there is no god, or diety

[izinagi54]

We suffer in the waves of time, and the sublime thing we feel is pain.
I wish I could've taken the knife way back when.
Stuck it into thy throat, and let the life bleed away.

This place is all of fake dreams.
People are not real, you are fake here.
I am nobody, I am a fraud.
This is all just a facade.

I hate this world.
Everyone in it, and I say there is no god.
For where are there are suffering is there anyone here to help them.
Is there anyone here to hold them, and tell them the truth, and comfort them.

Life is just death, we are all diseased.
Now I want to close this chapter.
I wish I could be dead, but suffering sounds more appeasing to these "Gods"

Goodbye to the facade, that everyone puts on to me.

- Blazeraptor54/ Izinagi54

 

[izinagi54]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us

 

[Fair Warning]

was ready to combat hatred of religion....


Nice poem

 

[The Necromancer]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us

Good speech. One would think your best friend stabbed his arm through your 13 year old girlfriend.

 

[Lord of the Kings]

You can't say that God doesn't exsist because you don't have proof. He might be around us everyday but we can't see him.
Adept poem but the bad thing here that you didn't use any poetry rules like Shakespearean or Elizabethan or Italian.

 

[Germanicus]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us

Challenge accepted.

 

[Dreckerplayer]

What a provocative thread title.

That poem sounds like me in early January...tough times...

But anyways, nice poem. I hope you're not planning commit suicide?

Edit: Quit drowning yourself in negativity, it'll only make you more suicidal(TRUST ME). It's not helping at all.

 

[Omaristar]

The things I want to say.

 

[Urda]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us

Bold. You mean *type because you type this up and this is a very negative message. You could have siad "Last poem and I am leaving." You people did the extra for what.

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Nice Poem.

 

[warpathixclan]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us[erQUOTE]
sorry sir you are wrong your'e freind doesn't use you, or he isn't the only one you use your mother to buy yu food, to give you money, you use your freinds all the time. humans give and take, push and pull. you must be a loser if this is how you look at it

 

[izinagi54]

Bold. You mean *type because you type this up and this is a very negative message. You could have siad "Last poem and I am leaving." You people did the extra for what.

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because that negative message is a ****ing truth, and you want to know something no matter how much you deny it, you feel used every ****ing day at one point of another​

 

[Dreckerplayer]

Bold. You mean *type because you type this up and this is a very negative message. You could have siad "Last poem and I am leaving." You people did the extra for what.

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Nice Poem.

gross! your center tags are showing. This is a child-friendly website!!

 

[izinagi54]

this is my final poem, I quit after this one, and I will never pick up the ****ing pencil again, it won't matter in the end, it will not. here is a harsh reality for everyone who visits this page. Just stop making everyone happy, or believing them, because in truth your friends are using you, you are hopeless, and in the end just chalk lines waiting to be drawn, or put in a morgue that is the blessing these "gods" give us[erQUOTE]
sorry sir you are wrong your'e freind doesn't use you, or he isn't the only one you use your mother to buy yu food, to give you money, you use your freinds all the time. humans give and take, push and pull. you must be a loser if this is how you look at it

the apple does not fall far the damn tree.
I don't use many people... I never used someone, and haven't repaid them for their contribution towards me. however, I hate it when people lie... and cheat to get what they want, and I feel that way.

 

[Urda]

because that negative message is a ****ing truth, and you want to know something no matter how much you deny it, you feel used every ****ing day at one point of another

You are getting really negative. We suppose to let go and grow as individuals. See pass reality to reach our dreams to obtain happiness for ourselves and eventually help others.

gross! your center tags are showing. This is a child-friendly website!!

Very immature of you. u_u

 

[The Necromancer]

the apple does not fall far the damn tree.
I don't use many people... I never used someone, and haven't repaid them for their contribution towards me. however, I hate it when people lie... and cheat to get what they want, and I feel that way.

Can i ask how old you are?

 

[Shichi]

For now. Just keep moving forward. Even if that means you walk a path of carnage.


Keep those words close. They help.

 

[Dreckerplayer]

the apple does not fall far the damn tree.
I don't use many people... I never used someone, and haven't repaid them for their contribution towards me. however, I hate it when people lie... and cheat to get what they want, and I feel that way.

Sir, were you born yesterday? This world has always been this way, why're you complaining now?

Surround yourself with people who will be honest with you. You sound very lonely...and a freshman in high school.

Edit: Kichiro, take the brick out your a*s. There ALWAYS has to be that ONE pompous stiff back that has to bring up 'immaturity'. The first person to use the word 'immature' on a Naruto fan-site is sadly confused.

 

[Made in Heaven]

Dat thread title

Mice poem

 

[abcplay57]

Don't worry. You'll pass through this phase of your life in time.

 

[izinagi54]

Can i ask how old you are?

17 and a grad, I have no future left, and got used. I feel used, I got told I was nothing, and before you go off, you think I am trolling? no... no no I am not trolling cause every ****ing day I have a friend that cusses me out, and the only ****ing family memeber of my ****ing family that ****ing wants me, ****ing cusses me out, and is a cynical bastard towards me. so before you go off, and say shit. I grown ****ing tired of life