Thicker than Blood chapter 1:Naruto Fanfiction

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(This is my first fanfiction and I will make a new chapter if people express positive reactions,
positive critisism is welcome and accepted,
and to all fan boys,this is my vision and story and I dont want people thinking that I'm a fanboy because of how potray the characters)

Thicker Than Blood chapter One

(The story takes place 5 years after The 4th Shinobi World War
Tobi and Madara were killed,the Bijuu were sealed into new Jinchuriki,besides the Gyuki and Kyubbi still residing in there respective humans,Kabuto went into Hiding after his loss to Itachi and Sasuke,and Naruto is living the dream he always wanted,until now)


Naruto stood looking at the memorial stone,staring at his Sensei's name,as he did every day since that dreadful day,still not having the strength to keep his tears from falling down his face,yet he made no look of saddness on his face.

Naruto:"Kakashi-sensei,I swear on the name of Hokage I will stop his maddness."

While walking back to his office and continuing to fill out paper work,his door burst's open with Shikamaru panting trying to catch his breath.

Naruto:"Shikamaru,unless there is a new ramen flavor I dont know about I prefer to not be disturbed."

Shikamaru:"Hokage-sama,we just received word from one of our spys and they confirmed it,they found him!"
Naruto looks up with a more serious look on his face.

Naruto:"When did they confirm it?"

Shikamaru:"The message was sent at 7:32 this morning,and it's 3:00 as of now."

Naruto:Shikamaru,make preperations for my leave, and find Gai-sensei,and tell him i want him in my office in 10 minutes."

Shikamaru:"Do you think that this a wise choice Hokage-sama?"

Naruto:"I am the only one who can stop his chaos,and I will not make other countries suffer by his hands."

Shikamaru:"Yes Hokage-sama."



Before leaving Naruto walks through town,enjoying the smiles and laughter of the fellow villagers while making it over to his house,wishing to see his wife before departing.

Naruto:"HELLOOOOOO!!!!!"

Hinata:"You do not have to yell,I'm right here." Shes says before walking over and hugging him,enjoying his arms pull her closer to him.
Naruto holds her while smiling,remembering the day she finally told him her feelings about him.

(Flashback 5 years earlier)
Naruto,Kakashi,Gai,and Killer Bee stand over Tobi's dead body before sealing its remains,but before the sealing process ends Naruto collapses do to his injuries and go's unconcious.

Naruto wakes up to find himself in a hospital bed,his chest and hands surrounded by bandages,his headband sitting next to him on the table,but all around his hospital room there are gifts,flowers,food,and all types of things sitting around,but the thing that stuck out the most was the raven haired,Hyugga princess sleeping in the chair next to him.
Still confused,Naruto goes into his subconiousness looking for Kurama,hoping for some answers.

Kurama:"Well look who finally woke up,if I didn't know any better I would have thought you died on me."

Naruto:"What happened,and why is she in my room?"

Kurama:"Well to answer your first question,you went unconcious for a couple weeks after our fight with Tobi,so they brought you back to Konoha and fixed you up,and every day people stopped by seeing if you were awake,and when they saw that you weren't they left gifts,every single person came by to see you,from Kakashi and Sakura to Konhamaru to Neji,even the other kages came to check in on you ,and to answer your question about Hinata over there,she was the first person to come see you,she really loves you Naruto,its time to tell her."

Still confused but with a little nudge from Kurama,Naruto woke Hinata up.

Naruto:"Hinata,you awake?"

Hinata:"........Naru..NARUTO!!"

Hinata jumped over and hugged him,telling him how happy she was to see him alive,before finally telling him how she felt about him.
Naruto was a little shocked at first but was also happy,and that's when they finally started dating.
With Hinata helping him aroung the hospital,Naruto and Hinata walked around the Village for a little bit before every single villager came up to him,and thanked him for his duty in the war.

(Flashback Ends)
Naruto finished telling Hinata about him leaving for a few days,kissed her goodbye,and walked back to the his Office to meet Might Gai.

(Back in his office)

Naruto:"Thank you for meeting me down here at this short of time Gai-sensei."

Gai:"Not a problem Hokage-sama."

Naruto:"I called you down here because I need you to watch over the village while I'm gone,your the only one who's strength I trust to do this."

Gai:"There is NO problem that my hot-blooded youth can't solve!"

Naruto:"Right."

At the Village gates,Naruto is wearing his standard orange and black Hokage robe,his ninja tools,and his two Bodyguards at his side,Neji and Shikamaru.


Naruto:"Sasuke.........This Ends Now."





CHapter One End



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I'm going to be completely honest with you..........I love it! Your grammar and format aren't that bad, there's humor, and you've portrayed their personalities very well.
It sucks that Kakashi died, he's my #1 fav. But, it's your story afterall. I think Kurama seems a little too soft, talking about love and all. Lol. Besides that, it's great man. I'm a fan:D
 
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