lee, Neji vs Kimimaro (matchups can be more interesting this way), Sakura vs Chiyo, Hinata vs Pakura etc. all the possible matchups. Not just for Ino-Shika-Cho who hogged the paneltime a lot.

Give Sakura something more specific instead of her being Tsunade's copy. She does not have chakra reserves of Tsunade, it would be better to play over her intelligence, battle with poison or senbon needles to specific points on human bodies like Haku instead of moar and moar strength.

@Bold, f**k you, nah sorry no offense your cool and all but <3 Hinata <3 shall never die

however everything else you said seems interesting I would have liked K11 to fight Edos and Neji and Lee to back up Kakashi and Guy in the Jin battle

 

[paratise]

@Bold, f**k you, nah sorry no offense your cool and all but <3 Hinata <3 shall never die

however everything else you said seems interesting I would have liked K11 to fight Edos and Neji and Lee to back up Kakashi and Guy in the Jin battle

But his dead was dumb...and made for a pairing. İt was annoying to me and the part Hinata thought Naruto's hand was the worst written line.

OT: Less tnj, Why would someone change his ideals over 3 sentences of blond gimmick?

Kill some kages, Kakashi or Gai. Let the bodies hit the floor.

Madara's character needs to be rewriitten. Worst Villain manga witnessed.
He is not badass; he is butthurt, one dimentional and a bloody wanker.

 

[mikeeozua]

But his dead was dumb...and made for a pairing. İt was annoying to me and the part Hinata thought Naruto's hand was the worst written line.

OT: Less tnj, Why would someone change his ideals over 3 sentences of blond gimmick?

Kill some kages, Kakashi or Gai. Let the bodies hit the floor.

Madara's character needs to be rewriitten. Worst Villain manga witnessed.
He is not badass; he is butthurt, one dimentional and a bloody wanker.

I would rep you but I have to spread some around first. Seriously why did Naruto and Hinata have more reactions to Neji's death when they weren't even on his team?

 

[Paranensis]

it is cool to read all the speculations of people about naruto and plot development, but i am wondering 1 thing... FOR A VERY LONG TIME, no matter the thread on this site or other sites, no matter the discussion.
I wonder if these discussions effect people's life's ... since when i read all of this i just can't come up with arguments about this and that, i just read the damn manga and let it flow into my brain . and accept the stream of a masterpiece written by kishi for us readers i'm proud we can read he's work despite people still flaming on kishi ... then if got a question for everyone did you ever wrote a story thats so character driven like naruto, if you haven't then well ... shut up and let kishi do he's job .

 

[Misconception]

Let's see here i wouldn't have made Tobi Obito... Kakashi would have stayed dead... Minato would be smart and noticing things like his arm still missing... Hashirama more serious... Itachi wouldn't still be so praised even after his 2nd death... Madara not being a complete joker when Hashirama is around... Gokages staying defeated...

 

[shadedcrow]

I would have kept the original style of the manga consistent 3-4 pages of each part of the story being told, not have 2 or 3 weeks worth chapters used for a single person having a really long flashback, fill in characters pasts kin/ginkaku, elaborated on the previous ninja wars, try not to repeat themes excessively

 

[paratise]

I would rep you but I have to spread some around first. Seriously why did Naruto and Hinata have more reactions to Neji's death when they weren't even on his team?

Because teasing pairing lovers was much more important for fanservice than logical reaction.

 

[ssiddiq78]

no edo hokages.
Alive negi and fight his father.
No sakura powerup.
more reasons of obito for tsukiyomi.
Madara'zs obsession with hashi.
Rinnegan unique to nagato.
Madara revive through rinnetensei with ems only and nagato dies using it.

 

[cooldudes]

i would

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Exactly what I would do.

 

[Luv2smash19]

I would of had konahamuru and hinatas sister hanabi as rivals but secret lovers and also have the robot pain not look like garage supplies and pancake batter

 

[kunde]

Make Sakura useful somehow. Lol.

^^this. I share the same thought